Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
Well done lou looking forward to reading the next chapter. Really love this story. Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks Lorraine, and thank you for the shiny stars...I'm smiling away here! And looking forward to reading your next chapter asap...hmmm!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
OMG! Come on Bullet can't leave me here! Sammy's scared, Dean's scared and so the bloody hell am I!!! Exorcise that sucker I wanna bandage our boy! bev xxxx
Author's Response: Hah, don't worry mate, I've saved you a seat for the big 'lets put the boy back together' chapter...bring your own sutures! Thanks for the review bev...and I won't be long with that next chapter, promise!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 6 From the inside out
great chapter again! Back tomorrow to continue this ride...
Author's Response: Fredo, you have no idea how lovely it is to have a reader get engrossed in the story. I couldn't be happier that you're liking this read and I hope you enjoy the rest, and then the big finish...which should be up in the next few days or so. Thanks again! X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
wow! was planning to go to bed after this one but now have to read a bit more! just one more...
Author's Response: Just one more...hehehe. You've made my day fredo! I'm so glad you're enjoying this...nearly halfway now!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
and if he’d been wearing his cap he’d have taken it off to whoever thought up that little bit of retribution, at least here was proof that some people in this world got exactly what they deserve. his face was painted with fear, an expression so unusual to see on Dean Bobby felt choked by what he saw in those eyes. Complete and utter trust…no doubts at all. Sam had total and absolute faith in Bobby Gosh, Louy, how beautifully put.....Dean normally so fearless, worried this thing might make him hurt the people he loves..........Bobby always knowing the right and wrong of things and being sure that justice is served.....Sam with trust in the one man OTHER than his brother who never let the boys down or placed his needs above theirs... SOOOOO LOVING THIS TALE....thank you, thank you, thank you....you use your evil powers to spin these webs so well....
Author's Response: Awe...Jude. Thank you so much, this is such a lovely review. And I DO love 'the Bobster'. You're right, he just intuitively knows what's what. And I adore the though of having powers of evil...hehehe, may have to include that on my bio page...lol Thanks for the review and the lovely stars Jude, you made me very happy this morning...X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
great chapter! nice building up, and Bobby always welcomed.
Author's Response: Ah, yeah, Bobby. He plays a BIG part in this one...Actually, now that I think about it, he plays quite a big part in almost everything I write. Go Bobby!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 3 Objects in the mirror
It’d always amazed him that his whole life could fit so neatly into one small duffel bag, and still feel half empty. Just like him, he thought. Half empty. so sad...
Author's Response: You're still reading...I'm clapping my hands here. It's always such a treat when someone gets hooked on a story...thanks for brightening my day fredo..lol
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
Fantastic update, Lou. Loved this chapter. There's just something about Dean arching in pain that does something to me. I can't wait for the big finale . . . and for some much needed comfort after the hurt.
Author's Response: Ohhh, that arching does it for me too...pushes all sorts of buttons...but can't go into it here. This story isn't rated for the comments I could make...lol Thank you for the review and the lovely stars...X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 2 From the ashes
So far he’d scoured the entire area with EMF, and in less time than it took Sam to scratch his ass, he’d discovered the grave. hehehe...
Author's Response: Glad you're sticking with it fredo...gets quite angsty later so wanted a bit of 'light relief' somewhere in there..lol Thanks for the review X Louy
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
Well, that just made me want more. I can't wait to see how this exorcism works out. Hope we don't have a long wait. Thanks for a great story!
Author's Response: 'Always leave 'em wanting more'...hehe Thanks so much for the review lostatc, and next 2 chapters are nearly done. I'm going to definately finish in 2 more so they may end up a little longer than the others but thats a good thing...right? lol Thanks again X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - It begins
yeah i know i'm late, but just a couple months, could be worse! Anyway, was looking for a good read for my evening, and this first chapter is promising, to let's go to the next..
