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Reviewer: Ryla (Signed) · Date: 22/01/11 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wow. Very compelling story. You do a good job :D Thanks for your hard work! Liked it!!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 11

I'm really glad I found this story. You done a good job capturing how evil Ed Gein really was. I've seen a lot of stuff about him and he was really evil. Nice in the end how he got what he diserved. I liked how your portrayed Sam and Dean in this story. Just wished Dean hadn't made the Mustang comment..lol..j/k Great story thou. Thanks for writing..

Author's Response:
I'm glad you found the story, as well. Thank you so much for the kind review! :)
~Sierra

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 11

A tremendous ending! I can't believe Sam actually killed Peter! But I guess for his brother nothing is too much to ask.

Author's Response:
Thank you! And I meant for it to be shocking that Sam would actually kill Peter, but I'm glad you could see why he would do such a thing. Poor boy :(
~Sierra

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 11

oh wow. hell of an ending! love the simplicity of your writing, it really drags you into the action, and you catch their voices spot on in all their moods (and there were many...)
great job!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading, I'm really glad you liked it, and left a review :) I'm thinking of someday doing another story involving Grace, I hope you'll come back and read some more if I do!
~Sierra

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 10

Lots of action in this chapter! Wonderful job!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love Dean's perceptions concerning the driver of the car choosing the music! I got such a chuckle out of that.
You did a great job describing Natasha's fear, especially the instinct (that she didn't even know wshe had) she had to fight.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 8

Ooooh! What a slammin' last line!
I'm shocked that Perter's dad was a hunter. No wonder he got away with this for so long.

Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

Bloody n' gory! Lovin it!

Reviewer: Hunter4Life (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 02:03 PM · On: Prologue

It's interesting and i wanna read more!

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 10

loved it!!! i love how when Dean couldn't fight anymore Sam stepped in and vice versa...finally Gein is dead!!! awesome update can;t wait for the rest:)

Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 9

This is one hell of a story!!! Natasha's in for it now...

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 9

Yeah, Grace would have made one hell of a hunter, still love her...and what a cliffhanger, Natasha is in real trouble now...

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 9

Eeek, glad i'm reading this in the am! Very creepy... and a very evil cliffie!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

Geez! There's no stopping zombie-boy! Getting him pinned into his casket is going to be tricky. And what are they going to do with Pete? Turn him over to the police with evidence of the murders? Maybe the spirits of their victims will take care of him and the Winchesters won't have to worry about it.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wonderful chapter! So who is this Peter dude? Just some random serial killer fan?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 5

Of course it's empty! What did he expect with his brother missing and a dead body in the bed next to him? Good luck? That doesn't come for about four more chapters.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh my stars! You had to do the nail through the hand! I can take anything, but that. Major sympathy pains!
I love Dean's wisecracks! You've got him down perfectly!
Never thought of Sam as being the anti-Christ. Wow! I guess I just thought he would be the leader of all evil (not that he really would go darkside), but not the anti-Christ.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ouch! Poor Dean. Sam's dreaming sweet dreams while Dean is getting clobbered in the cold mud by a serial killer's ghost.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 8

Still loving Grace. You've written her as a very convincing character and I love her feisty attitude. Great descriptions and lines all through this but the last...'see you there'...to Dean sent a shiver up my spine. Great work.

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 7

really good story, i like bad ass Sam:D, when he's doing it to protect Dean of course loll can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

Good Chapter. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 7

Fantastic update to this great story and yeah..I' adore big bad Sam more and more...and love the carjacking Doc...lol
Can't wait to see them finish this job once and for all...

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 6

I'll wait another month if i have to!(though there might be some rotten tomatos heading your way if you do make us wait that long next time...)

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 6

Well it was worth the wait, great update to a great story.
And I'm quite a fan of 'big bad Sam' at the moment so thanks for that...
Keep the great updates coming. X Louy

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great Ending to the chapter can't wait for more.

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