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Penname: DeeUnNatural [Contact]
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Real name: Dee Status: Member Member Since: 05/01/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by DeeUnNatural Summary:
It's just silly...two bored brothers doing everyday things....really just silly and ALL fredo's fault.
Winner of SNFA round 9 Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1918 [Report This] Published: 17/06/07 Updated: 17/06/07
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Date: 17/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 that was great. I laugh throughout the whole thing. I could see my own brothers doing things like that. It would be cool to see the Winchester brothers do it on screen. lol Summary: An AU, The story takes place before Pilot, what if tables are turned, Sam and John reunite to find a missing Dean, going on a journey full of danger, murder and unsolved cases. That's not the difficult part, they'll have to be together without Dean and fight their own demons before fighting the supernatural.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 29245 [Report This] Published: 23/07/07 Updated: 11/06/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 29/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 enjoy reading. what was in the shot given to Dean? are you going to hae Sam and John fighting while they look for Dean? Well John & Sam, they will fight for sure, not gonna miss somethin' like that I can always see them fighting Thank you for the review, hope you like what's coming next Summary:
AHBL2 Missing Scene - from hug to hug
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 9385 [Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 11/02/11
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like the way you explain how they got indoors. The emotions of all involve was an eye opening to the waterworks. Your story filled in the gaps that the show had. Bobby is a charactor that is growing more and more interesting. Summary:
![]() What kind of game does Dean have to play to save Sam this time? And can he save himself as well? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504 [Report This] Published: 24/09/07 Updated: 28/10/07
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Almost like that Stephen King Book about the airplane. Can't remember the name. But I'm betting you have a MORE supernatural thing going on. SOOOO what happened to Dean????? It was "The Langoliers" and trust me, it's not going in that direction. Summary:
Banner by the amazing Chasidern Sam sits vigil beside his dying brother, and learns what it could mean to be alone. Not death fic. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2333 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 04/10/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 04/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was deep and I have to say, my eyes did get wet too. I thought for sure you were going to let Dean die. I have seen miracles happen all the time but they still seem distant and far between. Even a written miracle is nice to read to make to world a little nicer to live in. Author's Response: Thank you so much. I think we all need miracles and a reminder of love in our lives! Summary:
Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Im liking it. I hope you plan to write Sammy in soon. Dying to know what happened to Dean.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 11/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue I enjoy reading your story. Never figure one of the brother would show up, but like the way you finished the story. Hope to read more of your stories. Summary:
It started with a nightmare, and quickly became the surest way to annoy Dean Sam could think of. Categories: Drabbles, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: Snapshots Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 275 [Report This] Published: 06/01/08 Updated: 06/01/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 06/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I thought that was what it was, a brthday wish. I know on one of my birthday, I will not name which one, I got up at 1:19AM to look into a mirror to watch myself turn ? years old. Have not done it since, but still have the memory of it. Happy Birthday Dean I just thought a young Sam would have been delighted to be the first one to tell his big brother "Happy Birthday" every year, and that as an adult it would be a kind of promise he makes to himself: never to take Dean for granted again. Glad you liked the story, thanks for the review! Summary:
Who would have thought a broken jaw could be the least of your problems...? FINAL CHAPTER POSTED! Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 16986 [Report This] Published: 18/07/08 Updated: 10/09/08
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Date: 20/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: ONE I like it, though I did have a hard time following at first but got into it at the hospital. opps the end. I like to see what you do with the recovery. Did I say that I liked it? I DID like it Summary:
Dean's ability to continue hunting becomes questionable, after a hunt. Will Dean's limited capability cost Sam his life? (Takes place during season 2.)
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 47088 [Report This] Published: 04/08/08 Updated: 25/09/08
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Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ALways the hunting. Poor Dean. Like where you're going with this one. Summary:
Sam stood and watched the water in the raging river. He could throw himself in, end it all now. Would he be with Dean then? Would the pain end? Then he heard a child's voice screaming.
Set very early season 4. I don't read or do spoilers. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 996 [Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 06/08/08
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Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 WOW. "the spirit should guide us through the world of pain and HOPE will be there to show us the way." great story. Thank you for the review, Hope will always move us along. Jacq Summary:
Their first mistake was picking on a Winchester...it was also their last...
Set in Season Three, between the episodes Bad Day At Black Rock and Fresh Blood Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 20194 [Report This] Published: 03/10/08 Updated: 17/10/08
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Date: 03/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like. Nice start. Can't wait to see what you'll do with the rest and where is Sammy??? :( Summary: Sam waits while Dean makes a decision.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2434 [Report This] Published: 01/12/08 Updated: 01/12/08
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Date: 05/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting Room Cool twist with Castiel being with Sam first. Great Job Summary: Laying in wait for his nemesis, Sam fires upon the wrong person!
