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Summary:

Dean discovers something disturbing from an old friend and has to try and bury his feelings when he discovers just what happened after Detroit.

Spoilers 5.22 A take on the start of S6.


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Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 39481
[Report This] Published: 27/05/10 Updated: 16/10/10


Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 14/06/10 Title: Chapter 6: Feels Like Starting Over

Glad the boys are talking again..but still not to sure about Lisa. She knows..obviously..what Sam went through, so it just don't sit well with me that she would tell him that about being left in Hell.
I'm anxious to see where your headed. I'm thinking there's more to this story than Sam just not wanting to upset Dean's "apple pie life" by telling him he was back.
Look forward to the next and where the boys are headed.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Thanks

The story is about to take a little turn for the worst for the boys!. :)

Mary xx

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 14/06/10 Title: Chapter 7: Brother

I was thinking there was more to Sam's story and now after reading this chapter I'm sure of it. Not sure what you got planned, but I can't wait to find out. Of course, after your words at the beginning of the chapter, I'm not sure how much I will like it. LOL
So sad at the end. It broke my heart that Sam was so broken, but I'm glad Dean was there for him..in his normal big brother way. I may be a Sam girl, but Dean has a place in my heart as well.
I'm still hooked..Look forward to you next.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Thanks Jane

Sam and Dean are both a little broken in this one. More Sam and Dean to come but a little diversion in the middle!

Mary xx

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 16/06/10 Title: Chapter 8: Something Wicked This Way Comes

Poor Dean..trying to stay out of the hunt, but it just keeps pulling him back in..and Sammy can still kill demons with his mind..nice twist, but I still think there's more to his story than that.
Can't wait to find out. I was glad to see your next chapter..now I'm ready for more.
You were worried because this chapter wouldn't "play nice", but don't worry your doing a great job.
I look forward to the next. Let's hope Dean makes it in time to protect Lisa and Ben.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Hey

Yup, can't escape what you are sometimes not matter how much you'd like to.

I'm enjoying writing this story, glad you like it too! Mary xx

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 23/06/10 Title: Chapter 11: Twister

So Meg wanted in Dean all along..and he played right into her hands. Pool Dean..and now both are gone and Sam has no idea where to look. I really hope you kill Meg in this story..because she really is getting on my nerves.. just, please get her out of Dean first. Sam seeing Dean's black eyes reminding him of his time downstairs..broke my heart. I'm glad Sam and Lisa are getting along better though, and she sure put Meg in her place. GO LISA!!!
I'm worried about Dean now..and how dare Meg, well Meg in Dean, get anywhere near the Impala.
Look forward to your next..update soon!!!
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Yeah Meg wanted in Dean to get at the keys to Lucy's cage. Glad you are enjoying it!

Thanks, Mary xx

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 26/06/10 Title: Chapter 12: Help Me If You Can

These cliffhangers are killer..Loved this chapter. The battle between Meg and Dean..great stuff. I'm hoping Dean overpowers her and keeps her from shooting Sam. Look forward to your next chapter.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

I know I am evil that way!

Glad you are still enjoying and thanks for the reviews, Mary x

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 29/06/10 Title: Chapter 13: Fallen

Excited to see another chapter so soon..but sorry Rufus had to die. I am glad it was him and not Bobby, though..and like Sam I'm curious about this blue bottle that Cas gave Dean. Could it be holy oil maybe? Can't wait to see..and Sam's driving the Impala. I think he missed her, too. He's been homesick. Look forward to the next.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

I liked Rufus but I needed a body! lol

The blue bottle will come up later.

Thanks, Mary xx

 
Summary:

S3- A hunter learns Sam maybe a threat, so he kidnaps Sam and disables him, so that he's not useful to the demon side. Sam may be able to use the disability to save Dean from his deal. Limp Sam, Protective Dean.

Sounds of Silence

Awesome banner by Chasidern! A big thanks to her!

I also wanted to thank my wonderful beta - sendintheclowns- she is the best!


Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 33613
[Report This] Published: 10/06/10 Updated: 25/07/10


Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 15/06/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great story..just read all 5 chapters back to back. I like where your going and interested to see how you plan on Sam being deaf helping Dean out of his deal.
I'm thinking there might be some big brother angst coming in the next chapter..am I right? Can't wait to find out. Look forward to your next chapter.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Hi Jane, so glad that you like it so far.  Thanks so much for taking time to comment- it is very appreciated.  And you would be right about the big brother angst.

