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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/11/08 04:55 AM · On: At The End Of The Hall

A very interesting yet scary literature. I loved it though.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it...thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 16/03/08 02:14 PM · On: At The End Of The Hall

Nicely tense build up. I liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: athene72 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 01:22 PM · On: At The End Of The Hall

I don't know how I missed reading this one before, I'm such a fan of your writing! I don't review as often as I should, but I needed to let you know I thought this was breathtaking well written!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!

Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 12:40 AM · On: At The End Of The Hall

That was soooo creepy!  I loved it!  And a perfect ending: "Samhain, when the dead walk the earth.  The dead minus two."  Beautifully written girl!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Tamara!

 

Laura

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 05:23 PM · On: At The End Of The Hall

Congrats again, well deserved win! Amazing job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 05:28 AM · On: At The End Of The Hall

This story sent shivers through my spine. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 04:05 AM · On: At The End Of The Hall

Awsome job! Loved it! Thanks for posting it and congrats on the win

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and posting a comment.

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 03:52 PM · On: At The End Of The Hall

Sam's trepidation, his faith in his brother were great. 

 

Crystal



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 02:18 PM · On: At The End Of The Hall

My review from home page, wanted to post here as well where it belonged: Major suspense with a creepy factor that had me holding my breath and sitting so still in case I triggered IT into action -  and we'd only gone five feet!! Your description as a dovetail of the walk, Sam's fear, Sam's physical manifestation of that fear, and his internal dialogue was masterpiece writing. And that parallel walk down another hall, as a twin fear, of equal yet different magnitude was awesome. It added volume to the suspense and to Sam's terrified state of mind. I was desperate for Sam not to run, half expecting that he would, that instinct driven by fear would overcome his cognitive reasoning. Heck it was all I could do not to run! Thank God for hunter training and faith in a big brothers mantra to always keep you safe!! Your second paragraph was dynamic and I think that alone was what stopped Sam from succumbing to the need to run.  Your finale had me breathing a sigh of relief that it was over, only to suck it back in again with the realisation that safety came with Dean, was Dean. Sam's single word was total closure - for Sam, for us. Dean's eyes as the symbol that he had made it was an outstanding - a steely green sign of sanctuary. Just beautiful. Congratulations on a fantastic fic definitely worthy of this high accolade. You deserve the win and the beautiful banner.

Author's Response:

Well I'm so very glad you didn't run...getting my readers shredded isn't good...lol  Thanks so much for reposting your review.  Tree was kind enough to save everything for me and send it to me.

Thru_Terry's_Eyes made the banner, I think it's spectacular! 

Thanks again for your comments and for reading.

Laura 

 

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 12:35 PM · On: At The End Of The Hall

Chilling - there's no other word for it. Fantastic story and well deserved win.

It's also amazing how diferent it  looks in this format. Kind of changes the pacing when you read,  so glad you posted it here too.

I'm getting a real education from fics like this that are diferent and original - and very inspirational.

Thanks for the read/tutorial.

Well done Laura



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the great review, it means a lot to me.

Laura

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 12:26 PM · On: At The End Of The Hall

OUTSTANDING piece.

I had goosebumps- my video mind had the cold , darkness, shadows all rolling along. AWSOME .

You are super!!! You never disappoint your readers.

I look for your stories - can't get enough of them.

Excellent  story for Halloween!!!!!

Thanks for a great read.!!!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!

 



Author's Response:

As always ReccaF thank you so very much.  You're far to kind in what you say, and I do very much appreciate it.

Laura

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 11:48 AM · On: At The End Of The Hall

nice story among a lot of nice Halloween challenges. Congrats for your win.



Author's Response: Thank you so much Fredo.

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 11:45 AM · On: At The End Of The Hall

Very good:) Happy to know such a great writer!

Love Schelz



Author's Response:

Thanks Schelz...((huggsss)))

 

Laura

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