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Real name: Shannon Bean Status: Member Member Since: 10/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Shannondoah
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Reviews by Shannondoah Summary: John's thoughts on a sunny day
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 556 [Report This] Published: 05/04/07 Updated: 08/04/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What a beautiful story! It was a pleasure to read. Youcaptured John's wandering thoughts and hispangs of conscience so well. Summary:
banner by Neolani618 Sam has a mysterious teacher who considers hunting a type of homework. A revelation may cause one brother to lose the other in order to keep him. The brothers learn exactly how much they mean to one another, how deeply their bond runs and what one will do for the other. All things supernatural don't have to be evil. Dean and Sam get a look at the 'bigger picture.'
Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Elements Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 56757 [Report This] Published: 08/04/07 Updated: 10/06/07
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Love Dante's quote. I wrote it down from "The Coming Storm." Jeez, I never knew peanut M&M's were required school supplies either. My poor children are so deprived. At least there's hope for next year. I like the eerie house and the creepy professor! Good set up for the story! Author's Response: Hehehee...thanks so much.
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A very intriguing character, Craven! An excellent vantage point of the traumatic accident and the fall out in the hospital! I really like this point of view. It expresses so clearly the intense dynamics of Sam and Dean's relationship. Amazing piece of work! As if telling us Craven was going to speak to John wasn't enough, your chapter end notes are more cryptic and teasing. Author's Response: This was one of my favorite chapters to write. Thanks.
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 "Speak with effect." Good one! Cool troll, especially the eyes blinking sideways! Uh oh! If Dean has to truthfully answer a question posed by a troll they're in deep trouble! Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Dean and the troll were far too much fun.
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Marvelous chapter! So amusing! I can't wait to see how the secret reveals itself!
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Love it! Busy reading... Author's Response: Thanks for all the comments!
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I hope we get to find out more about Craven and his past. A camel is a pretty ugly animal so naturally it's hindquarters wouldn't be too pretty. The next chapter should be spectacular---John and Craven using all their charm. Author's Response: Heehehe...thanks for reading! There will be a bit more on Craven, and he'll be in the story after this one.
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 What a heart-breaking (well-written) chapter! Those poor boys.
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 You seem to start every chapter with a bit of Winchester-like humor. I love it! So good to see Dean aspire to something---even if it is drinking, sex and fighting. Amusing cell phone piece! Author's Response: Thanks yet again. I enjoyed the cell phone thing myself.
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Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Incredible!!! This is the best chapter----I LOVE it! So much insight and introspection. It truly defines the relationship between the brothers. This is amazing!!!
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Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Cute line---mass appliance suicide. Maybe there needs to be a support group for depressed small appliances? Okay, I think this is my second favorite chapter! I can't say anymore than that---stupendous! Author's Response: Aawww...thanks so much!
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Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I love Dean's growl! What a unique endearment. Good shot from Sam about Indonesia! Cancel that passport. Ooohh---superb cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Thanks so much...I really appreciate all your comments. Laura
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Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 What a creepy boogeyman description! I think it's unique and very compassionate to give violent offenders a supernatural reason for their crimes. Clever using the bit from the pilot episode as such an important part of this story. You pick out so many details and expound upon them. That's a great gift! Author's Response: Thanks again!
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Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The way Sam talks about having a Dean in his life reminds me of the creatures in Dr. Seuss' book "One Fish Two Fish."
Author's Response: I must have read that book at some point, but I don't remember it. Thanks for all the great reviews. Laura
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Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Very good set up for the coming war! Makes me want to read another stroy in this series! Is there another coming? Pleeeeese? Yes, it's in the works now. I'll start posting it soon. The title is Storm Surge. Thanks so much!
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Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Dean's love of yard work reminds me of the 2 minute mowing scene in WIAWSNB. Not only does he get one hobby in this story, but two. Wow! I like that you used Sam's previous thoughts as Dean's in this chapter---everyone having a Sam in their lives and whatever he'd done to deserve Sam he hoped he'd keep right on doing it. Ooohhh! They go after Dante next? That should be some great whumpage! Don't care what you title it, just PLEASE post it! Author's Response: Thanks again..the next one is in the works and I'll be starting it up soon. Laura Summary:
Somewhere in Colorado, children from 3 families have gone missing, can the boys find out what’s going on before forgotten memories come back to haunt them, more specifically – Dean. Mixture of both the past and present - So partly wee!chester.  Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 29298 [Report This] Published: 12/04/07 Updated: 28/04/07
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Creaks Great beginning! Love the banter between the boys. So, is Dean afraid of the monster in the closet? Author's Response: Thank you! Dialogue is probably my favourite thing to write - so I'm glad you like it. :) As for being afraid... I think we all are :D I still can't sleep with mine slightly open. Thanks for reading!!!
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Brave Young Man Oh my stars! Dean did see the boogeyman when he was a child! this is going to be awesome!
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Watched That creaking is an effective tension builder. Also love that you repeat Dean's experience from the previous chapter at the end of the current chapter. Like bits and pieces are returning to him.
Author's Response: :) Thanks! I don't know why I added the little end bits... it just felt right and seemed to work :D So I'm really glad you liked them.
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Whispers John is such a sweet dad in this story. It's good to see! Author's Response: I like sweet fatherly John... Maybe I'm just really naive but I wanna believe he could be like that at least sometimes. :D Thanks!
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Morning After The exchange between Dean and Jacob is really cute, especially with the bad word.
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Common Factor Wow! This is getting exciting! First little Dean goes missing and now Jacob might be taken, too. Hopefully, the Winchesters will be able to dumb luck into a way to stop whatever it is.
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Hesitation Incredible chapter! Jacob is a smart cookie! And the monster is coming back for Dean! Dean can see the monster, but no other adults can. Is that because he was held captive by the monster when he was young? By the way, love the banner! Great photo! Author's Response: Thanks! I have a soft spot for Jacob... And yeah - monster's coming for Dean :D I hope I answered your question further along in the story... :D I think I covered it. And thanks! One of my early banners - but pictures of Dean really do make just about anything look pretty. :D
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Calling the Cavalry Yay Bobby! I love when he gets involved. This just keeps getting better! Author's Response: Yey! I'm not the only one who loves Bobby! Woo! lol - I think he's so great!!!
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: Fragmented Memories Amazing! Love it! Author's Response: Thanks!!!! |
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