Author's Response: Welcome to the show fredo, and I really hope you enjoy it. There's actually only a few more chapters to post and then it's over so you've come at just the right time...hehe. Thanks for the review X Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
With his last remaining strength, Dean held on tight to the heat burrowing inside him, his only thought left…to save Sammy; to take this bitch down…sinking to the depths of the lake as though they were the depths of hell, and drown the fucker in the freezing blackness. OMG!!!!!! Bullet, are you trying to kill me here...???Our HERO brave and sacrificing to the bitter end....SAVE HIM ....hurry..!!!..Just knew that guilt trip he was on was going to make him do something bravely stupid!!! Can we give NEGATIVE STARS for broken hearts ??????? Shame on you..... torturing the hunters and US...and loving every minute of it I bet.... How can such a sensitive BANNER MAKER have such an evil, wicked heart....hmmmmm??? ... Jude
Author's Response: Ah, Jude...Thankyou so much, and you were so right, that nasty guilt trip is responsible for everything and I have a whole line of volunteers eager to help him get over it...hehehe. (I think Bev's in pole position right about now, she's so tenacious) Thanks for the lovely stars and no broken hearts...the next chapter's written already, should be posted very soon and there should only be a couple after that so not much futher to go...X Louy
Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
OMG! what an cliffhanger I my dying here Dean can't drown he got to keep figthing for his life and figthing the Demon
one of the best story i have ever read Love your work awsome writhing keep it up
Author's Response: Darkangel, thankyou so much for this great review...I couldn't be happier that you're enjoying this one. There are only a few chapters left to go and the next one is written already, just need to look at it in the cold light of day and sift out the mistakes...lol Thanks for the great review and the shiny stars, they keep me writing. X Louy
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
What a cliffhanger! This is a greally great read so far, I'm enjoyíng every chapter. Need to know if Dean is going to be ok.... SOON!
Author's Response: I promise I will be updating very soon and there are only a couple more chapters to go. Thanks for the lovely review and the shiny stars, you've put a big smile on my face today.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
He's going to kill himself!!!!! No no no..stop him please....
Author's Response: Hehehe...Breath, in through the nose, out through the mouth...OK? Don't worry there is only another couple of chapters to this story and I don't write death fic so do not fret...lol Thanks so much for the review and the stars mymuse, hope you enjoy the end of this tale...won't be long now.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 ...balls of steel will take you places
Yay Bobby! He's got an inside man helping save the day! Don't you just love Bobby?
Author's Response: Oh yeah go Bobby...you can ALWAYS rely on Bobby, no matter what...and now I've probably given the ending away so try to act surprised when he saves the day OK?...Thanks for the review Shannon!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 7 Knowledge may be power but...
Wow! What a wonderful and powerful dream! I can't wait to find out what it means.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you picked up on that cos that little boy will be back in the next few chapters. I'm a great believer in the inner child...I feed mine sweets and ice cream all the time...lol Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 6 From the inside out
The way you described Bobby's look by comparing it to how he reacted to dead Sam walking into his house was great! I could picture it perfectly. This is a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, I'm so glad you're sticking with it...I love Bobby to bits, and it wouldn't be SPN without him as far as I'm concerned...thanks for the review and the great compliment. X Louy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
"Christ, the kid has John’s eyes…and he saw the pain, the turmoil this kid was going through. All he wanted to do was reassure him, tell him he had friends who would get him out of here" Ah Lout, as I told ya this just pulls at my heartstrings, Ya need me to come save him? I will just give me the word! No it's no trouble at all! Ah shit, Cobb's onto Kyle, damn he's the cavalry, so how we gonna save Dean now Bullet? "just got to trust me, Dean.” Awh Sam he does! but he's scared! Flare Gun! ugh! that's gotta smart! Bev xx
Author's Response: Bev, I'm sending you in...saddle up we leave at dawn! Have you got any scuba gear...I think Dean's been down there for a while now...um?
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
The entity makes its appearance! This is awesome! busy now...reading...
Author's Response: Hehe, it always makes me so happy when people get caught up in the story...Thanks for that, and thanks for the review Shannon...X Louy
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
Dean is acting very strangely. Bobby's right to think there's something wrong. Something big is brewing. I can feel it! I just can't read fast enough to get to it.
Author's Response: Keep reading and all will be revealed...lol. Glad you're enjoying Shannon and hope you enjoy the rest. X Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
Holy hell, what a cliffhanger!! I will definitely be on the edge of my seat until you post the next chappy! Great work!
Author's Response: I do love my cliffies...lol Only another couple of chapters to go now though so nearly there. Thanks for the review Ness and the lovely stars...I couldn't be happier.
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
Hell lou need next chapter now! please?
Author's Response: It's written Lorraine I promise and so is the one after that...This story is only 16 chapters long so not much futher to go now...and thanks for the lovely stars, you make me smile.
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
That was a fabulous chapter. I couldn't read it fast enough to know what was going to happen next. Can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: Thats a great compliment, thank you and I have to say I find myself doing exactly that when I'm reading your work too. Thanks for the review and the great compliment. X Louy
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
Oh no, no,no,no,no...... Thinkin' that's harder on Sam to see than Dean to do - cam imagine hime making the decision to drown the demon and ignore the not so little fact that he'd have to go with it! More soon pretty please - otherwise we're all gonna have to make a run on scuba equipment..... Great chapter - Angela
Author's Response: Go scuba girl go...lol I promise it's only momentary madness on Dean's part and he'll be much healthier soon...Very glad you're enjoying Angela, thanks for the review.
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