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Real name: Shannon Bean Status: Member Member Since: 10/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Shannondoah
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Reviews by Shannondoah Summary:
Making a deal with a Demon can be an unseemly business. Especially when you discover that the deal you've made has endangered your sons in ways you hadn't foreseen. Now they've grown up apart and unaware and things need to be set right. General AU oddness.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 44413 [Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 07/03/07
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Clever comment about Days of Our Lives. I also like the remark about Jess being way out of Sam's league (like in the pilot). Oh no! Not again! Dean shows up and Jess dies. Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to throw little things from the show into the story, just to show how the AU could have run parallel to the 'actual' story we know and love! Glad you noticed!
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Geez, you made me feel uncomfortable and I was only reading about meeting the family. Missouri---yeah!!! Author's Response: Sam's family did turn out to be a leeeetle bit scarier than I'd originally intended! Well, his grandma, anyway!
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Yay Missouri---love that gal! Dean on the ceiling! I can't believe it! This story is wonderfully unpredictable! What a ride! Author's Response: I'm really glad you're not finding it predictable because I always dread getting to that stage in any of my stories! I worry that it might happen if I write too much SN... But for some reason I can't stop writing SN...!
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Once again, just like in the show, Sam leaves Dean. At least I can take comfort in knowing they must get back together or there wouldn't be 3 chapters left. :-)
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 How do you sleep at night with your brain twisting stories? It doesn't matter tome because I love the results!
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Date: 24/12/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Incredible! There are so many good one-liners and so much weighty angst. Luuuuv it!
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Date: 24/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Tag Scene Not too sweet for me. I always like a little dessert after a good meal and this hit the spot! Summary:
WARNING: Death of canon character assumed throughout story. Read at your own risk. Spoilers: Season 2 Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2358 [Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 10/01/07
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Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Cost of Retribution Wonderful! I can understand Sam not wanting to return to his 'normal' life. He isn't the same person who dreamed those dreams. His goals are different now. *waves* Hi there!!! Happy to see you liked it. This one doesn't get much action *lowers voice and whispers* I suspect its because its a death fic. ;) So, I'm thrilled when someone is willing to give it a chance :D. Thank you so much for reading and leaving feedback--I very much appreciate it! Summary:
He was only eleven, but the events of that long gone summer would change Dean Winchester's life forever.
Categories: General, Wee!chester, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Something Lost Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 37085 [Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 07/05/07
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love that you describe Dean's responsibility for Sam with a loving perspective---like it isn't a duty, but an act of enduring love. "ya huh"---perfect kid line! The interaction between the four kids is so cute! It doesn't drive me crazy reading it like it does when my children act it out. I wonder why? I like that you portray John in a sympathetic manner. He has regrets about the way he's raised his children, but has done his best and has made the choices he has for their survival and out of love.
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 You've done an exquisite job explaining the conflicting emotions of Dean and Kerri! I don't think I've read a more stirring introspection of Dean's hopes and fears. The watcher is an interesting character. You've set up the story perfectly! Can't wait to see how it unfolds!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I think I enjoy the chapters of explanation better than the chapters of action. You have such a gift for putting the right words together to capture my emotions! I especially like the phrase "children of tragedy." It describes them perfectly and explains their life in a soul-weary way. Good balance between the responsibilities that weigh them down and their struggle to be kids. I like to see them intereact with one another as children do. The words they use when they argue and their mannerisms are clearly those of children, especially Sam's and Ev's. It enables us to see the contrast in Dean as he is and as he sees himself. I love to see Dean through Kerri's eyes. She has such an acute perception of him. She's good for him!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 It was great to get a peek inside Sam's head! Well-done! I love the mystery and drama you've begun this story with! It's good to see it continue throughout!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I never thought of The Pied Piper being scary before, but when you think about someone leading all the children from a town it really is! What a perfect story to hint about the Watcher. Very clever of you! I totally love the description of Sam's s'more covered face, especially when you add bits of napkin to it!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Sam didn't do what Ev's going to say he did? Hilarious! So was Dean's remark. Ooooh, spooky!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The Harrison's house sounds wonderful! Is it based on a real house or one in your creative world? How cute that Sam is trying to be like Dean when he comforts Ev. I'm glad the kids are calling their dads. I was afraid Dean would get too caught up in trying to be perfect and make the mistake of dealing with all this himself. Good cliff hanger!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Even more creepy! I love the suspense!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I'm so tense! The suspense is killing me!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Oh no! I hate this! Well, actually I like this, but I hate it at the same time!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I think these kids are braver than I would be. Excellent job capturing their fears and feelings!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 I like the line about not needing to be quiet when your cover was blown. Smart thinking! The thoughts Kerri has about John and her dad are so perceptive. What a cunning spirit!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 I love it! So much action and still deep thoughts!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Each of these kids take upon themselves such huge burdens. It just makes me angry at their fathers. But without foolish fathers there would be no story.
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Very strong, powerful words---"if Dean were dead the world would know it." What a touching sentiment!
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Oh no!!! Why can't they just stay in the house and be frightened 7 year olds?! I want to cover my eyes with my hands, but then I wouldn't be able to finish reading. It's like watching a movie when the heroine walks into the dark room and you know the monster is there.
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 YAY! Good conquers evil yet again! This has been such an intruiguing and suspenseful story I almost hate for it to end. *sigh* |
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