Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 12 Friends in low places
oh wondeful lou, well done
Author's Response: Thanks so much Lorraine, always a joy to get a review from you and shiny stars as well are the cherry on the cake...Thanks!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 12 Friends in low places
I really hate Dean thinking that he's not worth it....i mean, for all the things he did, doing and going to do, he can't seriously still think that he's not worth a s*** if he can't expel whatever is inside him.....i doubt a lesser man would be even consciuos of what he did...... Sam and Dean so need to have a talk about this after Sam and Bobby rescued him.....they will rescue him, right???
Author's Response: You are SO right and rest assured Sam, and Bobby will both be sorting him out before the end of all this... Thanks for the review and the great stars, they are always so much appreciated.
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 12 Friends in low places
wow, are you trying to drive us nuts? you're a tease, girl, give us more!
Author's Response: Hehehe, all will be revealed in the next few chapters and I'm hoping to have this one finished in the next week or so...and then post asap...Thanks for the review, I really appreciate every one!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 Going sideways and then some
Loving this story Bullet, lovely job with Bobby and Sam tracking Dean, love that line how Dean isn't the only one to avoid chick moments..lol. Loved Dean's emotion when he realized just what he'd done.
Author's Response: Very pleased this is working for you Kel, especially since you're one of the writers I've learnt so much from...Thanks for the review and i hope you continue to enjoy the last few chapters...not long to go now...lol
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 10 I got something to say
very cool, though I have to say I was sighing in relief that the demon could repair the damage done to Dean. Looking forward to more - Kel
Author's Response: Oh, I couldn't have left the beautiful Dean with a scar down his face...no that would never do...lol Thanks for the review Kel, they're always appreciated.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 12 Friends in low places
oooo so don't like that vague comment directed towards Kyle.... Is ha really a good guy in disguise helping Bobby and Cobb now knows ......or is he really stringing Bobby along and real partners with Cobb..... Damn, Louy, you got me dangling here like a spider on a thread with nowhere to attach myself......PUHLEEEZE......update really soon.... really worried about Dean's thoughts that he should feel guilt because he could have controlled the demon....He does dumb things when he feels to blame..as if he may not already be bleeding to death....he may get really stupid and just decide his life doesn't matter... Help!!!!!
Author's Response: Hehehe, I do love to keep people dangling, and you are just too perceptive for your own good. Dean is in big trouble but probably more from himself than from Cobb. As for Kyle...hehe, you'll just have to read the next chap and all will be revealed but I'll just say, I'm loving writing him at the moment. Thanks so much for the review and the lovely stars...another smile for me today! Thanks Jude X Louy
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 12 Friends in low places
So, shall we take guesses on Kyle's initials? Think he may be fixing to be in as much trouble as Dean. Of course, Dean's still got the most to fear from his own guilt. I like Sam not being the academic thinker here - too busy being pissed - lol! Thanks for the update, enjoying it a lot! - Angela
Author's Response: Gotta say, the more I write Kyle, the more I like him...he's a bit of an animal. Always wanted to elaborate on Bobby's past with a few other characters and Kyle's story will hopefully be explained in later chapters...and I'm glad the panicked Sam works for you... Thanks for the review Angela, and I hope you keep enjoying.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 12 Friends in low places
Oh! bloody hell Bullet! no no NO! don't stop there, Cobb is a bad man and that's a hell of a big knife (but one you have a special fondness for if I remember rightly?). Am I gonna need the sutures any time soon?? Should I stock up? "You know what the chain of command is Sam? It’s the chain I beat you upside the head with till you do as we say" Love this line,think (hope it's safe to!) I love Kyle too "Plenty of brain cells, but ain’t got an overabundance of common sense has he?" And this too! great snarky character to go with lovely Bobbster (Bo! so cool!) Love it! want more? Hell Yeah! Bev xx
Author's Response: Oh yeah, my knife of choice, got a few of those I can tell you...and yeah, stock the med kit, hoping to have this story finished in the next week or so, and he's gonna need you at the end I can guarantee it! And hate to admit it but I'm sure I heard a similar 'chain of command line' somewhere, probably Joss Wheedon so can't take credit - damn it! More to come very very soon...and thanks for the review mate...X Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 12 Friends in low places
My oh my, you have been writing up a storm, haven't you? This was an awesome update. You can just feel the weight of Dean's guilt resting on his shoulders. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Yeah, I've had a bit of a writing explosion, and there's hopefully more to come...three more days of nothing to do but write, my world is good right now...hehehe Thanks for the review Ness, hoping to have this story finished within the next week or so, moving on to a few new projects soon. X Louy
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 11 Going sideways and then some
Awhh Dean - don't wanna see ya cry - but I think he would remembering all that - bad enough to fail to protect Sam, a million times worse to realize you're what he needs protection from - yikes! Throw in an innocent dead guy and you've got a good reason for a cry, then there's that pesky devil's trap issue..... Great chapter! Glad you got a chuckle out of my last reviews - Angela
Author's Response: Got more than a chuckle Angela, people were asking me...why the daft grin? Hehe Thanks for the review, the next chapter is well on the way and, yeah, he's in a pretty bad place for a couple of chapters, but I'll put him back together again once I'm done playing, I promise. Thanks again X Louy
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 11 Going sideways and then some
Nice update Lou. Bev will be pleased plenty of hurt Dean for her to enjoy. Poor Dean can't see his day getting any better with Stanleys arrival next chapter please Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks so much lorraine, and shiny stars too...you've made my day, AGAIN. Yeah, got to keep Bev happy, and I have a feeling she's going to like the next one even more...'wink' Madly writing now...