More soon! Claudia

 
Summary:

Dean said it was an average salt and burn, nothing extremely hard or extraordinary about it, just routine, and well normal if your last name was Winchester. Unfortunately, Dean was wrong about this one. A Limp Sam, Big Brother Dean Story.

THANKS CHRIS FOR ANOTHER AWESOME BANNER AND YOUR NEVER ENDING PATIENCE WITH ME UPLOADING AND USING IT.  DENISE

 


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 11382
[Report This] Published: 21/06/10 Updated: 06/10/10


Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 25/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm thinking Dean's gonna be eating those words. When do the boys EVER have an average salt and burn..I'm thinking..I got nothing.
Great start Denise..was excited to see another story. This break is way to long..look forward your next chapter..soon, I hope.
Take care,
Jane

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 28/06/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Didn't I say he would be eating those words?..oh well, I guess Dean will never learn. I see some big brother angst in the next one..can't wait to read...soon, I hope. This LONG break is really a killer.
Take care,
Jane

 
Summary:

Sam and Dean investigate the deaths of 3 students at the Ohio University Campus, in Athens. Is the vengeful spirit of a former patient from the abandoned mental asylum responsible or is this something the brothers have never encountered before?


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
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Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 35286
[Report This] Published: 30/06/10 Updated: 20/12/10


Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 01/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not looking good for Dean..How is Sam getting him out of this one? Can't wait to find out. Great start..look forward to you next.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

Thanks so much for leaving a review.

Dean is in a world of trouble and Sam is all angsty Oh dear. (don't you just love it?)

Chapter 2 is in the works so won't be long.

Thanks again.

Elaine

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 15/07/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Not only is Dean suffering, but so is Sam..ooh girl you are cruel. Enjoying this story..look forward to your next chapter. Soon, I hope.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Oh Jane, it seems you know too well. LOL

I know I'm a bad person. But you you love me... right? Thanks for the review, I'm pleased to hear you are enjoying ADIT.

Cheers

Elaine

 
Summary:

Banner by Chasidern

A gun, a dark room, and Dean at the end of his ability to cope could be the combination that finally destroys him. WARNING: Dark, suicidal thoughts not death fic.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2041
[Report This] Published: 18/07/10 Updated: 18/07/10


Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 23/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very dark Muffy..and so sad. It's true these boys keep each other human. I'm glad they have each other and I'm glad your back. Look forward to reading more chapters to your other stories...keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Take care,
Jane

Author's Response: Thank you so much hon! They do keep each other (and me) human! I am back and madly working to catch up! *huge hug*

 
Summary:

"He was never going to stop yearning for his brother."

Dean makes a choice that leads to some disturbing information and a heartwrenching discovery. Takes place one year after the season five finale.

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Thanks to Chasidern for another awesome banner!


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Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 18782
[Report This] Published: 22/07/10 Updated: 23/09/10


Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 27/08/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

This one broke my heart. Poor Sam..he's hurting so much. I'm afraid when they hit the road together, he won't be able to hide it from Dean.
He really needs his big brother, but Dean's anger with him and not trusting him is blinding Dean to how much Sam's needs him..and he won't even let Bobby comfort him. Sad!!
If this breaks my heart, I don't know how it will be when he finally lets all this out...I just know he won't get any sleep until he does..and Dean is there to forgive him.
Look forward to next week. Talk to you soon.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response: Thanks Jane.  Sam is really in a bad way.  He's been holding all this in for a year but seeing his brother again, well, it's gonna do something to him.  He's going to want Dean to take care of him like he always did but at the same time he wants so much more for Dean than just being his brother's keeper.

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 23/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I was so excited when I saw a new story from you. I can tell already it's going to be a good one.
Poor Sam.. he wanted to come back and see Dean but now he doesn't want to pull him from his "apple pie life" because he thinks he's happy. I'm afraid this might not end pretty..a lot of angst there... breaks my heart.
I'm thinking that was Castiel that pulled him out..am I right? Look forward to you next chapter..a whole week, really..just kidding.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Thanks Jane!  I hope you continue to like it!  I'm not going to tell you who pulled Sam out....yet, but I will tell you there were two hints as to who it was. And look, it's almost Thursday again! :)

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 31/07/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

O.k. I'm thinking Dean is going back to Stull Cemetary. I hope it's just to try and bring Sam back..not anything else. It better not be anything else!!
I'm also thinking Bobby called Sam. Can't wait to find out. I hope the boys get back together next chapter because poor Dean really needs Sam...can't wait to find out.
It's a good thing I go back to work next week. At least I have something to keep me busy till Thursday. LOL
Take care friend,
Jane



Author's Response: What if it is something else?  :)  How's that for a teaser?  I thought you were probably going back to work soon.  All our schools around here are gearing back up.  See you Thursday (well, if not before then in SH). 

