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Real name: Alison Status: Member Member Since: 05/01/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by alena Summary:
Underneath the desert, something's stirring. An ancient monster, demi-gods and spirit dancers and more twists than you can shake a rock-salt-loaded-sawn-off at: Can our intrepid heroes figure out who's on their side and who's sneakier than a used-car salesman? Or is this the end of the line for the Winchesters...
Round Robin story, dedicated with HUGEST thanks on Thanksgiving to the folks that make this site so awesome. Whump, angst and guns galore! Categories: Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 53485 [Report This] Published: 26/11/09 Updated: 20/01/10
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Date: 26/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Up Snake Creek, by calUK Fantastic start here! I'm thoroughly hooked. There are some wonderful; brotherly exchanges and hints of what is lurking out there waiting for the boys is very intriguing FIVE whole days before the next chapter!!!!! Can't wait Author's Response: Thanks hun! It's so great to finally be posting this story - enjoy the rest! Cal
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Date: 01/12/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Mountains Washed Away, by Cookie6 Yeehah! Chapter two- I've been droppping in & out to see whewn this was posted. It has been worth the wait. Poor old Dean- ankle and head injuries to contend with at least he recognised Sam needed the real info on them. Out for the count and waters rising- what more could I ask for? Nice interchanges between the brothers, twitchy cliffhanger to tease and I'm still hooked for the next chapter..... Author's Response: What a lovely thing to say! You been waiting for us? Wow...We are very excited to know we are impacting on our readers in such a way. What more could you ask for? Girl, we've barely started! Strap in and hold on!! Thank you so much for your terrific praise in your last comment, I am humbled and grateful. Cookie
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Date: 03/02/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Up The Rabbit Hole, by RoweenaC Hello there Ilka! Nice Chapter- lots of hurt and soggy Dean and brotherly moments. Poor Dean is really taking a pasting and I liked the way Sam keeps supporting Dean while allowing his brother to keep up his big brother image. The escape up the decomposing pile of victims- lovely image and followed by the cold swim fest... and you've left them very cold,wet and surrounded by floating thingies.... Thanks for a great chapter Ilka
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Date: 03/02/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Thing that Should Not Be, by Janger Whew Jane- you finally got them out of the cave, but there were a few heart -stopping moments along the way! I'm going to need a nice calming cup of tea after all that trauma and skin of their teeth escaping.... Great chapter and it's good to see the brothers' banter and snark surviving their misadventures. Author's Response: Hi Alena, Yeah, they made it out and more or less in one piece!! You go chill with your cup of tea whilst relaxing for the rest of the story, cause honest we wont hurt em again!! (You can trust us - NOT!!) I'm delighted you enjoyed the great escape and it'll take more than a cave monster to make them lose their snark!! Hope your back's feeling a bit better, take it easy hun! Jane x A Trip To The Country (or: There's Different Kinds Of Werewolves) by IAmLegion Rated: K
 [Reviews - 35] Summary:
Because only the Winchesters could find this much trouble in a barn. Take a spoonful of hurt, a pinch of fugly and a pixie or two, shake it up with a bucketload of angst, and what do you get? The countryside, Winchester style! Categories: Drabbles, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 698 [Report This] Published: 18/02/10 Updated: 25/02/10
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Date: 19/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Frenzy, by calUK What a 'barnstorming' start Cal! Nothing like a bit of mangled Winchesters to set the tone and the images are strong and haunting. Thanks for organising us, Alison
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Date: 19/02/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Artery, by RoweenaC You've created a lovely image of impending menace and truly gross drooling here Ilka! Poor Dean in peril defenceless.... just coming round and about to meet this.... Perfect!!
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Date: 21/02/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Clamp, by Birdie Lovely Bev- You've set the scene beautrfully and are starting to put them back together and I really liked the way you sneaked the 'pixie' into your chapter! I'm just admiring the images...with those eyes and.... move over Pixie it's my turn!!! Alison
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Date: 22/02/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Gushing, by Bulletbabe Great chapter Louy! I loved the description of Sam- so kicked puppy. I'm so glad you joined this little adventure- your writing is brilliant as ever.
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Date: 23/02/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Snowbound, by Isis_girl Lovely chapter Tallie- You've got a great balance of pathos and brotherly reactions.
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Date: 26/02/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Corporeal, by Janger What a great ending Jane! This is a wonderful mix of angst and humour- it's very Dean and Sam. Summary:
Dean has a concussion and makes a confession to Sam that he might regret later. I felt the need for a little soft sappy Dean, Hope you enjoy it. Categories: One Shots Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1932 [Report This] Published: 10/01/13 Updated: 10/01/13
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Date: 13/01/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ooh a longer story- I nearly missed this. I loved the interaction between Sam and Dean here. You have a great balance of pathos and humour and give a lovely picture of the brothers' relationship- both caring but still definitely blokes! I can just see the teasing Sam could inflict on his brother after the 'hot' confession. Well done Bev! Author's Response: Hey hunny, I'm glad you enjoyed it, it was just a bit of fluff but I do love dopey Dean. Bev xx Summary: I write a drabble challenge over on FF,net and this week the challenge was to include the phrase 'This might sting!.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 98 [Report This] Published: 13/01/13 Updated: 13/01/13
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Date: 13/01/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Good use of the challenge phrase Bev! Poor Sam catching a blow from painstruck Dean. I winced at the description of those claw marks. Keep on writing Bev you are always worth reading Author's Response: Hey hunny, thanks for the review, hope you're feeling a bit better
Bev x Summary: I am a player in a weekly drabble challenge over on FF.Net and a while ago the challenge word was Water. I posted my 100 words and a couple of kind reviewers asked for a little more of the story. So here is the extended version. I hope it hits the mark and thank you to those who read, reviewed and requested more.
Categories: One Shots Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 3000 [Report This] Published: 16/01/13 Updated: 16/01/13
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Date: 24/01/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow! This is a fantastic little story Bev. I really like your OC and the way the characters' interactions flow believeably throughout. Trust Dean to be a ladykiller even plastered with blood! ... And those lovely baby 'greens'... sigh...
Author's Response: Hi my friend thanks (smiling here) I liked her too. She was sorta 'together' to say she'd been nearly eaten! Oh and Dean's eyes... Yumm! Bev x Summary: I play a drabble challenge over on FF.Net and this weeks challenge word is Corner.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 92 [Report This] Published: 20/01/13 Updated: 20/01/13
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Date: 24/01/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice one Bev! Trust Dean to feel like that about his pride and joy!
Author's Response: Hey Hunny. Yup our boy loves his car. Bev xx |
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