Oh wow! I can't wait to read the rest! Excellent job!!

This is really interesting so far! I can't wait til the update! ^_^

AHHHHHHH! (you know why I did that and you're defintely doing the evil laugh right now!) John!  Save Sam and Dean! Quickly!  Ahhh!! Too much to handle...jkjk, but this is awesome!! I don't care how long it takes you, just GIVE ME MORE!!!! PLEASE!! I need it, I'm like an addict and this story is my drug! (whoa...bad analogy, but I'm not that creative!)

Author's Response: Lol, mwahahah!  Thank you!  More is coming, don't worry.  The next update hopefully will be quicker than the last.

ok waiting for the next chapter please.

Author's Response:

I'm assuming you're enjoying it then ;)

More will be coming soon, but I can't promise when exactly.  It'll be a quicker update than this last one with a bit of luck. 

Ah, the tension builds.....so glad sam finally figured it out. The ransom note was a cool idea. really liked how you tyoed it out with different letters. Did he write it backwards???Won't it be hard to read if its not backwards? Oh wait, its not really a refelection so I guess it doen't matter. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!  The mirror is more like a window into where Dean is, don't worry, someone (I don't want to spoil you!) reads the note and it'll be explained then.

If you remove this line --"it wasn't sam's brother in Dean's body." the story would read better. It kinda states the obvious plus it removes any mystery for readers who haven't figured it out just yet.

I like how "Dean" acts differently yet no one really notices yet: Choosing the wrong bed, strong arming Sam and mouthing off to John.  poor Dean.

Author's Response:

Thank you.

The line you mention was in there as a refresher, since chapter two was posted a week after chapter one.  I do see your point though, in that it would remove the mystery for those who hadn't figured it out.   Maybe I should have worded it better.

I'm really enjoying this and look forward to more, please!

Author's Response: Thank you!  More will be posted soon, possibly tomorrow!

Interesting start, glad I caught in the recent posts. Curious to see where it goes.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad it got you interested.

awww...poor Dean!! SAVE HIM!! well not too quickly...then the story will be over, but...wait I'm rambling...Come on Sam!! Come on John!! Let's go, you can do it! (will encouragement work?)  This is awesome, can't wait until the next chapter...hope you don't take too long....

Author's Response: Thank you!  Encouragement may just work!  Don't worry all the little things will soon be adding up for John and Sam.  The next chapter will hopefully be up next Monday.  I can't go any quicker due to uni work.

Reviews may make your day, but this fic definitely made mine!!!

Great work and I can't wait to see where you take this..I have a feeling we the readers are in for a good'un ;)

sophie

Author's Response: Thank you!  That's such a lovely thing to say!  I do hope the readers enjoy where I'm going with this, it should be a good'un.  :)

Great update Native, I love the menacing entity you've managed to create. It's a great villain and I can feel this is just going to get better - keep up the great work!

 

Author's Response: Thank you!  :)  I'm glad you're enjoying the villain!

Awsome start! Patiently waiting for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully you won't have to wait too long, the next chapter is half done and with all the lovely reviews I've gotten I don't think my muse is going to abandon me.  :)