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He turned, expertly masking the mass of unshed tears and unspoken fears that threatened so very much to burst from his usually strong and controlled person. Expressionless in every aspect save for his eyes, his gaze met Anna Walker’s. A silent message was communicated. He knew she was telling him first. He appreciated it. He knew she was asking his permission to say it aloud. He gave it. He knew he would never be grateful to anyone more than he was to her now. He silently told her so. He knew she understood. Their mutual gazes broke apart, and Dean continued to clean his prized guns as Anna relayed the series of events that took place that day at the hospital to Sammy. Dean knew his younger brother would cry. Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Through The Dimensions Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 48131 [Report This] Published: 13/03/07 Updated: 20/07/07
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like your characterization of Anna. She reacts exactly like I would.
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Still with you. I like how you switch between perspectives. Everything seems to matter so much more when you can see how everyone is absorbing it.
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Who would want to watch a TV show about us? If only you knew Dean, if only you knew.
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Okay, the Brian thing was just so sad. I can totally identify with the best-friend thing, and that was heart wrenching.
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Stupid Sam! Stupid, stupid, stupid...Kudos to Anna though; He Is Legend is the best band eva!China White II is one of their best songs, but my personal fave is The Walls Have Teeth. But oh dear what is going to happen next? Author's Response: Ok, always awesome to meet another HIL fan. The Walls Have Teeth is definitely one of their best songs. I also love I Am Hollywood (of course) and Stampede (the country roads thing is thoroughly amazing).
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Again. Stupid Sam, stupid, stupid stupid! As for Anna and the fork? that was priceless. Anna and Dean so need to be left alone in the back of the Impala...
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Stupid stubborn everybody. I like that Dean just can't come to grips with the fact that he and Sam should have died. I think he realizes it, but doesn't want to accept it. How sad. Totally makes sernse for him though; great characterization.
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Okay, I will never see ice the same way. I will never see ice and not laugh. An i loved the 'jerk/bitch' moment with Anna and Dean.
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ok, totally cute. I thought it was much better that Anna admitted that she was still scared of Sam. It seemed to make more sense condisreing what happenned, and it was a good thing between them. I also loved the moment of jelousy that Dean experienced. LOVED it. And the bar thing was just totally cute.
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I really liked Anna's monologue about normalcy. It was great. I also loved the huge amount of sexual tension between Anna and Dean! Omg, that was so hilarious. Perfectly handled that scene i think; hope there's another like it, thought probably not in this story huh? that's probably more like DAMNATIONS, i bet.
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 OMG! did you have to cut him off even as he was THINKING it?! O man, he loves her! aaaaah! ok, im alright now. phew...
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Oh. My. Word. Don't do it Dean. DON'T DO IT. Author's Response: Oh he's doin' it. Summary:
Mary only said one word. "Dean." Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 472 [Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: First Impression Aw, how nice. It's great to see that even at birth Dean showed promise, strength, and a hint of what amazing if sad things he was to accomplish. Summary:
Thinking back later, Dean wasn’t sure what response he had expected. Whatever response he might have imagined, nothing could have prepared him for what happened next. Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1288 [Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ok, I totally loved the foreshadowing. I can see why the boys would have forgotten this occurrence; not because it was by any means forgettable, but because they wouldn't want to remember it. Summary:
John’s weary eyes widened as the realization came. Some place inside of him that he vaguely told himself should be filled with pride was instead pierced with sorrow, and flooded with dread as he registered the thought: Dean was a murderer. Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 569 [Report This] Published: 17/03/07 Updated: 18/03/07
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like that this story is in direct lineup with MEETING DEAN. The symmetry really adds to the effect, and it makes it that much more emotional when told through John's eyes, because it is the results of him both times. Really effective. Summary:
The nightmare had ended, but Sam remembered. He didn’t know why, but he knew it was true. It was real. Dean was going to shoot him. Dean was going to kill him. All logic left Sammy’s mind as sheer panic took over. Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1829 [Report This] Published: 18/03/07 Updated: 18/03/07
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ok, Sam's POV told so much more. It's sad to think that even then Sam was plagued by the knowledge of his destiny. I love that bit of innocence we saw though; it's nice to see joy, even if only for a fleeting moment. Summary:
He was surely dying. You could not be feeling this and not be dying. He had to be dying. Please, let me be dying! This was too much to live with, Sam wanted it to end, needed it to end. Oh god it hurt so much, so bad, oh god make it stop, make it stop, make it STOP! He couldn’t speak, couldn’t do anything but scream in total anguish, not knowing where his body began or ended, feeling, hearing, seeing nothing but the pain being afflicted on his being. It was pain beyond pain, and he welcomed unconsciousness as his body reached its limit. NOW COMPLETED!!! Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 16344 [Report This] Published: 26/03/07 Updated: 26/11/07
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Attention grabbed. Me. Want. More.
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I must say, Sammy-Pain is exactly what I've been craving... HOW WRONG AM I?! hurry up and finish Dimensions. |
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