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Real name: Shannon Bean Status: Member Member Since: 10/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Shannondoah
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Reviews by Shannondoah Summary:
What would seemingly pull a family together has pulled the Winchesters apart. Now, one is becoming obsessed, another disappearing into darkness, and the last trying desperately to repair the damage made by his mistakes.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8228 [Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 12/08/07
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Date: 06/06/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two Okay, Sam left because he wanted to protect his family. But I still think he's being a selfish bastard. John, too. Summary:
A job involving a water wraith leaves Dean questioning reality as well as his sanity.
Categories: Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 4128 [Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 12/08/07
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Part One Wow! Is Sam the wraith? why is Mary there? What's happening? I love your gift for description! Your words wrap around me and transport me into your story where I become the characters.
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two Oh my hell! Is Dean dead? Is this some freaky experience where Dean is alive because he doesn't know he's supposed to be dead? Is that why he saw his mother and why he sees water everywhere?
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three Amazing! This was written so brilliantly that it had me thinking first one brother was dead then the other. A fabulous piece! Summary:
We all have fears lurking in the dark. After a hunt goes wrong, Sam comes face to face with his biggest one...losing Dean. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 10694 [Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07
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Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great job! Marilyn Castle and Marshall were a nice change! Summary: Dean's POV of hearing from Cassie: during Route666
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 524 [Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great job! I like that you compare Sam's leaving for college to Cassie's asking him to leave. Keep up the good work! Summary: Everything is not as it seems. with urban legends out of control and a powerful demon on the loose, the boys find themselves up against more then just the supernatural.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadow Stalker Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45624 [Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 23/01/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Too funny! I'm so glad you brought back Ed and Harry. They were a riot! Also, I look forward to reading more urban legends. I've never heard of the Hodag. I guess class is now in session.
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Another funny chapter! The action was great---the humor was awesome! I love the way Dean counts to three.
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 This is an interesting story. I like that the creatures aren't acting the wya the professionals know they should, but are behaving the way the amateurs think. Good twist!
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Wow! Now the Feds can find them, too. This is getting tense!
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Really funny comments about Buffy and John Edwards! I'm going to love this story!
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Nice moment between Sam and Dean---not chick flicky, but it gets their points across. Damn those Hell Hounds! They just love to make trouble.
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 OMG! Dean really stepped in it this time! What a fantastic way for him to discover the shadow possessing Sam. Excited for the next chapter!! Ed and Harry really bring out the best quips in Sam and Dean. I love it that you brought them back! Thanks for the info on the supernatural beings. I will definitely look them up.
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Fantastic action! I love how you describe the thoughts of your characters so perfectly. Gutsy ignoring John's call. Are you going to use the Hell Hound website to bring down the shadow demon?
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The shadow's parting words are creepy. Excellent!
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The plot thickens. this is getting better and better!
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I never thought I'd hear myself say this, but YAY the Hell Hounds! A Tulpa Sam?! I thought maybe they'd attach a Tulpa to the shadow demon and create a way to kill it, but this is much better! That's why you're the writer and I'm the reviewer. Pefect way for Tulpa Sam to make his appearance!
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Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 I was impressed by the difference between Sam and Tulpa Sam expressed by Dean. Love this story!
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Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Well, that backfired. I wasn't expecting it to happen like it did. Good job! Keep me guessing!
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Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 That whole Marco Polo thing was a riot! This story is taking lots of twists. Good thing I love roller coasters!
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Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Stupendous! No time---gotta keep reading!
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Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Gotta love those Hell Hound boys! There was so much humor and action in this chapter---fun reading!
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Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 I didn't even consider Sam thinking the Tulpa was a view into demon Sam. Ingenius! Summary:
Making a deal with a Demon can be an unseemly business. Especially when you discover that the deal you've made has endangered your sons in ways you hadn't foreseen. Now they've grown up apart and unaware and things need to be set right. General AU oddness.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 44413 [Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 07/03/07
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Judging by this first chapter I'm going to love this story! It's haunting and skillfully written.
Author's Response: Ooh, glad you liked it! When I first posted this story on ffnet the site crashed after I uploaded the Prologue and it had to sit there for dayyyyyys without chapter 1! It really does start to make sense once you start reading chapter 1...!
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Dean a fireman---how perfect! That is one heckuva introduction! I'm intrigued to learn more about all the fires in Sam's past and what happens to the boys next. Author's Response: Heh heh heh... Yeah, Fireman!Dean proved to be quite popular... If you're going to be rescued from a fire, who else would you want to do it?? |
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