Reviewer: Makoto Kou (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
it made me cry...does that make you happy? huh mom????
Author's Response: Oh baby, you know I would never try to make you cry on purpose. Love you. mom
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 23/04/08 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Crys, I loved this story. I am so glad you shared it with us.
Author's Response: Anna, Thanks so much for your review. This story is very special to me. Crys
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this story!! keep up the awesome work!!! have you ever read Westcott Prepatory Acadamy by adder574
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. This story means so much to me. Crystal
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, this one brought tears to my eyes. What a wonderful salute to those who made the ultimate sacrifice. Brings Billy Ray to mind: All gave some and some gave all
And some stood through for the red, white and blue
And some had to fall
And if you ever think of me
Think of all your liberties and recall
Some gave all --c
Author's Response: Cricket, Thanks for your wonderful review. As you can imagine this story is very close to my heart. We often overlook those that have sacrificed everything to give us so much that is often taken for granted. Welcome aboard, this is a wonderful site. Crystal
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was the sweetest one shot Crys:) I really like the voice you gave John, it's almost like a diary entry. I loved it! Schelz
Author's Response: Schelz, thanks sweetie for taking the time to read my story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Crystal
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it from the beginning till the end. Thanks for posting it.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed it. Crystal
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Touching, sincere and very beautiful - also it's nice to see something so well written and in a different tense. Made it more interesting to read. And you depicterd John the way I see him, so thanks for that! Great Job!
Author's Response: lou, thanks for your great review, I think John is a great character to write about there's so much we can do with him.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow....Cl, I'm as impressed by your awesome background and that of your patriotic family as I am by your wonderful warm-hearted tale... so glad to have another writer on board who doesn't think John was an evil ogre...thank you for a delightful read........
Author's Response: Jude, thanks for your kind words, they mean a lot. I like John, there's so much we don't know about him, but we know he loved his sons. Crystal
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
The story is excellent! A very touching scene at the cemetery. The story of your life sounds equally interesting.
Author's Response: Shannon, thanks for taking the time to read my story. I'm glad you liked it. Crystal
Reviewer: SierraNichole (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Beautiful story, in that the descriptions were so vivid, and it just felt so...real. I guess that's because it was, partially. Thank you for your service, I've been in the Army for 4 years myself, with another four left to go. And, although I know it must get old, I'm so sorry for your losses, I have a sister myself...can't imagine. Anyway, great story, thanks for posting :) ~Sierra
Author's Response: Sierra, thank you so much for your kind words, and thank you for your service to your country, it is greatly appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Please stay safe. Crystal
Reviewer: aggie rose (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
I loved your story AND the fact there is someone else out there my age reading and enjoying these stories!!! My brother was a Marine and did two tours of Viet Nam as well as my husband. My cousin was a chopper pilot in the Army and became a lifer and retired as a Major after 30 years. Again I enjoyed your story and keep writing!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Crystal
Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a great story and one of the most original fan fics I have ever read. Thanks for posting, you did a fantastic job.
Author's Response: Wolfsnight, thank you for reviewing it means alot. Crystal
Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
I read your story twice and absolutely loved it. Thank you so much for writing a story that honors our vets. I greatly appriciate what you, your sister and husband did for our country. My bro. is serving now in Iraq in the army and along with my uncle who is a marine. I loved how you wrote Johns past memories of being in Viet Nam. I took a few history classes in high school and college that just dealt with that war. Thank you again for a great story!
Author's Response: Melissa, thank you for your kind words. I felt it was important to get this story out, it practically wrote itself. My prayers go out to your bro and uncle and all our men and women who serve. Crystal
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
SEMPER FI Urah and Godbless! Thank you for the story and for your, your late husbands and your sisters sacrifices for this contry. It is truly appriciated. I never served but my sister served for 4 years and her husband is still serving in the united states marine corps. YOu all are why heros exsist. Thank you
Author's Response: Kori, thanks for taking the time to review, it means so much. Crystal
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
What an absolutely beautiful little fic. It was so effective in first person from John's pov. I absolutely loved the Winchester connection, your reflected how strong it is. Your description of the boys smiles and John's reaction to them was stunning. Your words here was outstanding - "It was always so much easier with Dean, there was an understanding between us that Sam just never got. Sam never saw or heard Dean question me or argue. Dean did both regularly, mostly on Sam’s behalf. Dean would never betray a confidence, not mine or Sam’s. It was part of his make up, our protector, our peacemaker, our go between, and he took his role seriously, sometimes too much for my liking. We both needed him desperately, but I don’t think either of us ever took the time to tell him how much" beautifully writeen. You wrote John's fear at the thought that Dean was lost with emotion and I felt it with him. John's fashbacks to both Mary and his tours was perfectly timed and added ambience as well as background. You were spot on here because you had me holding my breath. Your scene of Dean's rescue was stunning. The fallen still working to save others, the salute from our boys, the connection of a mutual recognition, the tears - just awesome! As a tribute and a fic you nailed it. A toast to your John and Melody, your respect and love for them shone through.
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. I glad this touched you. This story really means a great deal to me. Crystal
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
very nice story, loved John's memories, and the way he sees his sons...
Author's Response: Thanks, John is an open book. There is so much we can do with. Crystal
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