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Penname: Eternity12 [Contact]
Real name: Teagan
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Member Since: 10/06/07
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My name is Teagan and if I couldn't write I'd die. I live in Canada and I am a big supernatural fan, I alternate between writing my books and writing fan fic in my spare time to keep me busy. (especially when I get writers block on one project!) I very much enjoy reading other peoples fics, a lot of great work on here, give em a read if you can.
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Reviews by Eternity12
 
Summary:

 Sam has an admirer. And Dean has a hater. How far will she, or it, go to have him, and keep him? Spoilers for pilot (Like we all haven't seen that before, right?) Spoilers for Asylum too. (We've all seen that one more then once too, right?)

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Great artwork.  Thanks to everyone, and congrats to Mizpah for taking 1st.  I'd also like to send my deepest thanks to Vanessa for nominating it! That was the biggest compliment anyone could give!

For all those that don't particularly care for romance, it's my version of romance, meaning it's dark and twisted, not loving and caring.

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Big huge thanks to bulletbabe for the banner, it is so totally awesome and I thank her a million!


Categories: General, Romance, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 83389
[Report This] Published: 13/10/07 Updated: 21/03/08


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

YES! JAY IS DEAD

WOOHOO! that was awesome! aw man I hope Dean is ok, I am pumped for the ending. Thanks, its been a great ride!



Author's Response: Thanks!  I hope the ending won't be a let down.  It's got just one more little twist in it that hopefully everyone will like.

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG DEAN!

I can't stand dean in pain, and, well... well... well your evil! lol but it's good i like it  I can't wait to see what happens when Sam finds out.  



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Sorry about Dean and all that pain, but it all works out in the end, right? Thanks for leaving the comment, and big thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

It's ok to leave another review i presume? and I must say that i am very enthralled in this story, poor dean... and sam I can't even imagine what it's going to be like when he finds out I mean the anger the betrayal the hurt! he seems to feel so complete with her but really shes the bad guy err.. girl. 

I don't really know how dean will feel about it but i am looking forward to the next chapter! can't wait for your next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

You can leave as many reviews as you want, because all the authors love reading them!!  If you like it, review at will!

Thanks for reading and enjoying too!!

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Jay you b*tch, can't wait till Sam's boot is half way up your skanky @$$.

Doing good, glade Dean still has some snark in him. I love the suspese you give the readers, knowing more then sam knows, having him driving around unknowingly with the culprit whispering him sweet nothings, God I love how twisted that is!  

can't wait to see where you take it! 



Author's Response:

Wow, maybe I can find a way for Sam's boot to make it half way up her ass, that would be fun, wouldn't it? 

Don't know how much snark Dean will have left after what's coming to him, but we'll see.

Thanks for taking the time to read, It's an honor from each person that does!

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Damn! that was so worth the wait I can't wait to watch this time bomb explode! I'm glade Dean is pulling himself together and not waiting around for Sam to save him, though I don't know how much damage he can do being F.U.B.A.R.

It kinda ticks me off that Sam is so damn blind, but I guess infatuation is as blinding as the sun and as infectious as poison. Find him a cure and get him some sun glasses!!!! holding my breathe for your next update.



Author's Response:

Yep, finally found Dean's breaking point, too bad for the enemy. 

Great line, the sun and poison, I liked it!  

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

has my opinion changed of jay? slightly and not in a good direction either man she is crazy! at first I thought she was mostly the puppet master or chess player getting other more willing chess pieces to do her dirty work while she pulled the strings behind the scenes, weaving her black widow web. BUT NOW! she's taking it into her own hands and my god if I though she was crazy before she's a bloody psycho path now and I think my hate for her has increased!

you should think about sending kripke some of your ideas god knows your skill in writing has high potential, maybe he'll hire you!

as always holding my breath for your next update. 



Author's Response:

I could only dream that Kripke would care, and I can think of quite a few authors here to take with, that's for sure!!

We could singlehandedly end the writers strike for our show FOREVER!

(Dream on, dream on..)

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 08/12/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! cliff hanger from hell! I love it though this story is like drugs for me! excited excited excited! sorry excuse my hysterics, I just drank like five cups of coffee, I got a new cappuccino machine thingy. anyway back to praising your story, reading this chapter made me realize just how deep dean is in it. just thinking about how long he's been without his medications and how seriously crapped out you have to be to not feel a rat gnawing on your fingers or your face. i hate rats! as this story progresses you continue to make the reader (me especially) bite their fingernails in anticipation and fear. 

as always, can't wait for the next development. 



