Supernaturalville
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

OK...I just love this story!!!!!

Sammy's  really sinking fast....Dean's just working around his pain- they need Tom.

I love the line from Sam..What..we tak'n a bath? I just couldn't stop laughing, especially with the ..personal space lines that the boys are always saying.Toooo cool!!!!!!!!!

Both boys are just about done in at this point- they need the steady , strong hands of Tom to keep them safe.

You are an absolute master storyteller-I just can't get enough of this!!!!

OUTSTANDING .....OUTSTANDING... WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE post soon.

Bravo!!!

#1 fan

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 6

honestly could dean be more self sacrificing? i mean he just got nearly ripped apart and he's not even takin five minutes to himself? he better in the next chapter coz if he doesn't, you should have someone smack him.  I love this story though.  update soon.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

Okay, you've got me worrying about both boys.  Hope the next chapter comes soon.  :-)

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 5

i love it! cant wiat to read more!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

omg...this isn't good ...it looks like Sammy's heading for pneumonia.

Words , delivery, tension-Outstanding story.

Just when the boys finally try to take a little care of themselves-GREAT turn of  events!!!!

Already, I'm waiting for Tom-they need him.

You have another winner on your hands- AWSOME writing!!!!!

More please!!!!!

#1 fan

BRAVO



Author's Response:

Thanks, as always I can count on you to tell me what you think.  I was worried, but I think this is heating up now.  I have alot of things working through my head.

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 3

OK...Sam's already   dodging Dean's questions-it will not do him any good in the long run-Dean will figure him out. OUTSTANDING!!!!

Hanging Hills, MO- boy talk about the end of the earth- not a place  for a sick Sam- come on Tom!!!

I just love this story!!!!!

As always , you are right on the mark-AWSOME WORK.

#1 FAN!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 5

Just discovered the fic and I'm enjoying it.

Great job writing the boys. Love the idea of the story. Hurt Dean is my favorite plus you have sick Sammy to make everyone happy.

Love how you write the overprotective nature of both boys.

Update soon! 

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 5

Gettin' good.  Can't wait to see what coming.  Nice update.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 4

poor Sam....he won't let himself just relax and be sick.......         Let's see ...   the last time they saw Tom it was because Sam was sick then too and still went out and almost got them all killed....... for a guy that got into Stanford on a full ride scholarship he sure is a dumbbutt!!!

update soon please



Author's Response: I know, I am such a sucker for limp Sammy and big brother Dean. 

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 3

wiping his nose on his sleeve like a sniveely little brother......   too funny !!!!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

Lovely update.  Sammy's sounding worse and worse.  :-)

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

ohmigosh ....sick already after 6 weeks recuperating at Tom's.....needs some serious vitamins, maybe..........poor Dean.....

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

nice slow start...Glad to see Tom again......

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 2

nice chapter.  totally made me cold though.  sam does not sound like he's going to be in a good place and let me just say if i was him, i totally would have smacked dean already coz dean is being really annoying.  but anyway, very good start and as always, i can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, I love the set up so far.  Can't wait to see some Sick!Sammy and Hurt!Dean.

I almost cried at the scene where Dean actually returned Tom's hug and he hugged him hard!  I think my lips were quivering.



Author's Response:

I thought the moment between Dean and Tom was just too good to leave out, kind of sets the next story.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I appreciate it.

supernaturaldh  

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved 'slightly stupid', so i am so excited that you have started on this!!! It was a great start and I have a feeling I going to enjoy this one as much as the prequel!!

sophie

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yeah!!! A nother one Cool

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

OK... I'm ready for this one.

Funny, I was re-reading Slightly Stupid last night-perfect timing!!!!!!

This one is off to a great start.

Nebraska-too cold for me.

 Sam is getting sick-Dean's already in big brother mode-OUTSTANDING

just waiting for Tom to show up- I'm just thrilled you have the sequel started.

Greedy me, I just want more ...

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!

#1 fan



Author's Response:

I look so forward to  your reviews.  You are so good for me, you build up my confidence!!  My mind just starting rolling this out, took me a week or so to rebound from Slightly Stupid and get this rolling again.  Hope it turns out well!!  I am confident you will keep me on the mark!!

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

yay! so happy that you're doing a sequel.  this is an awesome start to what i'm sure will be an awesome story and i can NOT wait for more!

Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start, can't wait for the next chapter

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