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Penname: Winchester07 [Contact]
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Real name: Arie Status: Member Member Since: 12/06/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by Winchester07 Summary:
New Families Form Easily but it's hard to leave your old ones... The boys meet a friend/ hunter's family.. and the boys see their childhood repeating before their eyes except this time the siblings are girls.... And to make matters worse something is killing children around town.. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 30648 [Report This] Published: 22/04/07 Updated: 29/07/07
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NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.
Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09
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Date: 22/11/07 Title: Chapter 23: Figured You Out Love it. Summary:
Sam has a terrifing vision of Dean dieing at the hands of none the less that the demon but there is something driffrent with this demon.Rember I do not own Sam or Dean, or anything to do with supernatural but I do own Crystal lol. Warning sort of Dean O centric and it has some spoliers in it. and sexual content. Injoy and please if you take the time to read it take an exstra minite and review to. It takes place around the same time as Some Thing Wicked Categories: Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 46219 [Report This] Published: 05/05/07 Updated: 23/01/08
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Date: 21/07/07 Title: The Green Eyed Demon not bad
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Date: 22/07/07 Title: The Green Eyed Demon there are a lot of misspelled words and punctuation needs work
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Date: 22/07/07 Title: The Green Eyed Demon same here with the misspelled words and punctuation. You need to run your work thru a spell/grammar check before submitting it.
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Date: 22/07/07 Title: The Green Eyed Demon its much easier to read this way. when you type OH...do not put just the O. Also you've got some sentances mixed up. don't forget to add that there are tags to certain epi's either....you've got stuff in here from Something Wicked and Devils trap OH and what happened to Heather??? Author's Response: ok ok, you will soon find out
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Date: 22/07/07 Title: The Green Eyed Demon ok dont get pissy but 90% of that was from Something wicked....its wasnt very original. you really need to have your stuff proof read before submitting it. There are a lot of mistakes...its not ammonia its pneumonia. The characters name is Michael not Michelle. I'm not buying the whole "little sister" thing either. Just doens't fit. Author's Response: kk thanks for the feed back it helps me get better
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Date: 22/07/07 Title: The Green Eyed Demon short. way to short and you spelled the other characters name wrong....
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Date: 22/07/07 Title: The Green Eyed Demon OK again with the snatching scenes from the show....you really to not do that. No tag for the show either...and what happened with Cyrstals sister? The bar burning down? More selling mistakes...it takes so much away when you have to stop and try to figure out what the word is and try to get the right word that should be used. for example....when meg says " i went, I saw, I conquered"...not concentrated. I'm not trying to be a bitch....just trying to help you out. Get more of your stuff in the story and not snatching scenes from the show. Author's Response: ok thanks for the feed back i will trie I have a bunchof new ideas the storie snaching was to triy and gett the creative stuff started in my head Summary: Why Dean hates rats.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1095 [Report This] Published: 08/05/07 Updated: 16/10/07
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Date: 19/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 LOL....Rats...i have 4 of the furry little buggers as pets.
Author's Response: I used to raise them myself but mostly because I owned several BOAS and PYTHONS ........ Summary:
Tragedy strikes the boys once again, and it's going to take everything they have to get through the latest turn of events. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 87324 [Report This] Published: 19/05/07 Updated: 22/10/07
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Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 I have to say this is very well written. You have done your research with this. My grandmother had a stroke and i know first hand how cruel people can be.
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Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 WOOT!! This is good. Reallu good. Can't wait for the next chapter. Summary:
Three weeks after the fire. Where were the angels? Spoilers for What Is and What Should Never Be. Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3314 [Report This] Published: 22/05/07 Updated: 23/05/07
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Date: 19/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 very nice. i like it. Summary: What might have happened if Sam had NOT pulled the trigger that first time.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2938 [Report This] Published: 22/05/07 Updated: 22/05/07
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Date: 19/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like it...good job Summary:
After millennia of evil deeds, a fallen angel is given a second chance and is reborn as a mortal. 28 years later and he’s gotten himself into a spot of bother. Spoilers throughout Season 1 & 2 and this is ending up as an AU. Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadows of a Morning Star Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 61077 [Report This] Published: 24/05/07 Updated: 24/06/08
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 22: Don't play with fire WOW. This is really good. Can't wait for more. Summary: In his final moments John could not be more proud of his sons. The epic battle with the Yellow-Eyed Demon was finally over and now he could finally rest. John's POV during his final moments of "AHBL Part 2"
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2151 [Report This] Published: 30/05/07 Updated: 31/05/07
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Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is incredible. I love it. Thank you so much .... its appreciated :D Tara x0x Summary:
Sam and Dean run into a wave of bad luck and receive help from a friend. This story re-introduces the Character Sara Powers from Thank You and Goodnight Milton.
Categories: Romance, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 25877 [Report This] Published: 08/06/07 Updated: 22/06/07
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Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is good. Sara to the rescue...girl power!! Summary:
Story line: Dean and Sam finish a difficult salt and burn and then go looking for a hunt. What they encounter in a small community confuses everyone until Dean engages that wonderful, quirky memory of hisCategories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 27675 [Report This] Published: 09/06/07 Updated: 19/08/07
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Date: 15/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Let's Take a Break i like it. 'specially the ummmm description of Dean in the mirror....*sigh*
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Date: 15/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A Haunting We Will Go wow...thats ummm...well...umm....errrmmm...eww. what can I say, Jackie....some stories are like that..... sometimes "EWWWs and "YUCKKKs" are as wanted as "sweet" and "awesome" (if the writer was aiming for gross !!
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Date: 15/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Dinnertime LMAO!!! Fried cheese curds!!!! LOL I live in Wisconsin...!!!!!!!! And yeah ...they are a food group up here. I grew up in Racine, lived in Green Bay, Bristol, Madison and Manitowoc before coming to Florida. Brat Stop was a favorite hang out ....I miss State Fair and Summerfest and all the foods the boys enjoyed.
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Date: 15/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Headaches Ya know anytime ya wanna stop with the descriptive descriptions of Deans anatomy is fine by me...damn woman you're killin' me...LOL I love it so far....rawr...LOL Author's Response: Sorry.....I'll make you hate me in chapter 6....
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Date: 17/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Headaches very good. I agree. Thank you so much for continuing to read my story....means a lot as do your reviews
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Date: 17/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Caught Napping ! Very cool. You get a chocolate chip cookie...LOL I like the stories that arent always blood gore....stake 'em and burn 'em. This is really good.
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Date: 17/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem Yeah i'm thinkin' it was bloody enuff..LOL Yikes...LOL Devour?????? OMG thats funny. Our poor Dean..... and poor guilt-ridden Sam....... i hope Dean mends quickly because i'm already plotting their NEXT adventure.... |
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