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Penname: ShinyWinchesterGun [Contact]
Real name: Cat
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Summary:

What happens when Dean can't handle all the fighting and leaves Sam and John to battle it out?  The trio may become a duo if Sam and John can't find Dean before its too late.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 8279
[Report This] Published: 23/03/07 Updated: 24/04/07


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to the Jungle

Yeah, Dashboard Confessional...hmmm...but yes...how could anyone steal Dean's car?! That's horrible! I hope they get it back...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Follow Your Feelings

This is getting really exciting!!! Great chapter!!!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Truth is Revealed

Poor Sammy now! Dean better get rid o' that yellow-eyed demon soon...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Decisions

This is terribly suspenseful...excellent work!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: Revelation

Yay! They escaped...excelente...I wonder if they are going to perform an exorcism on Dean???

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Nightmare...Ended

Ahhh! Dean died?! Yes...sequel...PLEASE!!!!!! Though this was a wondrous story, Dean can't die!!!

 
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, this is very interesting. I definitely like how it resolves somewhat at the end (bit of a chick-flick moment, huh??) but anywa...nice job. Always love your work!!!!

 
Summary: The imagination of a 14 year old girl can be a dangerous thing
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 13978
[Report This] Published: 11/04/07 Updated: 07/08/07


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter one is indeed enjoyed! This is interesting, and rather unique because of the fact that you thought of it in class...!!! Good job!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

More to come, yay!!! Hmmm...daevas are pretty serious...could this 14-year-old be controlling one...hmmm...I have a theory! I'll use lots of exclamation marks later if I get it right, and then you'll know...ANYWAY, this story is great! I like how you're focusing on Amelia a lot and including her in the story as more than a victim (in a hinty way?) Hmmm...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooooh...this is getting suspicious...my theory still holds...!!!! Hmmm...I like how this is sort of a mystery, and you're spreading it out over a span of chapters instead of one big all-will-be-revealed bit...nice.

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ha....my theory is somewhat right....love this so far! Great suspense, and I love how it's not a usual "creature" that's doin' the bad stuff...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes, very much enjoyed...lovely confusion...ahhh, poor Sam and Dean. This is such a good story...*sigh* wondrous story goodness...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oooh...foreshadowing!! Cool, Sam has empathy...no wonder he's emo...!!! Love the angst!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ahhh! That was so COOL! And creepy, but COOL! The description in this story is so vivid, I can picture it like it's alive! That's really scary. I don't think I'd want the creepy chick alive...'kay, that's gonna give me nightmares... 

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow! I love how you threw in the fire there! Great connection, great twist! Definitely enjoyed the chapter! Gosh, those pictures you describe are too freakin' realistic-sounding...scariness...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, this is just so fun...fun story, not fun for the characters...y'know, fun...yes, well. This is awesome! I love everything you're doing with this story, like the empathy, and drawing it back into season one, and Amelia not fitting the pattern an' all...really cool.

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Woo-hoo! A sequel sounds awesome...and more chapters! Me likey more chapters...love the cliffhanger on this one! Hope for more soon!

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryOne tear, one flinch -  they were only the tip of the iceberg.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2443
[Report This] Published: 22/04/07 Updated: 22/04/07


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow! This is incredibly sad and poignant. I love how you create such a misery-filled stream of consciousness. Dean is obviously going through a lot here, and it's really tangible. Beautiful job! 

Author's Response: Thanks SWG- I dont think we get to see/hear whats going  on in Dean's head- unless its showing on his face- this just felt right. Glad you like it!

 
Abomination by Rae666 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 426]
Summary:

NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.

 

Abomination

Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131
[Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 15: Fly By Night

Oh, yay! I'm really glad that they escaped...can't wait for more! And yes...Harry Potter would be absorbing...

Author's Response: Very very absorbing... I hated putting it down and now I wanna read it all over again. But now I'm hoping to get more writing done :D

 
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Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 16: Faint

Oh excellent! This is so interesting to see Dean with powers...I like your inclusion of a flashback, too. Great job. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I love flashbacks... throw 'em in whenever I can. He he... there's another flashback to come too :D

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 17: Fall Into Sleep

This is a good chapter for transitioning...I REALLY liked it! I'm very interested in this great mystery surrounding Dean's power...can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it... I'm hoping I can get to the part that explains why he has it.

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 28/08/07 Title: Chapter 18: Far Away

Oooooh! This is great, Rae! I'm really looking forward to finding out what you have in store for the boys...!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you :D I feel sorry for the Winchesters... random thought just occured to me but if I had to go through every they go through in the show and in fanfictions... I'd break down, completely... Poor lads.

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Abomination

Ooooh, wow! Awesome beginning, Rae! Love this! Poor Dean...being called a freak isn't enough? Now he's an abomination?? Ohhhhh....can't wait to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Most review replies I write nearly always start with some variation of the words Thank you... it's a curse... But I'll say it anyway - Thanks!!! Poor Dean! 'least he's not the only freak in the family.

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Fight the Good Fight

Oh my! What a terrifying vision!!!! Well, we all know Sam would never willingly hurt anyone...so there has to be a reasonable explanation for this...hmmm...I like how your first chapter was sort of a peek into the future, and now this is the story! Makes it veeeeery climactic...great job!

Author's Response:

What's really scary is I can remember writing that... I can actually see myself sitting with my notebook in front of me and my headphones blaring into my ears listening to 'Fight the Good Fight' over and over and over... again. lol.

The problem with the first chapter is I didn't actually have a story then, lol - just an idea, so it was kinda funny and evil at the same time trying to get back to that point in time. He he. Okay... enough blabbering... :D

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Fell On Black Days

Awww...I love this brotherly stuff between them...it seems like they never have "moments" but it's always great when they do. And these monologues??? It's soooo the demon...crazy fugly freak...love how omnipotent you make him...great stuff... 

Author's Response:

I love brotherly moments... I never realised how much I loved them until I got in fanfiction but yeah.. I love watching, reading and writing them. :D

I'm actually really twisted and the monologues - yeah I really enjoyed writing them :D I have a soft spot for the demon... in a weird sort of way. He did make the Winchesters who they are after all. I mean I don't like the guy... just... I like to hate him!