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 11 Going sideways and then some
Gosh...another cliffhanger.....Sigh....don't make us readers wait too long for the next one??? I like the way you pace your story....just revealing something from the last chapter and have another carrot dangling for us to eagerly wait for the next chapter...and your storyline's awesome... And Bobby had a pic of Dean and Sam?? Aww...Sweet...LOL
Author's Response: Thanks Lyn, I apreciate the comments about pacing and storyline, this is the one story I'm trying to really pour everything into, so I'm very glad it's working for you...and writing the next chapter as we speak...lol Thanks for the review and especially the stars!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 Going sideways and then some
awwwwwwww....too sweet.. Bobby keeps a photo of 'his' boys in his cc wallet...would we expect any less, louy... Nice touch!!! But now things have really turned sour....was hoping Dean's demon could save him from these thugs.......with the presence of that devil's trap quite obviously NOT!!!!!! This is so scary good...looking forward to more ,Louy!!!
Author's Response: Jude, it's always such a joy to get a review from you...you always make me smile. Thanks for the Bobby comment, I do love him, he's sooo the surrogate dad those boys need right now and I'm always trying to find little ways to show his feelings for them without letting him get sappy..lol And yeah, things are a little sour right now but not all is as it seems...'smug grin'... Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jude, and especially for the shiny stars. I'm smiling!!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 11 Going sideways and then some
Oh Lout I'm so touched not only did you dedicate it to me but you wrote me both pain and angst! That is just soo sweet. I love the fact that Bobby has their photo, Your Bobby is so bang on 'cause he cares so for the boys and especially Dean needs that, but he would die rather than admit he had their photo! Nice characterisation, lovely! Made me fill up! long long eyelashed glued together - oh yeah baby and a dressing on his thigh! That need changing any time soon Lout? no no you rest Let me go do it for ya? Pleaseeee! Oh and then you hit me with breaking his heart for what your freaky bastard daemon's made him go do! Dean sobbed..... tears, Hunny - tears! so sweetly written. Loved 'my' chapter and love you! Bev xxxxxxxxx
Author's Response: Its only what you deserve mate...pain and angst with a side helping of sobbing lol...and you are so on bandage duty...no one else will probably even get a look in. Thanks for all the support Bev and thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 11 Going sideways and then some
Nice chapter, Lou. I felt so, so bad for Dean. He was actually sobbing. And I think in that situation, he absolutely would do so. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Ness, I'm so glad you found it believable, have been more than a little worried about these last few chapters, so it's great to hear you think it worked. Thanks for the review Ness, always means the world coming from you!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 10 I got something to say
Wowee Lout humping the jukebox! Heehee this is one wonderful sicko daemon! Loves him! jeeze, you ripped out his trach! eewwch! that's gonna smart Hun there's a terrifice menace about the guy. He's properly scary and poor Dean's in there! This is so not a good situation! No! no no no no! Not his pretty face! oh actually NOT his face! weirdy daemon healing powers! Cool! Fab chapter, worth the agony to write it hun gotta read on Oops forgot, hot groping scene! bev xx
Author's Response: Having way too much fun writing this one although I was a little worried about the last one or two chaps, glad it worked for you mate...and glad you're still enjoying.
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 10 I got something to say
Oh - it worked. I suspect Joey might be safer in this moment if he actually had killed Dean, but then what on earth would the rest of us do? Course as we prefer our Dean demon free (and I rather suspect he does as well), Sam and Bobby have some work to do... Sadly I'm out of those delightful little next buttons. Glad I caught up on this one and eager for more!
Author's Response: Next chapter will be up before you know it, but just want to say a huge thankyou for putting such a daft grin on my face today, Angela. I've never opened e-mails to show reviews in double figures before - what a blast...Thank you so much!
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 Gonna blow like dynamite
Love the image at the beginning of this, Winchesters just don't do sharing - lol. As for the end of this one - Cobb and the demon after them, can't be good. And arghh, Dean, you're gonna hate yourself in the morning.... Great chapter
Author's Response: Oh, I'm afraid he's gonna hate himself a lot more than that...lol Thanks for pushing on Angela.
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 8 ...balls of steel will take you places
"strength tangled with the immeasurable damage" - sort of sums up their whole existence! Really enjoying this story - Angela
Author's Response: Thanks Angela, This is the story I've put most hours into so I'm VERY pleased it's working for you.
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 7 Knowledge may be power but...
The Dean that never was... sad little thought. Still enjoying, peddling on..
Author's Response: Little Dean will be making a later appearance and does play quite a pivotal role actually...I'm so pleased you're still reading and enjoying this, it just blows me away!
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 From the inside out
Bobby confused - that's not a plus, now is it? Visual imagery in this is very well done - can just see their faces -- Angela
Author's Response: Yep, you just know things are bad if Bobby's confused...and thank you for the great compliment!
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
Explosion - bad for the spirit, but bad for Dean - one of those get in touch with your inner devil moments perhaps? At least he's finding his inner pure Dean too! Good chapter!
Author's Response: Get in touch with your inner devil? ROFL...now that's a story prompt if there ever was one.
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
"geekiest jolly green giant" lol! Don't think theWinchesters will ever have enough friends to ditch the old ones, although if Dean's gonna act like John, it could happen anyway! Moving on....
Author's Response: I do love writing Bobby. Although he got a little abused in this one, he plays a huge part at the finish...
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 3 Objects in the mirror
Their life as a half empty duffel is an interesting image. Cobb's a nasty one, huh? You have my attention too
Author's Response: I always love to read someones unusual take or description on the life of the boys, glad this worked for you...
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 From the ashes
I'm thinking impatience may not have been the best course... This is fun!
Author's Response: Bet you're glad the chapters are kinda short, huh...lol Very glad you're enjoying.
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