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Real name: Shannon Bean Status: Member Member Since: 10/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Shannondoah
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Reviews by Shannondoah Summary:
 Never leave a wounded predator alive! It might come back later when you least expect and rip out your heart!Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 20780 [Report This] Published: 25/12/06 Updated: 12/01/07
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Date: 08/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Premeditation Bloody? yahoo! Love me some hurt Winchesters. Once again Tree you've sucked me completely into your story.
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Date: 08/09/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Motivation Letting us into Gordon's head was chilling. I just assumed he killed his sister out of love for what she once was but your reasoning seems much more appropriate. I love the cold-hearted, calculating shrewdness with which you portray Gordon. You had me in awe.
Summary: Post Devil's Trap. Dean's thoughts as he lies bleeding in the wreck of the Impala.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1356 [Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very strong thoughts! I think you've captured the strength, confusion and desperate love of Dean Winchester. Summary: There's been a lot of give and take in Dean's life. He's given a lot, while a lot has been taken. Spoilers for In My Time of Dying. Angst. Deancentric. One shot.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1568 [Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06
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Date: 23/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "And every night he woke to the same sound. If it wasn’t Sammy it was Daddy. Every night he woke to the sound of crying." The sad glimpse into a four-year old child's living nightmare. "...when Sammy was sure there was a monster in his closet, it had been up to Dean to assure him that there was definitely nothing there. And even if there had been, Dean would never have let it hurt Sammy. Dean would never let anything hurt Sammy." How seriously he cared for Sammy, even as a child. As you describe Dean's fear that he would be left alone and the emptiness of his existence when Sam finally does leave, I felt a deeper respect for Dean. He lived with his fears, knowing that someday they would become reality, all the while providing stability for everyone else. Author's Response: Thanks so much for that thoughtful review! I really can't see Dean's early years having been much fun for him really. It's a wonder he's as reasonably well-balanced as he is! Summary: Dean is haunted by the flashback from a hunt that took place while Sam was at Stanford. He can't remember the details but what he can't recall can hurt him.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504 [Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 11/02/07
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fallen Angels The utburd is an intresting spirit. I've never heard of it before, but given the circumstances of the deaths it only makes sense there is such a thing. Thanks for the education! I agree with Sam, the concept that created the utburd is more horrendous than the creature itself. You did a great job portraying the way the brothers manipulate one another.
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Memory Rush amazing flashback! So action-packed. I almost gasped when I read Dean had run into the werewolf's mate. That damn Winchester luck! You are such a tease! Obviously something unusually awful happened during that hunt that Dean suppressed. My guess is it involved John or Sam.
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 It Didn't Stop Turning I love how you write 'that spot' and we know exactly what you mean. Great technique! Such exquisite description in the flashback. I felt like I was there. I especially like the lines where John's tone scares Dean with its gentleness and "as much a kiss as a promise." Very touching and dramatic! Cool bit---the shoe tying thing. that's the kind of information that personalizes a story and sucks me in.
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Few Wrong Words Oh my stars! John shot Dean?!! On purpose?! (I know---just keep reading and find out.) I like that after a while the cows are referred to as Sam's cows. Love the forehead tattoo bit and the one-fingered point! I can only guess which finger he uses. What a sad dream/memory. Poor Dean.
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awww. No chapter title. the dialogue between sam and Dean in Dr. Mercer's clinic is a riot! NO doubt that they're brothers. "It was true. Both times." Priceless lines!
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Stumbling To The Light Man, I can relate to Dean. I hate when you're ill and people keep yammering in your ear. You just want to whip out a gun and blow their head off. Lovely horse adage. You have a way with words! It's a gift! Wow! What an incredible and powerful flashback! John did try to kill Dean! (But then you know that.) No wonder Dean blocked it.
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 A lot of shockers in this chapter--the suspense is building tremendously. I thought John shot Dean, but having it confirmed was still startling. Puking blood---fabulous injury! His insides must be really messed up from the injury 5 years ago.
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Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 In A Stranger's Hands Stupendous chapter!!! The agony is unbearable. I can't describe how much I enjoyed Dean's misery.
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Date: 23/06/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 One More Time, With Feeling What a coincidence to find Dr. Mercer working at the hospital. Okay, that sounds blatantly obvious when I put it like I did---doctor working in a hospital. but you know what I mean. I'm glad Sam finally got Dean there! I was hunched over my computer urging the Impala to go faster and stay on the road. Tee hee!
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Date: 23/06/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Hunt Part One: Eyewitness Accounts How horrible! You make it so easy to feel Dean's pain and division of loyalties. Fabulous chapter!
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Date: 23/06/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Hunt Part 2: Perception of Reality Wow... Just wow! What a ride! First you make us think John shot Dean then he didn't then he really did. Stupendous! Summary: Dean is crashing after a string of bad jobs. One last, terrible incident pushes him over the edge. He’s on a downhill slide and the Moonstar is the last place he needs to be.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 50575 [Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 08/01/07
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Date: 16/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Teaser Go for the gut on the first word! Reel me in, the hook is in my mouth and through my cheek.
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Date: 16/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Inventory The bathroom humor was hilarious---been there, done that, got the ticket stub to prove it. Why is it no matter who you're dealing with the scariest words in the English language are "I've been thinking." When my husband say those words I want to run from the house screaming. You brandish them like a sword! Great job! Don't worry about chapters not being filled with action or angst. I think sometimes the chatty chapters are the best. They show the depth of the characters relationships by their words to one another and their interaction. It all comes together to make the story great! Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this cause it only gets worse from here. I think you'll like it!!
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Date: 16/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Contamination I can take gore. I can take pain. What I can't take is a sick kid sneezing on me! Even though it happened to Dean I had to go wash my face and hands and spray Lysol on my keyboard. Disgusting!
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Date: 16/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Surprise First the werewolf, then the kid sneezing, then the smells---I can't wait to see where this is going! Just when I think i'm cresting the top of the coaster I find another stretch uphill. I'm holding on so tightly my fingers are leaving imprints imbedded into the safety bar.
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Date: 16/07/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Ta to you!!! Your writing keeps me from losing my mind in the boring (but fulfilling) life of a full-time mother and housewife. The rebellious teen that I once was (and who still hides within me) loves riding the waves with you, Sam and Dean. Thanks for all you do to supplement my Prozac! Author's Response: My prozac is all that keeps me from doing what Dean did. You made the story sound so exciting i may have to go back and read it again! Summary:
What happens to the Winchester's after the events of "Devil's Trap"? This was actually written right after the season finale some months ago. Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 93391 [Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 24/02/07
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Date: 25/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Not Before Everything A very tense and heartfelt chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more. It's always interesting when writers add to actual episodes, filling in gaps that are left as they want. Summary: A shortcut through the woods leaves the boys lost, seperated and hunted.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadow Stalker Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 46418 [Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07
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Date: 13/09/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Yay Dean! I'm so glad he wasn't tricked by his family's old friend. Now they just have to vanquish the demon and discover Joshua's reason for betraying them.
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Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love a good fight between brothers! It's so entertaining. creepy chapter ending.
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Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 John's reaction to Caleb and Pastor Jim's cell numbers is very touching. I'm so glad John is going after his sons!
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Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Ooohh! Very eerie and mysterious! This is exciting! |
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