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Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 07:11 PM · On: The Devil Inside

I liked how you referred to "Something Wicked" in this chapter. I liked how you had Sam relate to Dean being a big brother by having him protect the spirit of the little boy. It will be interesting to see who is beating this spirit up and why?

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 05:10 AM · On: So Much Fear

So a scared, hurt, sad little boy looking to Sam for help - great choice, if anyone has empathy to relate and help it's our Sam. Excellent story line!!
Great work the way you exposed the boys differing perspectives to get the same job done - "(Dean) was perfectly happy to send this spirit back to wherever it should be, no questions asked...Everything for Sam had to make sense, had to have a purpose" Very well written.
And my fav part *big sigh* "Do you trust me?" Sam asked again. "With my life," Dean answered" - Loved how when Sam cornered Dean, he had only the real answer. We know Sam knew the answer before he asked his question. Just loved this scene, you painted a beautiful image. Top job!

Reviewer: hgarf (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 11:41 AM · On: So Much Fear

Hi,
This is a fab story. Can't wait for the next update so, pretty please with sugar on, don't leave me waiting too long x x x x x

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 07:07 AM · On: So Much Fear

So keep going !! Fab
Dix

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 10:36 PM · On: So Much Fear

Yap! It's getting to be good!
Update soon!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 07:20 PM · On: So Much Fear

This was another good chapter. The plot thickens. The spirit of a little boy is somehow involved. I can't wait to see what happened to the little boy. I liked your word choice in this chapter.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 06:40 PM · On: So Much Fear

You pump out these updates so fast! I'm so glad because if you didn't I would be going mad with anxiety! Great update!
~Kayla

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 06:06 PM · On: So Much Fear

I believe you when you say that it's just getting good now. This's very, very interesting. I also think that your Winchesters are really themselves - which's great!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 05:59 PM · On: Ring Bell for Service

So cute that Sammy's worth it :D This's mysterious... I'm gonna read the next chapter right now -->

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 05:55 PM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

I just started reading this, good first chapter. "Looks like we're not going to have to work very hard to find anything supernatural here, because it looks like the supernatural has already found you." Great line!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:57 PM · On: So Much Fear

You're right--it is getting good. Will be looking forward to the next addition.

Reviewer: quikshadow (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 07:59 PM · On: Ring Bell for Service

Great chapter! They mystery is getting started. I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 12:43 AM · On: Ring Bell for Service

aw, "It's okay, Sammy. You're worth it" *sigh*
I'm really intrigued that the injuries appear days old...Poor Sammy, love is line "before there's nothing left of me". And of course Dean noticed his shudder of fear, when it comes to Sam he misses nothing and your words showed us that in perfect timing in your story.
And I loved your line 'or you two will be leaving here in pieces so tiny that people will think you were cremated" tooo funny, well done. And Dean's reply "we like all of our pieces in...one...big piece" -so Dean you had me smiling.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 08:28 PM · On: Ring Bell for Service

That was really freaky. The whole mirror thing. I loved this chapter! The plot thickens :0)
~Kayla

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 07:34 PM · On: Ring Bell for Service

This was another good chapter. I am curious to find out who is behind Sam getting hurt. I liked the humor in this chapter. I can't wait until the next chapter.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 05:19 PM · On: Ring Bell for Service

Ouch--that hit to the eye sounded really painful. Almost felt it myself. Nice update.

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 05:21 AM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

wonderful! very descriptive and i cant wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 09:59 AM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

Ahh, very nice beginning. Sounds like this will be a very intriguing story.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 07:56 PM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

Oooh, interesting. Oh, I know how a bad bruise can feel! Especially when it's on your back....falling on the ice is never a good thing. ;0)
~Kayla

Reviewer: hgarf (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 04:53 PM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

Cant wait for the next chapter. Not often I get sucked into the story so soon. Hope you won't keep us waiting too long x x x x

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 04:26 PM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

probably the last inhabitant who's pissed off from dying of heat exhaustion in that room with no a/c..............Nice start Lia

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 02:55 PM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

Really really good, the humour is great, and I love how you managed to weasel in both brothers being topless, lol, (sorry please excuse my fangirl-ness).
A very original story line, can't wait for more! Five stars from me, it kept me thoroughly entertained!
-Bex

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 01:55 PM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

This sounds like the start of an interesting story. I like how you compared Sam's back to an abstract painting. I look forward to chapter 2.

Reviewer: mclarke (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 11:21 AM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

excellent start
plz update soon

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 08:46 AM · On: Bizarre Abstract Painting

First of all, your title is hard to ignore. Yep, you got my attention!
"you better be wearing boxers" made me laugh out loud, Dean snark in the middle of serious big brother business.
Great intro chapter, set the scene for us very well. I've got a feeling this one's gunna ramp up...

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