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Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 13/06/08 02:08 AM · On: Untitled

beautiful poem..thanks for writing..


Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for reading! :D

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 10:21 PM · On: Untitled

I've owed you a review on this since the day you posted it, and I've read it a number of times since then.  Still can't quite convey how I feel about it, but decided to quit stalling.  I adore poetry in general and this in particular.  Needs to come with a warning to remember to breathe.  Powerfully visceral.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much. Means a lot that you've read it and that you've actually read it more than once too! I'm a big fan of poetry so when the mood strikes, :) Thank you so much - I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 06:51 AM · On: Untitled

Wonderful Rae and congrats on making the featured, it was well deserved. - K

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you read it and liked it! :)

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 03:25 PM · On: Untitled

Really very touching, this is a beautiful poem Rae:)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Freedom (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 03:24 PM · On: Untitled

this was great, really good poem Rae. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 01:52 AM · On: Untitled

Lovely work Rae.


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 07:21 AM · On: Untitled

Am I allowed to review twice??

Your comment about designing this brilliant poem to have either Sam OR Dean's voice is a masterpiece in writing. When I first read it I had Sammy's voice in my head and that is how I was gunna review. The second and third (and subsequent readings) I have Dean's voice as my filter...

Sooo clever! I just love this idea!



Author's Response:

He he, yeah! It means it ups my review count :D

Thank you... I started writing it and thought of Dean but then I thought... no wait, Sam... and then it merged into Saan... or Deam... he he. 

And thank you for reading it more than once too! :) Really makes me feel good! 

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 08:32 PM · On: Untitled

Beautiful, poignant poem Rae.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read it! :)

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 10:56 AM · On: Untitled

Total, utter devastation in just 111 words... so simple yet so powerful... This is my first Supernatural poem and not only have you converted me but you may well have spoilt any others that I may now venture to read. Thank you for sharing this.

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate your comments and I'm really glad you liked it. There's lot of amazing Supernatural poetry so I'm happy  about the response my poem has got. Again - thank you for taking your time to read and review! :)

Reviewer: dookie (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 08:41 AM · On: Untitled

OMG ! *speechless*

 

awesome poem 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!!!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 08:18 AM · On: Untitled

stunning Rae. I could hear Dean's voice in my head. The flow, the mood...perfect

My heart is my own

My soul is my own

But I'd give them both to you

There isn't a Winchester lover on the planet not relating to those lines. *teary*

and your banner is BEAUTIFUL



Author's Response:

Thanks Cookie. The way I designed this poem was so it could be either of the brothers saying it, but Dean's voice is definately effective :)

He he, I know what you mean about those lines. And thank you about the banner as well! Lots of thank you! :D 

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 07:35 AM · On: Untitled

Awesome

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 11:49 PM · On: Untitled

oh, very awesome, Rae!! beautifully written and i have to say the featured spot is truly well deserved!! Loved it!!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Thanks Bambers! Means so much - especially coming from you. And the featured spot... I was really surprised but totally overjoyed! Thanks!

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 10:59 PM · On: Untitled

beautifully written and so touching

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 07:48 PM · On: Untitled

Excellent poem, loved it so much! The point just sails at you and yet it's still covered! GREAT job!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 05:25 PM · On: Untitled

Generally I'm not big on poems, but it's you so I had to read! This was truly beautiful...I may have to reconsider my feelings about poetry :)

Author's Response: He he, I'm glad I could sway you into reading poetry. I love writing it and I'm really happy about the response to this poem. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words!

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 05:20 PM · On: Untitled

Oh woah this is heartbreaking....its so lovely and simple and really emanates the pain...I can't begin to tell you how in awe I am of this poem, its beautiful!

-Bex



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! Your review means so much to me, I'm really happy about the response to this poem, so thank you!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:50 PM · On: Untitled

Beautiful.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:39 PM · On: Untitled

I think...I love...so sad...it expresses...speechless



Author's Response: Thanks! :) Thank you so much, he he.

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:02 PM · On: Untitled

This's really beautiful... Amazing work! Seriously, where did you get all this talent? When you publish something (anything), let me know 'cause I gotta buy it.

Author's Response:

Thank you loads for reading and for your wonderful comments, they really mean loads to me! As for talent... some things I write work... and some things don't... I only ever show the ones that do. I would absolutely love to publish something... I'd be in full on squee mode if I ever manage to.

Thanks! 

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 03:50 PM · On: Untitled

Holy Crap- I cant take post-deal Dean anymore- much less - the turmoil Sam is going through- wasnt even going to read this knowing what it dealt with- but cant pass up anything you write- and I should have known it was gonna get me....

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really really pleased you gave it a chance and that it did what it was intended to - get to you. Again, thank you, it means so much!

Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 03:30 PM · On: Untitled

I thought  it was beautiful, loved it,

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 02:02 PM · On: Untitled

Never enjoyed a poem before, but I liked this one. It definitely deserved a review!!

You seem like a writer who can just pluck ideas and feelings out of thin air *glares jealously* lol

sophie



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks. I love poetry and love to write it. So thank you for giving it a chance and reviewing.

I wish it were true that I could pluck ideas and feelings out of thin air... I just felt in a very creative mood when I wrote this and as a rule, I always like to keep pen and paper on me whereever I go just in case. 

So thank you for reading!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 01:43 PM · On: Untitled

really, really nice one, Rae.....touching.........loved the cadence as well

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 01:41 PM · On: Untitled

Beautiful and poignant. Nothing more to say!



Author's Response: Thank you! ...I had to actually look poignant up... how bad am I? And thank you!!

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