Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

adorable.  leave it to sam to not only find a beautiful piece of jewlery but to have it be a protection charm to boot.  the only thing bad (althought it's not really bad just a slight comment) is that i find it interesting how you can describe them having hot steamy sex but you call it sam's thingy.  I just find it really interesting how you can go into such detail but you can't say it's actual name or even the tame version that everyone on this site seems to love: manhood.  That's the only tiny criticism i have.  other than that i love this story and i'm going off to read the honeymoon right now.

Author's Response:

Not my fault, I lost the original file nad  had to copy it off a messageboard that I was a member of.. and of ocurse the board AUTOMATICALLY cleans up language, including "cock" and the like.