you both need to know something the journey that both of you hold will never end . . . it will only get better for all eternity thank you both and steph. tell your mom miz . . .that whe has done well and i am so tired i will take a nap and write my stroy mentaly thank you.

i feel that this chapter was very sincery and devoted to being brothers.

where sam told him of his true feeling and how at times dean had noticed of what a jerk he at time was.

how that wicked spirit made its toll on dean.

i love this chapter thanks.

awww . . . youo beotchs. this is good and deserves osme kind of award.

i feel like dean at the moment and i just cant stop reading this amazing literature that i see before me.

its the first time i feel the same way as dean, boy is my younger sis going to be pussed for not allowing my body to tell my brain to go to sleep. . .i just can't let go of it. thanks.

as long as its not chocolate pudding then i guess i can still hang. hmmm . . .how about a pizza and a coke float yummmmy. . . hey you guys where late at that time.

ok now that is just simply COLD, you ass hat. Though i do appreciate the taunting that the spirit was not following Deans order's, now that that was funny to even comical relife.

again this vision that i have of both of them should be in big pictues. It made a clear referance of Sam, being young and Dean telling him to stay put and obye hie every order. i dont think that worked out.

i love this story, thanks.

hey, friendly doe i'd like to see that type of reaction on the youtube and that would be classical and it would be also called bloopers of Deano and 67' chevy.

this chapter had his laughters and seriousness and this is a comical to way of interesting the knowledge that his father being a doush bag,; didn't tell the boys of this creature.

Unforgiveable if something was to happen to dean and sam. 

 

well, considering the factor that this story is well given and has its proper allur of magic. All will be forgiven, and if you both want chocolate then maybe PUDDING would do the work?

This is a great lyrical story, for me i can place myself in the three characters place. this is rocken.

well this is an action pack story that i hope does not end.

I applaude the distracting convenance of Dean recalling to the love and affection to his parents and imaging them when Sam explain to him what they where doing.

It felt awkward for sam, i guess not to know all this important thing between his father and mother and not haveing Dean, Bobby, Caleb or the Pastor to tell him about it.

oh man *dries a stray tear from the coner of her eyes*

This chap did have everything. A hot nurse for Dean, chick flick awkwardness, a heartbreakingly sweet moment and above all some nice jokes. 

Thanks for sharing this story and I am still so glad it got nominated. This truly is one of the best fics I have read on this site, awesome. 

But may I say just this: WHERE THE HELL IS THE SEQUEL? You dont wanna tell me that demon was that easily destroyed? NO F***ING WAY! He'll be after them like (as we say in German) the Devil after a poor soul! Once he's got their scent (and taste)... I cant blame him tho. Happened to me and all the other fangirls too back when they got hooked on the very special Winchester crack. I just love being an addict... *happy sigh*

Anyhoo, know that I will vote for this story as it truly deserves it!

Hugs the two of you, Ilka

Oh yikes... no time for a long review again!

Thanks for bringing the Wendigo back, tho. Nasty critter, love that monster. Nasty nasty..

 The demon's attack on Dean made me think of the hellhound attacking him later on in the season. Very similar, both in its bloody reality and the emotional impact it had on me. Dude, tough read. Only Dean could manage to stay awake with all these wounds bleeding away happily. What a man. 

I am so glad Sam is here, finally. Even if I fear it wont be over too soon. Guess the younger Winchester has to fight with that thing too. He does look nice with a few scars and wounds too... I like my men that way!

Right, next one...

*waves*

oh geeeeeez... what are you doing to me?

You start off with the saddest scene ever and then have a guilt-stricken Dean waiting for me.

Loved this line here:  eyes that spoke of failure, lines that registered worry, guilt and years of buried emotions.  Perfect, brilliant writing. Emotional and hard to process... dude... I am in tears... tho that may be also coz the fever is climbing and I get a tad emotional then...

What have you purposely neglected to tell us?    you tell him Bobby! Man, how I love the Bobbster.

Oh Dean... tryin to trade his life for the unknown human up on the road... and tormenting himself about his bro... And Sam, that sad sad burial scene. Might've happened exactly like that. Oh dear... *Sniff*

trying to finish another one before bed time but not sure I'll make it... Might've to come back tomorrow to leave a review. Take care huns!

