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Penname: sweetysmart0505 [Contact]
Real name: Candy
Status: Member
Member Since: 03/07/07
Website: http://www.fanfiction.net/~sweetysmart0505
Beta-reader: No

Hey,

My name is Candy. I started on this site a while ago and have now finished posting the last chapter of my first story. But I must admit I prefer Fanfiction. I have way more stories on there. (If you would like, you can mozie on over there and read them; same username.) But thanks for the feedback on my first story, but I am pretty sure that will be my last here.

But I would still like to know how all of you are doing?

Have a good day, all!


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Mesmerized by supernaturaljunkiejude Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 144]
Summary: Past Featured StoryStory line: Dean and Sam finish a difficult salt and burn and then go looking for a hunt. What they encounter in a small community confuses everyone until Dean engages that wonderful, quirky memory of his
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 27675
[Report This] Published: 09/06/07 Updated: 19/08/07


Reviewer: sweetysmart0505 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Let's Take a Break

wow you are great at writing detail on chapters. and fight scenes are also really good. though because my vocabulary is so short and my mind is distracted I got lost at a couple parts ad I didn't know what you were talking about but it was awesome. so good job on this.

 
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Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A Haunting We Will Go

well that was a scary ending. really good so far. again good detail.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and reading all chapters... :0)

 
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Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Dinnertime

yea I figured as soon as yer said the guy was slumped soething was wrong with him. so really good job with it.

Author's Response: took awhile to show how much he loved his wife....   thanks again,candy

 
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Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Headaches

lol I love it when Sam gets drunk. it was relaly sad in Playthings but that one sounded like a blast. another good job.

Author's Response: even Sammy needs to let loose once in awhile....thanks for the review     :0)

 
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Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Caught Napping !

that is really good. I love it when Sam gets in trouble like taht. so far awesome. going to read the alst chapter now.

Author's Response: glas you're enjoying it so far, Candy

 
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Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem

the fight scene was fine. but omg you mentioend Devour. I lvoe thta movie. Jensen did good in it. anyway this is a relaly good chapter. I love action scenes and you are good t writing them. awesome job so far.

Author's Response: This was my first combat scene and I was so worried about it but my beta....really approved so I was happy....  thanks..99

 
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Date: 18/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..

You are right it was a little slow but if that angst was nessicary then it was just fine. So good job and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Candy...really do appreciate you continuing to read & review......

next chapter more exciting

 
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Date: 24/07/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Save the Cheerleaders !!

omg I was drooling when I read Sam had no shirt on. I would be screaming and chasing Sam if I saw him with no shirt. I am sweating over here. lol great job with that scene, you so should have written more of what Sam woud be doing, getting away from then or trying nervously to distract them. lol. but it was kind of off plot so that is ok. Anyway really great chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Author's Response:

you'll get a little more Sam (revealed) in the beginning of Chapter 9, sweety.....Dean to the rescue!!!   ......so glad you enjoyed Dean tossing the 'lamb to the wolves" like that.....

P.S. Thank you for the STARS they taste even better than 'cookies' !!!

 
6ft under by greensheep8 Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 42]
Summary: Sam and Dean are after a demon who buries its victims 6ft under ground, only problem is it has already buried its victim. Alive.
Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 12485
[Report This] Published: 10/07/07 Updated: 25/10/07


Reviewer: sweetysmart0505 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why wouldn't Sam call 911?  anyway omg the thought of Sam being buried underground. When I started reading I realized it was Sam but that is still really good. and it is a really good being to a story. awesome job so far.

 
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: sweetysmart0505 Signed
Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really good bambers. Really really sweet of Sam. Awesome OneShot for CHristmas.

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