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Real name: Shannon Bean Status: Member Member Since: 10/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Shannondoah
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Reviews by Shannondoah Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 What a cruel twist. Charlie is telling Sam all about himself. Nothing like having the enthralled attention of the man you're going to torture before you cut him into gound beef! I especially like his concern for Sam's cough. Charlie must be in heaven! The blood-licking is a gruesome touch. EEEwwww!
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Yay Dean! It's so sad to read dean's despair over Sam's injuries and Sam give up on Dean rescuing him. Even though Dean keeps promising to save Sam, he's already too late. Maybe you can give the Winchesters the name of your psyciatrist. They're obviously going to need one after this. On second thought, forget it. They'll need a therapist whe's good at what they do.
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 OMG! Even reading this for the second time gives me the shivers. Charlie made several comments about revenge changing people. Is that what started him on his path to insanity? Was he a hunter at one time? Or always just a sadistic psycho?
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The dream is great! I'm acquiring quite an education on medieval tortur devices. I like that you ended this chapter with Dean's usual line.
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Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 This is one of my favorite stories of all time! I thought I remembered everything about it, but as I re-read it I find that I've forgotten a lot. For instance, I forgot the conditions of the wager and that revenge was a key point.
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Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The scene between Sam and Dean is so heartbreaking! You convey the anguish and shame Sam feels so exquisitely.
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Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 I think this is one of my favorite chapters. Dean trying to trick the demon is a clever idea, especially imitating John's summoning.
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Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 I'm still so impressed with all the little twists that you've put in this story! Including characters from the SN episodes is always a fun surprise.
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Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Okay, I lied. This is definitely my favorite chapter! Dean makes a home for Sam and Sam stops being a victim. A marvelous, although disturbing, story! Thanks for the roller coaster ride through hell. I wouldn't travel there with anyone else. Okay, maybe Dean or John. You are the Master! Summary:
During a hunt concerning missing people who actually reappear, Dean ends up being kidnapped and awakens tied to what looks like a medical table, when Sam tracks him down will that be the end of it, or is the dark force in play determined to finish what it started?
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 72396 [Report This] Published: 21/04/07 Updated: 25/09/07
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: A hunt like any other hunt You've certainly captured the stubborn side to the brothers. Neither will give an inch. Good job!
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Digging Deeper Oh no! The librarian is going to do something horrible, isn't he? I hate cliffhangers!
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Dean Goes Down Good job! So where did the librarian go? How is he connected to the school? Is he Greg or one of the boys who was injured?
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Branded Can't wait for more!
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Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Rescue This is so interesting! Very mysterious, especially revisiting Dean's memories of reapers.
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Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Revelation Another great chapter! You really have me curious. Keep 'em coming!
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Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Nightmares I wondered if the librarian was involved. Poor strange guy. This demon leaves no witnesses behind. Hmmm...I still don't know why the demon is doing all this. I guess I'll find out as I keep reading.
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Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: "Here we come to save the day..." Way too mysterious---I'm dying here! What's the big secret?
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Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: “I’m tired of secrets, Dean…” Geez! Talk about cliff hangers! This story has more twists than a pretzel! Love it!
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Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Answers Knowing the meaning behind the symbol is a relief. Too much adrenaline was coursing through me. It was like being on a rollercoaster and never quite cresting the top. At least I can breathe again before the second hill comes.
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: The Exorcist Another good chapter. I look forward to finding out more about the Death Mrakers plans for Dean. Thanks for clearing up the rock, paper scissors thing. I wondered about that. Sometimes it does seem like Kripke's laughing at us. Author's Response: Thanks! And the rock, paper scissors... *sniff sniff* I was so upset with Kripke's version, lol... probably only 'cause it differed from mine. But I like Dean knowing Sam, bless 'em.
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: White Out Dean falling out of bed was a good beginning. We need some comedy to break up all the deep, dark tragedy. Oohhh! A voice in his head. Lovely! Author's Response: I like humour... And I especially like it to break the tension a little bit. And voices are never a good thing. On a side note... I am finally able to watch the first episode of season 3 and I'm so happy (living in England and all is evil). I'm practically dancing and bouncing with happiness!!!!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Unheard Words Wonderful! I especially like the way and reason Dean raises his shirt to reveal the Death Mark. By the way, Yay Bobby! He makes everything better---he's a perfect complement to Sam and Dean. Author's Response: Thanks! And yey! I think Bobby totally rules... even though saying that makes me sound like a complete kid :D
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Gift Incredible! Love the foreshadowing and fo coarse the actual stabbing! Ready for more!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 15: Getting out of town Every chapter answers a question, but teases about something more important. Marvelous! So what is it he's lost? Yeah - I like doing that, eek. It's 'cause I really hate totally giving the game away... Mwuahahaha! And what he's lost... I think I wrote that in the next chapter :) Thank you!!
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 16: Temptation You're so good at building suspense! Every so often I have to walk away from the story to let the tension ease from my shoulders. |
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