Categories: Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 259 [Report This] Published: 13/12/08 Updated: 13/12/08
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Date: 13/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Casualties of War LOL That was so cute. Summary: Dean has a drinking "problem". **SPOILERS SEASON FOUR**. Dean!whumpage.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 1169 [Report This] Published: 19/12/08 Updated: 19/12/08
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Date: 19/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 In true form of an alcoholic. "I'll quit, I promise..." I like to see the show play ore on Dean's drinking. I thought you play it off perfectly. Great job. Thank you, very much. I think that the show should show more of this as well. Not only is Dean on the brink of becoming a SERIOUS alcoholic, but you also had Sam's little stint in the binging scene. Not promising. I wish we'd get a little more explanation and follow through with this aspect of the character. It is a MAJOR thing and I hope that the writers do not continue to ignore it. Thank you, very much for the review! I'm glad that you liked the story. Summary:
It took only a moment for Dean to disappear and be swept away by the fury of the avalanche. Now with time running out, Sam turns to the help of strangers to find him before it's too late.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 25580 [Report This] Published: 04/01/09 Updated: 28/03/09
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Date: 14/01/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I'm a Dean Girl but POOR SAMMY!!!! Summary: Dean has a breakdown. Sam wonders about him. Totally PWP and SPOILER ALERT FOR SEASON FOUR. Post Hell.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1728 [Report This] Published: 02/03/09 Updated: 02/03/09
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Date: 03/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Our New Reality WELL DONE! Summary:
Sam & Dean begin investigating a haunted house that turns out to be one of their dad's old hunts and now one of their most dangerous cases when they get trapped inside the house of horrors.
Takes place after my story Head Trip. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Exangel's Missing Episodes Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4227 [Report This] Published: 05/03/09 Updated: 16/03/09
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Date: 06/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 CREEPY! I like it. Keep going. :) Author's Response: Thanks. And don't worry I have more coming. The whole story is actually outlined already it's just a matter of writting. :D Summary:
Dean takes ill after the boys last job in Stratton, Nebraska. Ruby arrives and Sam finds that she has a way for him to save his brother but can Sam do to Dean what she is telling him he must and will Dean forgive him if he does? Spoilers: Set between Family Remains and CAIADB (Mentions where they are headed in CAIADB) Disclaimer: I wish it but they aren't. Mr Kripe lets me play too though. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 23997 [Report This] Published: 31/03/09 Updated: 12/10/09
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Date: 01/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: I've Walked This Way Before the pleague? Hi there Nice little guess, I'll reveal next chapter! Cheers Mary x Summary:
"Demons I get, humans are just crazy" Leaving Nebraska, Sam and Dean run into more than righteous federal agents on their way to Baltimore. They cross paths with people who end up dragging them head first into the "real world". Kicking and screaming.... This is the sequel/second half of Tricks of the Trade. >>No spoilers<< Set in season 4
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Crossed Paths Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 35842 [Report This] Published: 17/04/09 Updated: 06/05/09
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Date: 27/04/09 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Warm Voice, Deadly Desire NO!! you can't stop there. What about Dean??? :( Summary:
At night, Dean is not as 'okay' after his time in hell as he pretends to be.Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1133 [Report This] Published: 27/04/09 Updated: 27/04/09
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Date: 09/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Shadows of Night That was great. I agree, not enough has been covered about Dean's mental state. I think you hit it on the "Pin?". D
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Date: 10/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Shadows of Night WOW! Now that's facing the issue of Dean's Hell Party. Great job. :) Summary: Wee!chester oneshot. All of Bobby's babysitting skills are put to the test one winter's night when the Winchester boys are left in his care. Schmoop warning.
Categories: Wee!chester, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1644 [Report This] Published: 29/06/09 Updated: 29/06/09
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Date: 30/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 AHHH How sweet. I like it. No wonder Bobby like the boys so much. Great job. D Summary: Ramblings of an old teacher, after she is forced out of the quietness of her house in Jefferson, Missouri on a false fire alarm. Featuring weeDean. Set in season 1 ‘Devil’s trap’.
Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1590 [Report This] Published: 25/07/09 Updated: 25/07/09
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Date: 25/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 like how you tied it into the show, season 1. Great job D Summary: Disoriented Dean, desperate Sam, and a thought that wouldn't get out of my head. Enjoy. :]
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 167 [Report This] Published: 03/10/09 Updated: 03/10/09
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Date: 03/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Don't know when you wanted this to be in the show but I could almost feel it happened in season one: FAITH. Anyway. I like your style. D Yeah, I could see it happening in season one also. Faith does reflect this kind of scenario. What an awesome epi! I was going off my thoughts at the end of this week's episode. Also, pretty much the brother's relationship in general. However strained it may be at times, they need each other. I'm happy you liked it and thanks for the review! :D |
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