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 06/08/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

What else could the rings open? I'm intrigued..and you are officially the queen of cliffhangers. LOL
I never doubted that Dean would lose his hunter instincts..no matter how much time has passed. Glad you feel the same..and who is that familiar shape behind Bobby? I'm torn between Sam or Cas...can't wait till next Thursday to find out. Talk to you soon.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Queen of cliffhangers?  I can live with that. :)  I was thinking when I posted this that you and Sarah were going to kill me because you still don't know if the familiar figure is Sam or not.  I promise you'll find out who it is on Thursday!  :)

I think it's going to be really weird to see Dean as a civilian but I hope the show lets us see some of it.  I think it would be hard to adjust.

Thanks for reading and reviewing Jane! 

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 14/08/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

WOW... you packed alot of emotion into this one short chapter. You brought tears to my eyes.
Then his brother's arms were around him and Dean buried his face against Sam's neck, breathing in the familiar smell of this little brother, weeping uncontrollably and once again, he was whole. That one sentence neatly wraps up Dean's feelings.
"Sam, he's pissed, hurt and confused but it doesn't take away from the fact that he hasn't let go of your hand."
This time Sam's smile lasted longer.
Sam knows Dean's angry and he's not done letting Sam know, but he's happy to be back with Dean, too.

I'm thinking fallout next chapter..can't believe I have to wait a week. Talk to you soon.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

I was actually afraid the sentence about Dean being whole might be a bit much....too chick flicky perhaps, but after I wrote it, I couldn't change it because it's true.  Chick flicky or not. :)

And yep, fallout is on the way!

Thanks Jane and see you Thursday!

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 23/08/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I finally got around to reading this. One good thing..it's Monday, so I only have 3 days to wait. lol
I'm worried about Sam. He not doing so well..I'm thinking a meltdown is in his future. I'm glad he has Dean now to help him through..and he really wants them rings destroyed, but not for himself but for Dean. I'm like Dean..that thought didn't cross my mind till Sam brought it up.
I know it's been mention in the spoilers that Sam is more like the Dean of season 1, but I'm thinking it's more a cover up. I honestly hope that your Sam portrayed in the story is more the Sam we will see later in the season. Even Jared said Sam is messed up. Let's hope his shoot first ask questions later attitude will change back to the Sam we know and love.
I'm freaked at how close you are to the spoilers..alright what do you know that I don't. You been hiding stuff..lol
Look forward to the next. Talk to you Thursday if not sooner.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks Jane.  I'm not too keen on Sam being all hard either.  It sounds like he may even be worse than Dean ever was.  I can imagine he is gonna be messed up because he has such a good soul and to go through everything he's been through.....it just breaks my heart.  I hope that he does revert to the Sam we know and love or my heart may not be able to take it.

Jules suggested that I had kidnapped Kripke but you know I would have invited you girls over if I had!  *sigh*  If only.  I was so excited when the spoilers started coming out and then I thought:  crap, people are gonna think I wrote this after I heard the spoilers but I swear, I didn't!  I'm channeling my inner Kripke....now there's a very big.....IF ONLY!  :)

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 03/09/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Poor Sammy..thinking he's not worthy to be a part of Dean's life. He's thinks Dean deserves so much more than him as a brother, but Dean doesn't care he just wants Sam to tell him what's going on with him. He better wake up and here his brother cries for help..Sam needs him to wake up.
The scene with the Impala and toy soldier...just WOW. Sam remembering his brother's beaten and bloodied face..heartbreaking. You have stirred many emotions with this chapter..and I have to wait a week for more!! This will be hard.
Can't wait till Thursday.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

Both these boys have such low self esteem it kills me!  They are both worth so much more than they realize.

Everyone seems to be wanting Dean to wake up!  Maybe with all of you hollering wake up, he'll hear you.  :)

I can't hardly imagine how Sam must feel knowing it was his body, his fist, that beat Dean to a pulp but he had no control over it....until he saw that toy soldier and it brought back all the memories of his brother's love.  Now it just brings back memories of what he did to his brother.

Thanks Jane!  Talk soon!

