Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 04:12 PM · On: Don't Ever Let Go
At least they are out of there. Stupid stubbon Winchesters. lol Nice work! ~Kayla
Reviewer: meh (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 02:47 PM · On: Prologue - Black Stars Danced
Great writing and a totally captivating story. I love it, although my heart aches for poor Dean, who's been well and truly clobbered again, both physically and emotionally.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 02:21 PM · On: Bitter Hope and Broken Fears
Cal. Yea! you sent Bobby to save them!! I so so love The Bobbster he is a wonderful surrogate Dad and whilst Sam has Dean to watch over him, Dean NEEDS Bobby! You know what I love about your writing (well obviously the pain and blood and angst amd injuries but aside from that)? It's the lines that drag us to the normality of the situation or stage that your story occupies that is so in contrast to the horror playing out. EG: 'Sam watched a speck of dust fall from the beams' with that you ground all the unspeakable horror in possible reality and that's so terrifying!! You are very clever and funky and cool! Bev xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 02:08 PM · On: Dancing to the Hellish Tune
Hey Cal. Oow lovely! Especially liked these lines 'until the talons caught against the bones of his hip with a grating sound' ah sweet music! And 'As if the barn was occupied by nothing more than secretive teenagers' How provocative a contrast is that innocent description and your poetic torture? And 'Fear, rioting in his chest' Gosh what a splendid and terrifying concept! Love it, reading on! bev xx
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 07:51 PM · On: Dancing to the Hellish Tune
Great job! Poor Dean! We need to help him! ~Kayla
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 07:11 AM · On: A Touch in the Dark
Cal show him love just to torment him with the loss of it eh? Cal check your eyes? Are they black? Christo!! Bev xx
Author's Response: Not quite black yet - keep reading though, and i'm not sure if you'll believe me!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 07:06 AM · On: Innocent and Lost
Oh Cal, this is first bleak with the agony of potential loss, my heart ached for Dean's pain and grief and dispair, I could see him sitting on the porch with his hand in his hair trying not to break into a thousand pieces. and then you give us a little chance of redemption and I so want that for him, but it's fragile and I'm scared for what will come next. I can see why it was a tough chapter to write but you did it justice Bev xx
Author's Response: Redemption of a sort might be coming, but it's a long, cold and dark road before they get there...
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 06:41 AM · On: Quicksilver in the Moonlight
Cal Oh god you're gonna break Dean's heart! Bring it on Hunny all pain is good! 'cold green eyes' oh aren't they beautiful even when they are cooled with rage? Bev xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 06:35 AM · On: Through Terror and Out the Other Side
Cal Oh shit Belle's posessed? I love that first exchange, Sam being sarcastic (the boys funny!) and Belle/daemon fondling Dean and pain (likes me some pain heehee)! great line'lending the scene a kind of art house beauty that sickened him' wow that just painted the scene into reality for me Oh and the burning - healing - tearing up with her claws bit? All I will say is you are so good to your readers - poetic, loved it. 'past two sets of tears' - wonderful! In case i'm not being clear - I love it your writing is funky, off mainstream and fantastic Bev xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 06:23 AM · On: Perfect Rythym
Cal I know this is bad and I shouldn't be focusing here - but I loved the sex - hot! and the line 'go freaking Ghostbuster on these son-of-bitches' owww can I go too? I'll bring my own guns? Bev xx
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 11:43 PM · On: A Touch in the Dark
Fun? For us yes, Sam and Dean, not so much - lol. Good update.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 05:02 PM · On: A Touch in the Dark
ooh wonderful last couple chapters! Now the fun starts huh? I can't wait! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Won't wait long - next chappie finished and hopefully up tonight (vodka and 2am brainwaves to thank for that!).
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 08:18 PM · On: Quicksilver in the Moonlight
Great update! You have me so completely hooked here....Please give us another chapter soon! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks, more on the way if i can just get the next chappy to play nice...
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 06:57 PM · On: Through Terror and Out the Other Side
Wow, this is so intense! I love this story so much! Wow....no other words really seem to describe this chapter. Nice job! ~Kayla
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 12:49 PM · On: Never Breaking Contact
I was so sad when I read this chapter and realized that there wasn't another update! Please give us something soon! I love this story so far! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Only put that chapter onthis morning - for some reason it doesn't seem to be changing the update date, but I've some more coming very soon...
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 12:31 PM · On: Prologue - Black Stars Danced
Wow, okay, you definetly have me hooked for the entire story now! Nice work! ~Kayla
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 04:23 PM · On: Prologue - Black Stars Danced
This is just great, loved the knife through Dean's arm, his shredded T-shirt and the fact that you made him beg a little. Didn't think it could get better then you go break his shoulder-God I love the sound of a decent sized blowing out! I'm such a sick puppy - no wait I didn't write this you did so that must mean ............nono! sick puppy is a term of enderment in my world! Write more please! Bird x
Author's Response: Sick puppy don't even come close to what I've got planned for the boys - think this is gonna be a big story. More on the way very soon...
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 01:56 PM · On: Fury Riding His Words
Very nice start. Great visualization
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 02:19 AM · On: Count to Ten
Wow Cal, what a start. Consider me hanging by my fingernails here...and hurry back!
Author's Response: Thanks - its great to read reviews since i'm still finding my way in all this. Been crazy fun and games at work this week, but hopefully I'll get another two or three chapters up over the next couple of days...
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 02:50 PM · On: Prologue - Black Stars Danced
Hey this is just terrific. loved angry and pissed off Dean facing-off with the hot daemon, the knife through the wrist and his creaking ribs. Dean (and you) do pain sooo well! Loved too Dean talking and humming self into calmness for the hunt before he lost it and killed Sammy instead! it's wild and edgy and quirky and I WANT more. Write now !!!!!! (humming to try and stay calm) Birdie x
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:35 PM · On: Count to Ten
Staind lyrics really do work so well for the Winchester boys. Loved the chapter, your overprotective Sammy was very sweet. Great action so far, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:32 PM · On: Prologue - Black Stars Danced
Wow, that was an intense first chapter. I'm hooked. Beautiful hurt Dean and lovely angst. Loved the details.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 08:27 AM · On: Count to Ten
Damn - this is yet another gem from you cal, and I love Staind, so double whammy for me! I had to read the Dean talking to Dean bit twice before I figured out what was going on, but you may have done that on purpose. You have a really nice style to your writing and have captured the boys voices spot on. Great work!! Keep it coming - I'm pretty hooked on this story!
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