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Penname: Magos186 [Contact]
Real name: angela
Status: Member
Member Since: 22/06/07
Website: http://magos186.livejournal.com/
Beta-reader: Yes

I'm just a regular Jersey Girl I guess.  Supernatural is my favorite show. I like to write and play the cello.  I'm currently working on more fanfiction (cause you know you can never stop writing it) as well as two different novels. 


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House of Burden by Maygin Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]
Summary:

Within its walls lives a family that has never been touched by hate, fire or the Supernatural… but for one. 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 73470
[Report This] Published: 30/07/07 Updated: 31/12/07


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i hope one of the ways he figures out to help his brother is to break sam out of the psyche ward coz damn if that isn't a creepy place! nice job. desperately awaiting the next chapter.  btw, as requested, letting u know i thoroughly enjoyed what you feel

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

wow.  just can't think of another word to describe this chapter. I totally love Natasha. She's so adorable. and the ending was just... wow. can't wait to see what the heck happens next. and thanks coz you just totally brightened up my crappy night.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

awesome chapter but that was a CRUEL ending! please post soon. i'm dyin to know what dean does

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 24/11/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

this is by far my most favorite chapter. it had the drama, the action, the humor. i must say that i think i looked a little insane while reading this coz i was doing it at work sitting in the concession stand of a pretty much empty ice arena staring at a computer and laughing (or gasping in a few parts). but i just couldn't stop reading. this chapter was absolutely awesome and thank you so much for the non edge of your seat cliff hanger. much appreciated. and while the ending was still a little cliffy, but not overly, i think it was the sweetest ending ever! so adorable what dean's doing. i cannot wait for what happens next. i love this story!

 
Summary:

“HELP! Someone call an ambulance!...It’s okay Sam, I’ve gotcha…SOMEBODY HELP ME, PLEASE!” he pulled his cell roughly from his pocket, dialing while Sam’s pain-induced tears mixed with the copious amounts of blood snaking down his chin and neck, “You’re alright, Sammy, I’m right here...Hello?! I’m at the Sunset Inn on Downy – something, something’s wrong with my brother...Stay with me Sam, c’mon!...I don’t know, there’s blood coming from his mouth…Hold on, Sammy, please…I-I don’t think he can breathe!...SAM!” Dropping the phone Dean grasped his brother tighter, pulling him up and close. He could still feel him trembling and hear him choking on blood.


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13634
[Report This] Published: 02/08/07 Updated: 04/03/09


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

that chapter was so worth the wait. absolutely amazing. Hate the cliffy but i can NOT wait to see what happens next.

 
Phoenix by sojourner84 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

The fire took his life, but gave him purpose. It devoured his childhood, but allowed him to shield the innocence of another. It brought back his brother to him, but not without scars.



Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 999
[Report This] Published: 02/08/07 Updated: 02/08/07


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 08/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Phoenix

Seriously, think you just broke my heart a little. I know a thing or two about personal turmoil and the writing that comes out of it but never have i been able to write anything as amazing as this. I'm an english major and have read a LOT of poetry but let me tell you this has got to be one of the most amazing poems I've ever read.



Author's Response:

Magos, I'm beaming like an idiot over here. Thank you for saying all of that, and I'm glad this piece was something even an English major could enjoy. I was hoping  the scattered nature of the poem wouldn't scare people away. Thanks again for dropping in. :)

-SJ 

 
Summary: Post Bloodlust this fic sees the brothers on a wendigo hunt. Will they survive or will their fragmented relationship cause trouble? I dont own Supernatural or the Winchesters. Spoilers for season 2.

Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 13861
[Report This] Published: 08/08/07 Updated: 20/08/07


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 21/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hey I'm liking the story so far, but i just have one little quam with it... you do know that Dean's Impala is from 1967 right?  In the 60s there was no such thing as power locks or power windows.  There was also no auto-release for the trunk.  So even if dean did lock sam in from the outside, Sam would still be able to unlock the door or roll down the window.  Other than that, i'm really liking your story so far. Very curious about what's gonna happen next.

Author's Response: hey right okay lol didn't know that :S I eh don't really do cars if you know what I mean lol but thanks for letting me know-I'll be sure to remember that for future stories! I really appreciate you letting me know! Hope you enjoy the rest - Aliyssa x

 
Summary: After "Everybody Loves a Clown" Dean's guilty feelings about taking his frustrations out on his brother lead the boys to bond over a strange mystery. ONESHOT
Categories: One Shots, General, Missing Scenes, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2870
[Report This] Published: 09/08/07 Updated: 09/08/07


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 09/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Mystery of Coffee Cups

Very cute story and totally turned out to be something different than what i expected. it was entertaining.  well done.



Author's Response:

I can imagine the title would lead you to believe something entirely different lmao but im glad u liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing its much appreciated :)

Tara x0x

 
Summary: The last year of Dean Winchesters life is going by far quicker than he wants.  He realizes that Sam cannot live without him...he must get out of the deal, and Sam, he has plans all his own!!!  RUNNER UP SENSUE AWARDS!!  ROUND 10 - STUCK WITH ME!  Please read and review!!
Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 31129
[Report This] Published: 09/08/07 Updated: 22/10/07


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i have read most of your stuff and i like it all, but i have to say that was the most creative. I really liked the way Sam got Dean out of the deal and I also like that Dean never noticed Sam using his powers til the coffee thing, which was just funny. Totally had an Andy flashback.  This was a great story and I love the ending. Well done. You should definately keep on writing.

