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Real name: Shannon Bean Status: Member Member Since: 10/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Shannondoah
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Reviews by Shannondoah Summary:
A new hunt brings to light the brothers' buried fears and asks the question: Can we really survive what we are raised to be? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadow Stalker Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 45836 [Report This] Published: 24/01/07 Updated: 09/03/07
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Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 "And Sam was tired of watching Dean crumble beneath the weight of their father's love." Such a powerful line! I had to stop and ponder everything that implied. Oh no! Mellie's stepping up her game and Dean's the pawn.
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Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The excitement is building! I love these roller coaster rides!
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Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 One minute I hate John enough to spit on him and the next I feel sorry for him. Would you make up my mind?
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Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The suspense keeps building---oh, make it stop! I can't take much more! Okay, maybe I can.
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Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 You are so clever and tricky. I guessed that Sam's new, improved abilities were somehow linked to the Asura---I just couldnt figure out how it happened. It makes perfect sense now that you explain it.
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Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 I can't really blame Mellie and Marci for wanting Dean---what woman wouldn't? It's just creepy having him felt up by a spirit. Sam must save him now or he'll become psycho Barbie's boy toy.
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Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Yet another amazing chapter!
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Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 OMG!!!!! You are driving me crazy! That heart beat section is stupendous!
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Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Geez, I read the last four chapters so quickly my eyes hurt. I feel like I've just run a marathon, but now I'm happy and calm. At least until tomorrow when I tackle another of your masterpieces. ;-) Summary: Sam has managed to find a job, and he loves it, except for one small thing that could prove to be quite embarrassing...
Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 826 [Report This] Published: 29/01/07 Updated: 29/01/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Hilarious! I love it! Summary: John prayed.
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 508 [Report This] Published: 29/01/07 Updated: 29/01/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow! Very good! the end is especially strong! I love it! Summary: Sam's thoughts while Dean is on the stage.
Categories: One Shots, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 280 [Report This] Published: 04/02/07 Updated: 04/02/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Your work is always so thought-provoking. another excellent piece! Summary: Dean is directed to a woman of sight for guidance.
Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 678 [Report This] Published: 04/02/07 Updated: 04/02/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very good, yet very curious. I like it, but it still has me guessing. Summary: A Higher Being muses on a warrior of their choosing.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 403 [Report This] Published: 04/02/07 Updated: 04/02/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 How very profound! A lot of deep thoughts went into this. It leaves me pondering. Summary: Dean drives Sam to the bus station.
Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 748 [Report This] Published: 06/02/07 Updated: 06/02/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A very good story! I love Dean's hope and sadness. My favorite part is when he remembers Sam crawling away from him and looking over his shoulder inviting him to follow. Summary: Dean's thoughts at the motel when Sam reminded him of his promise.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 429 [Report This] Published: 15/02/07 Updated: 16/02/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great job! You expressed Dean's anguish so perfectly. "doesn't he know that it would end two?" and "without him there is no me," are very powerful lines. Summary:
Sam has a deadly vision of his brother. Meanwhile, Dean is keeping secrets again. Banner by Sweetie0704 Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 72116 [Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 15/12/07
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Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Glimpse of the Future I'm new to this site, but your story has made me a regular. Right from the first paragraph I was hooked! Your word pictures are incredible! Your style flows so easily. I especially love how you manage to express the thoughts and emotions of your characters without distracting from the momentum of the plot. Their movements and expressions are so clear it's like watching a movie in my head. Thank you for sharing your craft with others! Shannondoah Author's Response: *blushes outrageously* I'm speechless! But, thanks...I'm also very happy you've been enjoying this. There is no better reward for doing this than knowing I'm doing a good job of entertaining someone. Thanks for your kind words. Nicole
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Date: 26/07/07 Title: Chapter 10: It's Easier to Run Amazing! Incredible! Marvelous! I couldn't read fast enough. Everything about this chapter is perfect! Until I finished reading I didn't realize I had been tightly gripping the arms of my chair the entire time. I kept checking the space bar on the side to see how much story was left---afraid it was going to end too soon. I can't wait for the next instalment. PLEASE POST IT SOON! Whoa! I'm very humbled and a lot into the blushing. Are you sure you clicked the right review button? Lol, kidding. And thank you so much for your kind review! Nicole
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Date: 26/08/07 Title: Chapter 12: Delirium in the Night Yay another chapter! I'm like a man spying an oasis after crossing the dessert. Ahhh, cool, sweet fanfiction! It was worth the wait.
Author's Response: Oooo, thanks! Yeah, it was a desert there for a while. It was nice to get this one finished and posted, a good feeling to get it accomplished. I have to say, I'm big-time relieved it was worth the extended absence. Nicole
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Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 13: When Morning Comes "you look like death warmed over---tiwce." The description of what Dean heard while his eyes were covered was ingenius! Okay, so now we know that plan A isn't going to work. It never does, not with the Winchester luck. Your psychological episodes are thrilling! I love to feel what the characters are feeling, think what they are thinking. You've done an amazing job! Thanks! Author's Response: The fact that you can "feel" the story is a truly awesome compliment, thank you! That's what I always hope to hear because a story is best when you are drawn into it. I love reading when I'm so deep into it that I can feel the emotion or whatever. Thanks for that. I'm a happy, smiling fool now :)
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Dancing with the Devil The description of the familiar smells in Bobby's house was very good, exactly what I've always thought. Great end to a marvelous chapter! Interested in what ends will be tied up in the epilogue. Author's Response: Yeah, I figure Bobby's house must smell a whole lot like my dad's garage...only with a crap-load of books, lol! Thank you, Shannondoah, I appreciate the feedback. LOVES the feedback ;)
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Date: 15/06/09 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky the exchange between Sam and Dean in the car when they firs arrive at the Winchester mansion is incredibly detailed. Not only can I picture what's happening in my head, but I can feel the grief and guilt. Sam's comparison of Dean's resemblance to their parents was an endearing passage. Simply amazing! I enjoyed the love scene, especially because Dean separated love from sex. Whether he knew it or not, he loved Hannah purely, wanting what was best for her even if it denied himself. That is true love! Your expression of it through Dean was exquisite! Author's Response: Thank you!!! I worked so hard on this story and it feels so good to know someone has enjoyed it. Thank you so much for letting me know. Your words mean a lot to me. Sorry for the slow response, I've been gone a lot lately. *hugs* Summary: rewatching HOTH and seeing Deans reaction to Sams confession that he prays daily, I just couldn't get this out of my mind. maybe why he prays.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 977 [Report This] Published: 20/02/07 Updated: 21/02/07
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Date: 14/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like that you wrote this in the first person account of Sam. I also like that you stressed the reason why Sam prays so faithfully. At first we believe it's just to get him through the tough life he has, but in the end we discover it's to save his brother. Summary: During a hunt Sam and Dean learn just how high a price some people are willing to pay for immortality.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Something Lost Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45016 [Report This] Published: 22/02/07 Updated: 16/07/07
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Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great beginning chapter! I really love how you set the mood in all your stories. I have such a clear picture inside your characters heads. Thanks!
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Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Sam and Kerri playing house in front of Dean....hmmm...Does Dean know what he's getting himself into? this looks like the beginning of a lot of trouble. |
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