Author's Response:

Wow, I think the hysterics were contagious cuz now I'm all hyper too.  I'm really glad it's keeping everyone on their toes and really glad you like it.  Anticipation and fear huh?  That's awesome.

Hey, what brand is the machine, I'd like to get me one too!

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 11/12/07 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh thank you thank you way to go Sam! I was terrified that Dean was gonna have to endure being a rat snack for another chapter. the idea of all the emotinal damage durng all this was very well portrayed, like readying it actually made me feel the hurt. Sam must feel guilty as hell right about now, or worse.

(to tell you the truth I don't know the brand name, of the machine, my brother stole - errr - borrowed it shortly after it arrived)



Author's Response:

That's ok, think i'll just hit Starbucks.

And yes, the boys are thankfully together once again, but their problems are far from over.

Thanks for following and reviewing, and hopefully I'll get my a$$ moving on the next chapter soon.

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ahhhh... Very Clever, but it makes me wonder, is it dear old John or is Jay screwing with his head...

you sure know how to make a reader chase there own tails! loving it as always. Way to go Sam! you take charge boy, give our dean some TLC. God knows he deserves it right now!  



Author's Response:

I had three different ways to take this and at the suggestion of some trusted family members, John was the winner. 

I'm really glad you think it went the right way, thanks!

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

you had me worried at the beginning!  man you sure make that shifter hate worthy! that thing is so obsessed with sammy it's really creepy, i wonder if she could ever come to hate him or if everything he does would be ultimately justified by hating on dean? people are crazy and apparently so are the monsters.

rock on, keep up the great work! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. 

Yep, people are crazy, monsters too, but what would the world be without a few crazy people in it?

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

*cheering and chanting* Sam knows! Sam knows!... right?

wow this whole story Dean has been on a loop of the seven circles of hell! I'm worried, please don't die on us Dean! wow Sam is gonna beat the living crap out of that jay now (woohoo) can't wait to see where you take us on the last chap!  almost sad to see it end... (goes and eats Christmas chocolates) 



Author's Response:

Hey now, save some of those chocolates.  The last time I thought a story would take one or two it ended up being, like, five or something.  Ah, we'll see.

I'm jelous too, all my candy is gone.

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 05/01/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

you have put dean through a week of pure hell. I love the hospital scene. mesa thinks the good doctor found out what kinda pills jay slipped Dean! but thats just a guess can't wait for the next update, i hear it may be the last. 

all good things must come to an end I suppose. 



Author's Response: Yeah, they must.  Oh, and believe it or now, I'm not quite done dishing out the hell yet.

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 16/01/08 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Ya! now THAT'S an ending, I love it when they leave it open... does this mean your planning to continue? because if you are I am SO THERE!

thanx for the great read! I really enjoyed the ride.



Author's Response: Thanks for being a passenger for the entire trip! I'm really sorry we finally ended up at our destination.  Maybe someday it will continue, just as soon as I figure out how.

 
Summary:

Dean's POV - over a glass or three.

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Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Sanctified
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1353
[Report This] Published: 22/10/07 Updated: 22/10/07


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 My friend Jack

wow dean is funny drunk. poor guy drink away the pain and hit on woman, that sounds like Dean lol. good job


Author's Response: Thanks Eternity and glad you dropped by. Thanks for the review - love reviews!!!

 
Summary: Winchesters can be very ingenious. Especially when it comes to humiliating each other. What beagn the infamous Prank Wars, and why Dean so hates rats to this day.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2357
[Report This] Published: 25/11/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 08/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hahaha, that was awsome i think poor sa having his nose broken is payback enough for a mouse in deans mouth this goes to favs

 
Summary:

Sam and Dean are still in pursuit of their father, taking hunts as they come across them. After a brutal crime takes place a town they stop in Sam starts to have nightmares of the murder young woman. When both brothers begin to see the woman while they are awake they find themselves on the trail of dark religious sect and the fate of one child resting in their hands.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4521
[Report This] Published: 30/11/07 Updated: 03/12/07


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 01/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Tennessee Night

Hey, Hey! solitudechick I like your style! already this story looks like it's going to be a hell of a ride and it's just getting started!

can't wait to see where you lead us readers. 

this goes to my favs.....

