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Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Such a lovely start with Sam getting ready for his date and Dean loving every minute of it.  Nice relaxing evening for them both - then the gradual build up of tension.  You can feel Dean (and Galen) starting to climb the walls. 

Great action scene of the accident, poor Sam and Susannah, this really can't be good. 

I enjoyed the use of the dual perspectives, I must go and see what's happening next.  Thanks. Jane

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 2

Thanks for the update! OMG, my heart goes out to both Sam and Dean. I'm looking forward to more.


Author's Response: Thank you so much, more very soon!

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fab start, keep it going, I'm enjoying this one!

Dix 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! More very soon! :)

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

WOW, I could hardly breathe! LOVED the way you had each bros reflections along side with dialogue, really gave us insight into their thinking. I thought the boys thoughts and musings echoing each other was awesome. Dean encouraging and teasing his nervous brother was very cute.

The way you built the tension with Dean was outstanding. You drew out time so we could feel his panic escalate. Absolutely loved this line "The knot of tension had twisted into actual pain" *awesome*

Your description of Sam unable to move, his crippling pain and his efforts to get his phone were outstanding. I felt every nuance of his pain and frustration. Just brilliant.

And I have to ask...bar, cricket, chips??? Aussie??



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am blushing a little from your lovely review! And no, not an Aussie by birth, but an Aussie by adoption--my friend said it's official now LOL

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very intense. You did a great job describng how Dean's tension is slowly rising until he starts to panic. I have an idea where this might go and I think tough times will lie ahead for the boys, especially Dean. Looking forward to more. 

Author's Response: Thank you and yes, tough times might be ahead for the boys! :D

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG.... you didn't waste any time getting the tension up high...WOW!!

You have some style- I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!

Your verbal pictures have me in a panic for Sam.

OUTSTANDING opener!!!!

PLEASE POST SOON.

BRAVO



Author's Response: Thank you so much! *blushing*

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

OH MY GOD!!! Loved this. Can't write this reviewfast enough!

I am dying to know what happens next......please update soon!!

You seem like such a natural writer, and the way you built up the tension through Dean's anxiety was excellent!

sophie :)



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll try and be regular on my updates. I hate waiting o I try not to make other people wait. 

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