Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 2 - What's In A Name
sleeping on the sofa will not change Sam's nasty ill-tempered mode will it.....Trevor is positively disgusting!!!
Author's Response: I didn't mean Sam to be quite so moody... He'll lighten up later, I promise!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Shifter
Sam is sure being moody....was he hurt or something....? He seems to be in a terribly nasty mode.....hopefully a bit of sleep....Sure don't think Dean will put up with this for long..
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 06:33 PM · On: Prologue
poor Allanah.........how sad ..her life was just beginning...
Author's Response: Yeah, tragic, right? I want to flesh it out a bit more though. Still, it's all good. Thanks for the comments!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 03:04 PM · On: Prologue
OK... you have my interest. That motel mgr sounds totally disgusting..ugh... I love the banter between the boys - you have them down pat. Dean's little teasing of Sammy about the bed- priceless.!!!!!! AWESOME beginning!!! Please post soon. BRAVO
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the positive comments!! I didn't actually think anybody would read it.
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 07:18 PM · On: Prologue
can't wait to read more of this. its really interesting : )
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on it...
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 02:54 PM · On: Prologue
Good start. keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 01:59 PM · On: Prologue
Holy Crap! This is A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!. I have to commend you for that little beauty of a line, about Dean and the 'sex crazy' demon...totally Dean. Also the whole banter about them sharing beds, great, poor Sam I could just see the lanky kid curled up on a small sofa! Everything about this story is interesting, I am very excited for more! p.s The credit card name, hilarious! -Bex
Author's Response: Thanks for the great comments! Yeah I wrote that line and instantly saw Dean saying it. I will hopefully have more up soon.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 11:03 AM · On: Prologue
Great beginning! The motel manager is absolutely disgusting!
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't like him either!
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 10:01 AM · On: Prologue
Hi Sammy brilliant loved it. you have the Sam and Dean talk just right. Love the brotherly banter. Well done Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to get it right after reading Witch's Canyon (which I didn't really like...)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 09:45 AM · On: Prologue
Definately liking it. You have some great lines in this and I love the way you describe just enough to give a clear image but alow the reader to use their imagination. Great first chapters, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you, too! I can't believe all the great comments the story's got so far! I will try and post more asap.
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