Ilka

Oh heck! Just a short one this time... sorry but that just was a mean cliffie!

What a nasty SOB! Gonna smack that bitch over its ugly head and kick it to the moon! Great! An no usual way of getting that thing under control, huh? Oh man if that aint the best demon sucker ever! However... I need to get back to Dean. See if he manages to evade that mean, nasty fugly!

 Hugs, Ilka 

hey ya chicas... review no 3 on the way!

okay... got a few comments and questions. Loved this one and I am soooo hooked. Glad I can read this story when it's finished to skip the long wait in between. 

First of all: Dean you idjit! Lying to Sammy is NEVER a good idea but lying about his injuries mustve been right up there with making a deal with a demon on the not-such-a-great-idea list. Sam woulda been able to bring meds and stuff plus he coulda prepared for towing the Impala from that ledge... tsk tsk tsk *shakes head at his idiotic desire to protect his GROWN UP bro* Seriously... tho I love him... aw I love him so much when he tries to breathe thru the pain and all that yumminess... mmmmh thanks for that!

fun bits: "bleeding to death, or worse yet, starving" soooo Dean and frankly I laughed out loud and so hard. It came at such a tense moment; I was able to breathe again there.

Bossy Sammy was fun to read too. The way he doesnt take shit from Dean... so cool. 

the mountain goat... OMG the mountain goat. i cant put into words how hilarious that was. Dean, rolling his eyes and being sarcastic while in pain is just soooo awesome. And you did a brilliant job at this particular side of HurtDean.

ouch bit: loved the way you described the pain in his leg: "lava-like, flesh consuming river of misery". Man, I cringed at that. Even felt a little echo of what Dean was going thru. Very sensory and credible description. Terrific. Oh and of course very yummy.... *wipes away drool*

creepy bit: okay.. a few questions (not that I think I get an answer other than "Keep reading" but hey... I can dream cant I?) or thoughts about that blurry, red eyed shape in the backseat. Man, that was creepy. *shivers*

I literally jumped when he saw the eyes. Dude, get the hell outa there. That thing is from one of them curse boxes or followed him out of the locker. That moment he thinks he's being watched, that's when it followed him out, I bet.

I remember all those devil traps in that place. What if they were keepin something in and not just out? Just like the huge thing built by Colt? 

And well, red eyed demons usually mean crossroads... but I got a different vibe from that thing. Biding its time, just sitting there and watching. EVIL.

And then Sam's remark to take a demon over a pissed off Bobby. True, but oh damn! Sammy, careful what you wish for.

This is all very intriguing and scary. I am curious as to how the whole thing continues. Lemme just say, Dean needs to get outa the car... NOW

thx for this one... off to the next one. 

Hugs. Ilka

 

OH CRAP! *gulps, swears, gulps again*

ohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrap......

awesome first chappie. Typical season 3 angst emanating from it--- Love the hovering and protective Sammy. 

And Dean is trying so hard to justify his decision about the deal. Yet he's all cranky and grumpy (which I adore about him)---

however:

HOW DARE YOU LET HIM CRASH THE IMPALA LIKE THAT!?

I mean, a crash in itself is bad enough. And I knew it  would be a bad, bad, bad (I used the f-word a cupla t6imes while reading that... something like this: "Dean, stop fudging groping for the fudgin cell and fudging look where you're fudging steering the fudgin car, you fudgin moron) idea to rummage for the effing cell phone while driving (I've had my fair share of close encounters due to that!)...

But having him break through the guardrail and downward? Seriously... even when I was little and we drove thru the mountains that was my biggest fear. Still is. Guess my fear of heights comes from that.

Dude... I can feel some hurtDean coming up (ooooh, yummy, bloody cuts and scratches, dislocated shoulders, broken bones and a coupla new scars to add to his collection *drools shamelessly* So? I am a weirdo with an LJ community dedicated to hurt Winchesters... did you expect any less?)...

And poor Sammy was so right worrying for Dean's safety after all. He felt it... even before it happened (talk about psychic mojo!). Guess he will have to go search for him now. Sammy, get your perky ass over there ASAP! (mmmh, his ass... and the arms...love his arms... oops, sorry got distracted)

*heads off to next chapter and is soooo glad there is a next one and she doesn't have to wait*

Hugs, Ilka