 
Zodiac! by fantasycatcher Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

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Awesome banner by my awesome m8 Lou. Thanks hun;) 

In a Bar, Dean spots a busty blond and decides to throw Sam in the fire, thinking he's doing his little brother a favor. But things don't go as planned.

 


Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2189
[Report This] Published: 07/12/07 Updated: 07/12/07


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 08/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Zodiac

omg that was hilarious,  have tears in my eyes! "what big hands you have" AHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAAHAHAHA oh god your a genius.

Author's Response:

You're the sweetest, thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I am so glad you found it funny. Feels great to know it had you in tears of laughter.

Schelz

 
Straws by dragonfly11 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

SPOILERS FOR 'HEART'

He was dying right there in front of Dean and with a forced and pain-filled brave smile, he was giving Dean one last second to come up with a miracle---for them all. To make everything better like he used to be able to when he was five.


Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1032
[Report This] Published: 17/12/07 Updated: 18/12/07


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 20/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

your not thrilled with this? you should be far from disappointed my friend, that was beautifully written and it almost made me cry.

well. friggen. done. That is all there is to say!



Author's Response: teeeeeeee Thank you!

 
Summary:

Au tag to 'red sky at morning.When Sam let Deans taunts get to him it made for a very interesting morning after......one-shot.


Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1913
[Report This] Published: 20/12/07 Updated: 20/12/07


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG that was hysterical! sam laid a grandama! and omg that was just too damn funny, my stomach hurts from laughing it was just to perfect!

well bloody done. 

 
Stigmata by MissyLaMotte Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: When the Winchesters meet Jo in a motel by chance, they are just in time to help her out of trouble. Wounds open up mysteriously on her body and Sam and Dean desperatly look for a way to save their friend.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5264
[Report This] Published: 28/12/07 Updated: 30/12/07


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

for english not being your first language you write very well, I'm really enjoying your story so far! keep up the good work.

 
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Dean sat on his own bed and stared at the wall for hours, then put his face in his hands and sat like that for the rest of the night. Sam thought he heard him crying for a long time.

Sam hated that he couldn't get over his fear. He hated that he had nightmares. He hated that he was scaring Dean.

Sam hated himself for his weakness.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 14340
[Report This] Published: 03/01/08 Updated: 06/10/08


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omg that woman is evil! poor Sam! poor Dean! this story is amazingly written it feels so real, the reactions the thoughts running through their minds! you sucked me in! please update your last chapter!  

(thats a good review tactic, I should try it on my stories!)

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

man that kid bryce must have pretty much pee'd himself when he saw a very ticked off dean coming to kick is @$$, i know i would have. poor Sam.

that was really great! 

 
Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

haha all authors love reviews. i liked how the person sam thought about to give him strength was dean. it was... touching. jessica  threatening to remove dereks man hood with plyers made me laugh.

can't wait for chapter four! 

 
Summary:

Thinking back to better days isn't all it's cracked up to be.

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Thank you so much to whoever nominated, you made my day!


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2109
[Report This] Published: 11/01/08 Updated: 11/01/08


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 12/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The games we play

I liked the ending, it wasn't overly chick flick, it was just right. 

that part about the wendigo shit made me laugh. I like how your stories have humor as well as emotional things too. another good read. 



Author's Response: Thanks very much Eternity, I'm not really someone who likes chick flick (I'm so with Dean on that one) so I'm very glad this worked for you. Thanks for the review. X Louy

 
Summary:

I am a Player of Games. But as with any good game there must be a worthy opponent. Someone on which I can hone my deadly skills. Some would call them my prey. They would be right. My only objective is to win. I am as of yet undefeated. 

Dean is in a race against the clock as Sam is plagued by terrifying nightmares that leave him weaker and weaker. But how can Dean stop something that is all in his brother's mind?

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 6299
[Report This] Published: 25/01/08 Updated: 29/01/08


Reviewer: Eternity12 Signed
Date: 28/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Run, run as fast as you can

I have like a major phobia of wasps and bee's so this chapter scare the CRAP outta me! very discriptive by the way god i swear i feel like i'm running right beside sam with killer bee's on my @$$ ! excellent job!