 
Summary: Missing scene from WIAWSNB. Set between Sam finding Dean and their little heart to heart in the motel room. I needed more HC and brother moments than the ep gave me.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3771
[Report This] Published: 13/08/07 Updated: 13/08/07


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 14/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Killer story. It's so awesome. This totally belongs in the episode.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! x

 
Summary:

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Dean wakes up in a hospital without any recollection of who he is. Instead of an ID in his pocket, there are packets of salt; and the only thing he can remember is yellow eyes.


Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40974
[Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 08/10/07


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 18/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Battling Windmills

I totally am loving this story.  Really like that you added Carmen 'cause she was totally a cool character but I'm just curious as to where the heck Sam has been.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: I love Carmen as well which is why I wrote this story to begin with. I wanted to write that relationship story between Dean and Carmen. The next chapter is submitted, but I'm waiting to get it approved. I hate not being a trusted author. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Carpe Diem

this chapter was awesome! love that you brought his mom into it and i'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter.  And i TOTALLY think you should do a prequel, even if it's just a one-chapter deal coz i have been so curious about what happened in Kentucky.  You should totally write it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the Mary addition. I was ehh at first about it, but it turned out really nicely. Lots of people want to see the Kentucky hunt, so I will probably write that. It won't be a one-shot deal though. I don't have a rough outline yet, but I'm thinking a 5-9 chapter deal. Glad you're liking this story.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Give the Devil His Due

oh so looking forward to that. cannot wait for the next chapter! you totally have me hanging on every word and holy crap this was a really good and awesomely interesting chapter

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Grazed Knees

you executed this so well and i'm SO sad to see it's ended! but i absolutely without a doubt loved this story! it will always be one of my favorites and the ending was just awesome! i love that the kid is just a pint size version of dean. I was cracking up laughing! and sweet that they named him after his dad. ugh this was just such an awesome story with the best ending. Can't wait for the prequel.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'm heartbroken this story is done with even though I have a boatload of stories to write/finish. Thank you so much for reading, and I'm thrilled that you liked the story so much.

 
Summary: In the dead of night, John takes his two young sons to a cemetery to salt and burn a corpse that prompts Sammy to ask questions on what happens when a ghost dies among other things.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Dark Horse Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2013
[Report This] Published: 16/08/07 Updated: 16/08/07


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Death for Ghosts

very cute story.  Little Sammy is absolutely adorable and I love the way you made him speak.  well done.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I love writing little Sammy, and I'm happy you enjoyed him as well. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Summary:

This is my first attempt at writing EVER, so please be gentle. 

Set before the end of Season 3. Dean has three months left before his bill comes due. Thrown into the future by a demon, he is offered the chance to see "what is and what should never be."


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 4074
[Report This] Published: 16/08/07 Updated: 02/09/07


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this story is soo awesome! i love that you keep going back between the future and the present and show what each brother is experiencing.  I also love the whole twin thing explanation.  This is so interesting and i can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Magos186 so glad you like it. I get bored easily so I like to jump around...it keeps things interesting. Twins are fascinating. You should meet mine, she's invisible.

 
Therapy by stanfordchick Rated: K+ [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

This is a Sequel to New Families Form Easily....

I would suggest you read that one first but be independent and if you don't want to read that one then don't.

 Summary~~~

Sam, Dean and Jen are running low on cash, so instead of getting jobs Bobby helps them find a paying hunt. It seems like a simple enough job, find the werewolf and kill it but it proves to be more then it seemed, will any of them be able to survive it mentally or phyically??

 Read to find out... Dun Dun DUHHHH


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 7883
[Report This] Published: 16/08/07 Updated: 21/09/08


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 17/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: 13 bucks!?!?!??!

I read the other story and Jen is definately an interesting character. I'm very curious to see where you're going with the thing they're hunting coz I'm from Jersey and I already have a theory formed, but I guess I'll just have to wait anxiously for the next chapter to find out.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 03/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Voicemail

that was really cute. still curious about what they're hunting...

 
Summary: Dean is diagnosed with an illness that requires long term care.   This leads to the Winchesters becoming a family and getting a taste of normal or as normal as things can get for the Winchesters. 
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 217402
[Report This] Published: 18/08/07 Updated: 25/06/08


Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that's just cruel to end the chapter like that! i'm so curious as to what the hell is wrong with dean and just when you think you're gonna find out, you cut off the chapter like that? Can't wait for the next one though.   This is an awesome and curious beginning.  Plus i love the whole Junior thing...is it an Indiana Jones reference coz it totally reminded me of Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade.

Author's Response:

No, its not a reference to Indiana Jones.  I was just looking for a nickname for Dean and since I made Dean John Jr.  it seemed like a good one.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

good chapter. totally knew dean wasn't going to be responsible at the carnival. Plus i like the way you described bobby and his attatchment to the boys.  Good job. can't wait for more

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad your enjoying Bobby in this story.  I just love his character.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 30/08/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

these cliff hanger endings are killing me! i can't wait to find out what happens.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

this is a good intro into the school and getting them out of bobby's.  i'm curious to see what's gonna happen on their first day.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 13/09/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

good chapter. I liked how you went back and forth between the boys' day. It was a really creative way to show what happened to each of them.  And i loved that you gave Dean's friend the last name of a shot gun too.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

really hope those jerks don't hurt our dean.  he's having a hard enough time as it is. and that whole eagle idea...i was totally expecting you to put that they wanted to tie him to a cross and paint an S on his chest. Totally had a flashback of clark kent stuck up there for a minute.

 
Reviewer: Magos186 Signed
Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

of course dean can never catch a break because the universe seems to always be against one dean winchester. hope he doesn't get too much worse though. and i loved the whole sex section. it was interesting. and seriously, everyone needs a mother like kelsey.