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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 05:28 PM · On: Something's Right With the World Today..

Hot Shannon---yeah! i'll give Dean a sponge bath anytime.
I forgot about the letter from Mary. It was a beautiful sentiment. Replacing the taunting inner voice that's been plaguing him with that of his mother's was a masterful touch!
Thanks for sharing this marvelous, and armchair gripping story!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 04:48 PM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

Incredible! The difference between "random snowflakes as they drifted lazily, landing and dissolving into the tiny pools of blood" and " the white flecks gently kissed his lids and cheeks" made a stark contrast and helped to illustrate the violence with the sudden peace.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 11:00 AM · On: We're Seeing Things In a Different Way...

"reliving the events of Blackwater Ridge in that Wes Craven sort of way where nightmares were nearly as real as the actual occurrence" A fabulous word picture that beautifully explains how emotions can get caught up in dreams.
Another excellent chapter full of bone-shattering tension. I'm off to the next chapter...

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 10:43 AM · On: The Lightbulb's Gettin' Dim...

The suspense and tension in this story are off the scale. Every chapter I read makes my neck and shoulders scrunch. I always have to read twice because the first time I'm basically skimming to see what happens then I go back to get the full affect. Fantastic!

Reviewer: irismay42 (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 04:52 PM · On: Something's Right With the World Today..

SPONGE BATH!!!! Goddammit I saw him first! (Don't tell me you weren't imagining yourself as the nurse in question there, Tree...!)
Liked getting Snarky!Dean back at the end there. And I loved how you mirrored those two sections where at the beginning Sam hoped Dean hadn't noticed he was hurt, but he had, and then later on Dean hoped Sam hadn't noticed he was hurt, but he did! Nicely done!
Oh and was that Evil!Sam making a brief appearance when he tried to convince Dean the Impala had gone to the Big Junkyard in the Sky?

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 08:33 PM · On: Something's Right With the World Today..

Great ending.
love the letter........
this was a great story. hurt Dean protective Sam and lets not forget Bobby; any story with him in it is awesome.
Renee

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 07:20 PM · On: Something's Right With the World Today..

Ah, magnifique! Just awesome!

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 03:10 PM · On: Again & again & again & again...

Easy schmeazy! He was still 4 hours away!!!
Oh hell, I can't believe you guys did that. this definitely has earned you a "Oh no you di'in't!"

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 02:52 PM · On: And God Knows It Ain't His...

Oh holy crap!!!! Sam should have told Dean that the darned thing can become invisible! I hope Dean doesn't become possessed by this freaky thing!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 02:37 PM · On: Something's Right With the World Today..

aw... back on the road again - sort of! lovely way to end the demon - poetic justice is served - and it looks like Sam and Bobby have no intention of letting Dean get away with lying that easily...
thanks for a great read,
cal

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 02:29 PM · On: I Don't Know What It Is...

Oh holy crapamole! Things are looking BLEAK!
Love the tension in this! My gut's wound up tighter than... something really tight (can't think up an appropriate metaphor).

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 10:59 AM · On: Something's Right With the World Today..

Thanks for this story, i've really enjoyed reading it, well done girls.

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 12:01 AM · On: Something's Right With the World Today..

I really loved this story. It was so very tense, and well-paced. It was very hard waiting for updates, I can tell you. Great job!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 10:35 PM · On: Something's Right With the World Today..

Yeah!! Safe again!! Love Sammy's curse box save-the-day maneuver!! I forgot about mom's letter, just like Dean did! Very sweet!! Great story.....i really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 10:32 PM · On: Something's Right With the World Today..

thankyou both for a truly fantastic story. One of my all time favourites.

Reviewer: crashing_nightingales (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 08:14 PM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

No, no how could you? Here you get all of our hopes up by saving Dean from the cliff & everything. Then you leave us with Sam in horrible peril & another evil cliffe?:K

Reviewer: irismay42 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/09 09:50 AM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

I'm hoping that was the pistachio demon's blood spraying all over the back window and not Sam's!
So you get Dean off the cliff and end on a cliffie? Surely there's something indescribably sick and twisted about that? Oh hang on, wait a minute... Tree and Steph... Sick and twisted... Yeah okay...

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 27/12/08 05:45 AM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

Been playing catch, but OMG that is one evil cliff-hanger. You'd best not be too long updating, I'm not sure I can stand the suspense.
This is an awesome story with one evil baddie and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 08:07 AM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

A great update, can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: supernatch (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 06:41 AM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

Nooo!!! Not Sammy too! That Demon needs a but kicking pronto!
Can't wait to find out how they get out of this one. Thanks for the Chrissy update. Best present EVER!
Kate

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 24/12/08 07:24 AM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

i cant wait for the end!!!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 24/12/08 01:00 AM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

So lovely and long -- but not quite long enough --- an evil cliffie on the side of an evil cliff! I'm hoping that Bobby is arriving just in the nick of time!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 24/12/08 12:55 AM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

Oh yea! I hope Sammy got the upper hand!! I was dying to know how Sam was gonna rescue Dean. THanks for the Xmas treat!! I needed that!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 23/12/08 09:30 PM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

Shoot! That was awesome. I was on the edge (no pun intended) of my seat throughout the entire reading. And doggone it, another cliffy. I cannot wait for the next chapter, though it deeply saddens me that it's the last one. :-( I'm gonna miss this story.

Reviewer: Aj_17 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/08 09:11 PM · On: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On...

I must say, you are a master of cliffhangers..... please update soon, i'll just be over in the corner twidleing my thumbs. lol, anywho, great job, i'm really enjoying this story!

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