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 10/09/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Poor Sammy..you left him in the dark. I'm thinking Dean's fixing to get a rude awakening to what Sam's been going through.
I'm glad you wrote the amulet into the story..some angst about that on the way, too.
A week..it's going to be long..but so worth the wait. Talk to you soon.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

I know!  People keep pointing out that Sam is going to be in the dark for a week!  Now I feel bad.  LOL

Yes, the amulet thing has been bugging me ever since Dean tossed it into the trashcan.  I certainly hope the writers bring it back this season and I would love for it to have been in Sam's pocket all this time.  I would squee so much!  And you know me, Jane, because I'm not done with it yet in this story. :)

Thanks and we'll talk soon!

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 18/09/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Favorite line: "Sammy, you never had to do anything to matter to me." At last, Sam has Dean's trust..and so glad Sam let Dean read his journal. Now Dean understands all Sam's went through and why he chose to let Dean have his "apple pie life", but I'm glad he told Sam that he was all the family he needed...awww.
Loved seeing Cas..little worried about him for a minute, but of course he had to make his big entrance..lol
Hopefully there will be more about the amulet next chapter, and maybe who actually got Sam out..maybe?
I am loving this story...look forward to next week and the next chapter which will bring us right to the season premiere. Great timing.
Talk to you soon.
Take care,
Jane



Author's Response:

That was one of my favorite lines as well, Jane. :)  Would love for Dean to say that and Sam actually believe it. 

I think that those loose ends you're wondering about will all be tied up in the epilogue next week.  I don't like leaving lose ends and I think I've covered them all.  *fingers crossed*

We're almost there!  Season six!  I can't wait.  Oh and I hope you have a good vacation this week!  Breath some mountain air for me!

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 25/09/10 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

This is the perfect ending to a great story. If only it could end this way. Love that Dean put the amulet back on..and Sam said "We got work to do." It is his turn to say it..lol
I'm hoping the boys get back to this point..being together and hunting together..without the Campbell's so much. I'm having issues with them after the premiere..but that's a discussion for another place..not here.
I have enjoyed the ride you took us on in this story..and look forward to you next. Talk to you soon.
Take care,
Jane

Author's Response:

Thanks Jane.  I appreciate you hanging in there with me!

LOL Yes, it was Sam's turn to say it.  I really want to have that in there and the bitch/jerk thing too.  It's been so long since they've said that.

Yes, I have some issues with those Campbell's too.  And that discussion has been started so jump in!

 
Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 25/09/10 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

Forgot to mention..would really love to see a sequel to this story. Do not be afraid..lol You can do it. I will definately be there when your ready for support and whatever else you need.
Take care friend,
Jane

Author's Response:

LOL  Thanks Jane.  I really might do it.  Probably be awhile though as I have ideas but not sure of an ending yet.

 
Dig by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:  

Engaged in a frantic race against time, only one thought uppermost in his head....dig, damn you - dig!

Dig

Awesome story banner by Chasidern

Best John


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2895
[Report This] Published: 30/07/10 Updated: 30/07/10


Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 31/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was excited when I saw you had posted something new. You have been missed. Loved this story..had us guessing for awhile about who was digging. Could have been any of them, so was surprised when it was John. I was thinking of just the boys.
I loved the ending too. I can see him training them and being driven to do it out of fear. You gave us a jump off point for that. It explains Sam's resentment of him too in a way. He had to start training and being pushed by his Dad at an early age.  Nicely done..as usual.
So glad you're back!!! Hope to see more from you soon.
Take care friend,
Jane

Author's Response:

Hi, Jane,

Aww, thank you! I've missed posting, but the muse just didn't want to play, and neither did real life for a while there.

Ah, I kept you guessing? Awesome! That was the plan. Love a bit of misdirection.

And so glad you loved the ending. I think John - I hope John - was motivated by fear of what would come after the boys, and that's why he was so hard on them. He didn't always make the right decisions, and I certainly didn't agree with a lot of his choices, but I can't say he didn't love his sons, because he did. He just showed it in a really weird way.....*rolls eyes*...

Thanks, my friend, I'll chat to you soon.

Jules

 
Repairs by MuffyMorrigan Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Tag to Everybody Loves a Clown. After everything, there is more to repair than the Impala
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1505
[Report This] Published: 03/08/10 Updated: 03/08/10


Reviewer: supernaturalfan Signed
Date: 05/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 So touching..love the part about Sam watching out for Dean from a distance. Even when they're not getting along, they still watch out for each other.  Thanks for sharing this one again, Muffy. Great choice!!
Take care,
Jane