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Real name: Shannon Bean Status: Member Member Since: 10/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Shannondoah
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Reviews by Shannondoah Summary:
During a hunt concerning missing people who actually reappear, Dean ends up being kidnapped and awakens tied to what looks like a medical table, when Sam tracks him down will that be the end of it, or is the dark force in play determined to finish what it started?
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 72396 [Report This] Published: 21/04/07 Updated: 25/09/07
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 17: Death Wow! Shocking statement to end with!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 18: Wake Up Call Dean's avoidance of retelling his dream was perfect Dean Winchester! "When you were a Winchester, it seemed anything bad was possible"---isn't that the truth!
Author's Response: HI!!! Thank you so much! I'm really enjoying going through these reviews, it's such a confidence boost and I really love it!!!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 19: Brotherly Love, Brotherly Hate So much happening. I can't read fast enough. I was hoping that Sam wouldn't shoot in the stomach, but it makes for a better story.
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 20: Time I like your observation of time. It's so true. The bike riding memory was nice. I like that you add those personal, normal things into your story. Author's Response: Time is amazing and so bleeding annoying, there's never enough of it. :) And the bije riding memory... I love adding little tidbits from the past, like you say, makes it a little more personal. :) Thanks!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 21: Stalling Wow! So completely unexpected! Those demons go to a lot of fuss for one Winchester! They're like the A-Team.
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 22: Freud’s Theory Of all the names to choose for your villainess, you chose the only one that would send Dean for a loop. So, will we find out what's so wrong about Dean's stomach? Is it magically healed? Author's Response: I suddenly discovered looking back that she didn't have one and I dunno... Mary just sounded so.... right >:D and evil!!! As for Dean's stomach... oops, I really think I forgot to cover this later on, even though I probably swear I'd give answers - so I'll tell you now. It was because of Nex... because part of Nex was working it's 'magic' on Dean, fixing him getting him ready... I hope that's an okay explanation :)
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 23: Frustration Kill them both! Who both?! Not Sam and Dean or Sam and Bobby. Too much suspense!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 24: Voices My two favorite parts are when Sam goes in guns blazing just like Dean would have and also when Sam says Dean's name and feels the need to say it as much as possible. The emotions in those two examples are powerful! If I were stalking Dean I'd definitely make the shower a priority! Author's Response: I like it when Sam can take control too :D And I also like it when Sam shows how much he loves Dean. I love Sam! Sam's great! And Dean + shower = me wanna be there. We've seen one show scene with him that I can think of and we got to see his head in a towel and that's it... Sam on the other hand... grrr... >:)
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 25: Nex I think poor Dean gets handcuffed more by Sammy then by the cops and bimbos put together. Nex sounds intriguing. I'm interested to know more! Author's Response: But handcuffs are fun! >:) And Nex was fun... kinda, lol. Annoying and fun!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 26: Truths Oh, I love the pitiful, broken Dean almost as much as the kick-ass Dean. You keep the characters diverse and human, which is wonderful! THANK YOU! The reason that's in capitals is because I'm in a debate over on supernatural.tv about characters being real more than ideal. I like real and human :D So thank you! And I always feel dead guilty for making Dean like that, bless him.
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 27: Bittersweet Feelings This isn't going where I thought it would---an unexpected delight. I'm really loving this story! Great job!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 28: Verses I love the poems! Very mysterious and creepy. This just keeps getting better. Every time I think you've reached the top you go higher. Author's Response: I like poetry... I love it. And thank you! I'm so glad you're not bored of this yet!!!!!!!! :D
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 29: Needing Out Oh no! Not the knife! Maybe he'll use it on himself to try to vanquish Nex? What do you have planned for him?
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 30: Runaway Oh my stars! Too busy reading to write anything else!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 31: Broken Man Claim humans as pets---good line. I did think you would kill Dean or at least mortally wound him, but miraculously resurrect him. It's funny how the yellow-eyed demon pops up to aid the Winchesters. 'The enemy of my enemy is my friend.' Author's Response: Can you imagine how fun it would be to have you're own pet human? Oh wait... they're called children, aren't they? Damn... someone beat me to it. I can't kill Dean! Well actually past writings has taught me I can but no more! I cannot kill him again! :) And how true that phrase it, it's wonderful!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 32: Trust The explanation Dean gave Sam about the importance of the dagger was very good, made sense to me. I hadn't thought of it in that way.
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 33: Reunited Don't be iffy about this chapter---it's incredible! And so is the banner. I ususally read stories with banners first because they catch my eye. Nothing grabs my attention like a photo of Dean. And the words are cryptic enough to spark curiosity. I love Bobby---he's so dry. He has the whole dead-pan thing down to an art! The revelation that John did exactly what the demon and Nex wanted him to do is brilliant! Hadn't thought of that.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I miss banner making :( *sniffles* I miss loads of things since starting Uni. I'm always happiest when making something, whether writing, drawing... or playing with pc programs :D I have a veeery dry sense of humour. I'm a little sick and twisted and I love adding the dry humour to stories. Plus Bobby is just so brilliant! Kripke and the writers have done an amazing job with the characters that I really like borrowing.
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 34: M'fine You've captured Bobby as well as the Winchesters! Excellent job! Uh oh, there's that pesky tension build up again. Author's Response: Thank you! I think when writing fanfictions that's one of the best compliments to receive. :)
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 35: Doctor Doctor Nice line from Folsom Prison Blues. You're sneaky! Love the "it's all bad cops here!" Bobby so rocks! Another great cliffhanger! Woohoo!
Author's Response: He he - I can't help it, certain lines stick out at me and make there way into my writing. It's the writers fault! :) The cop line... I've no idea where that came from but it really worked and I'm glad I gave it Bobby 'cause like you say, he totally rocks!!! On a side note - I'm a sugar high and I'm really bouncy!
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 36: Yes Sir. No Sir. Three bags full sir. Once again---yay Bobby! Boy, you've created one heck of an irritating villain with Nex. he's not only evil, he's annoying. Author's Response: I've noticed that Bobby is right up there with the Winchesters, lol... Aww bless him, he's brill. And Nex... you gotta have an annoying one! lol
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 37: Mary, Mary Ooohhh! What a spooky nursery rhyme! You put the Grimm Brothers to shame. This is too good! Part of Nex has possessed five different people? I know, keep reading and find out. Author's Response: I was really bored at work, made it up and decided... ooh, I need to include this, lol. Not so much possessed five different people, he was split into five and they ended up being seperated... all finding their way to Dean >:)
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 38: Thou Shalt Not Kill No! Yes! What?! Is all of Nex in Mary? Aghh! What just happened?
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 39: Sit… Paw… Beg… Good boy NO Dean! Love Bobby's comment that Dean needs to learn when he needs to be saved. Also love Sam's thought about Bobby being the one who taught Dean to kick in doors.
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 40: There's a thin line between right and wrong... Well, now at least we know how to kill Nex. And if it means also killing a person, Dean's the one to kill. The man has more lives than a cat. But I'm certain you'll have a clever way to save him. He he - good news... we can kill Nex.... bad news - means we gotta kill Dean too >:) Can you imagine Dean as a cat? That's the type of kitty I'd take home with me, bless.
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 41: Dirkitsville I think I've lost count of all the little surprises and twists you've popped on me. Amazing job! |
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