Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
"John did a good job with that pair." Kyle nodded to the wall between them and the bedroom. "Dean did a good job with John and Sam more like." "Deserves more than life’s given him that’s for sure…both do as a matter of fact…" And therein lies all the inherent truths about the Winchester clan ...in a nutshell..................A big THANK YOU, Louy, for such an awesome tale...have soooo enjoyed this.... :0) Jude
Author's Response: You couldn't have paid me any better compliment than your enjoyment, thank you so much Jude, for the stars, the wonderful words and the constant encouragement. X Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 16 Are we supposed to talk now?
Over and over Dean re-lived, re-worked and dissected the events, until by dawn the tiredness sat heavy on him like a lead weight around his neck, dragging him back into the mattress every time he tried to get up. Bobby watched it happening and new that soon he would have to say something. Someone had to turn that boy around and make him see sense cos right now he was heading in completely the wrong direction. And Kyle saw it too… Louy, how do I love thy writing??? let me count the ways....Because you see Bobby as the loving surrogate Daddy that he is....That you see Dean as the self-sacrificing, self-effacing tragic hero that HE is.....and that you see and paint our Sam as the little brother who will always Love and support his hero no matter what........
Author's Response: Jude you always reduce me to a jibbering wreck when I read your reviews...Thank you so much for the stars and the wonderful words and I just wish this story was three times longer, cos I'm sad to be leaving it! XLouy
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
Loved it! Thank you for the story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that...makes it all worthwhile. X louy
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - It begins
“that deeply hidden spark that was innate Dean Winchester had found its tinder once again” Very nicely put.This chapter was awesome. Can’t wait to see your resolution. I can only hope that it involves more hurt and comfort, the brothers’ bond, and the innate Dean Winchester (?).
Author's Response: Well strange you should say that...lol This story is finished now and I'm planning on posting in the next day or so...more H/C than you can shake a stick at...lol Thanks for the review Nilah and hope you enjoy the finish...
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 15 Crying out for attention
Wow Louy that was a tearjerker. Playtimes over Louy time to put him back together again.Lorraine
Author's Response: Next chapter is just that...no more nasty for our poor boy, he's been through enough...well for this outing anyway...hehe. Thanks for the review and the stars Lorraine...always means the world from you!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 15 Crying out for attention
wow, that was one hell of an exorcism! Can't wait for last chapter. To see Dean come back. Right? Right!
Author's Response: SPOILER ALERT..He comes back!!!! I don't write death fic at all so you can always be pretty secure in the knowledge that he comes back...hehe Thanks for the great reviews fredo...X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
that, "no…no…NONONO." from Bobby, made me laugh, cause of my last review! That, "Bobby felt choked by what he saw in those eyes. Complete and utter trust…no doubts at all. Sam had total and absolute faith in Bobby, and he silently prayed to be given the ability to do that faith justice."... i trust Bobby also, he cannot fail us!
Author's Response: That made me smile too...and Bobby NEVER fails anyone...I need to have a T-Shirt printed with that !! Thanks so much for the review fredo...it's all coming to a head now...X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
no no no no. NO!
Author's Response: yes yes yes yes YES I'm afraid...
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 12 Friends in low places
huh... does he know about Kyle?... Suspense...
Author's Response: Fredo..you're back for more..and I'm very pleased about it. So glad you're enjoying enough to give up your sunday...hehe Thanks for the review X Louy
Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 15 Crying out for attention
Poor Dean can't seem to catch a break it is just one thing after the other I hope it wasn't him that you where refuring to in the end btw I love this line He would not give up, he didn’t know what it meant to give up…and he’d never been taught how.
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah Dean never gets a break, except that he does now...lol Next chapter's all putting the poor boy back together and letting him relax a bit..I think he's deserved it after the few days he's just had...lol Thanks for the review darkangel and the stars and I hope you like the finish! X Louy
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 15 Crying out for attention
I assume the last part of the story is referring to Cobb?? I must say this story is a bit exhausting for me...all the emotional cliffies, the nail biting tension, the heartbreaking scenes......although i wouldn't give up any of it cuz i think all of that is worth it... :) I won't say i can't wait for the next chapter, cuz i'm actually pretty sad that this is ending, but hey, all good things muz come to an end... *sniffs*
Author's Response: Can't decide if I'm glad you're exhausted or not...don't want to wear out my readers...lol Although I have to say, It's been a pretty intense one to write. Hopefully the last chapter will be the grounding the story needs, getting the boys and Bobby back on track and not to forget Kyle! Cobb's in there too but he's kind of a done deal, don't think I'll be bringing him back in the sequel...but never say never...lol Thans so much for the review and the stars, they're always appreciated! X Louy
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 15 Crying out for attention
This is a wonderful juxtaposition - the chaotic kinetic malestorm of the beginning of the chapter versus the desolate void of the end - very, very nice - Angela
Author's Response: Thank you for that - After quite a few chapters of serious angst and pain it really needs to be allowed to wind down now...hopefully the last chapter will be the leveller for the whole story...well, that's the plan anyway...lol Thanks for the review and the stars, thats very kind. XLouy
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
"Sam stumbled out towards his brother" - perhaps not the most complex line of the chapter, but the image just struck me - always toward each other and always stumbling when the other's in trouble. Ok, so I'm having a philosophical moment. So, sre we tossin' this thing outta Dean or what?! Laugh. On to the next chapter, great job - Angela
Author's Response: It's always the 'throw away' lines that have the deepest effect on me too...and you go, philosophy girl, get it out of your system...lol Thanks for the review X Louy
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 Crying out for attention
He would not give up, he didn’t know what it meant to give up…and he’d never been taught how. That deeply hidden spark that was innate Dean Winchester had found its tinder once more, and it glowed stronger and brighter than it ever had........ Wow...what a description of those powers Dean holds within, Louy.....how truly Dean would fight to hold onto his family and their way of life.... Here's hoping that last segment is talking about that Major Moron Cobb....and not our beloved HERO....
Author's Response: Bit more of our hero but all nice and nurturing...need some 'nice' after all the 'nasty' hehe. And Cobb does get a mention, but I'm not gonna waste much time on him...Thanks for the great review and the stars Jude, you know exactly how to cheer me up!
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 15 Crying out for attention
Incredibly awesome--as I knew it would be. Thank you for all that back arching. :-) Can't wait for the coming chapter (are you sure it's not chapters?) and the comfort that's to come.
Author's Response: Nah, only one chapter, but it's gonna be a bit longer than the others...lol. Thanks so much Ness, but not sure there's anywhere to add 'back arching' in the last one...sorry...lol Thanks for the review and the stars X Louy
Reviewer: Roguehunter (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
So glad I stumbled upon this story, it's really great so far. I'm so worried for poor Dean. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Very pleased you enjoyed it Roguehunter, next chapter should be posted tonight with just one more after that. Hope you continue to enjoy and thanks for the review X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 11 Going sideways and then some
okay, done for tonight, have to save a bit of fun for the weekend, and can't be more grumpy than my customers tomorrow morning. Let me just say that i really enjoy this story, and that i loved that Bobby has a pic of the boys in his wallet! Yeah, chick-flicky, and proud to be...
Author's Response: Well, hope you weren't too grumpy today...hehe. I really couldn't be happier that you're enjoying this story, there's only another two chapters to go...hoping to post one tonight and then just one more and it's all over. Feeling quite sad! Thanks for the reviews though fredo, all of them! They all cheered me up no end.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 10 I got something to say
messing up with a Winchester is usually a bad idea, messing up with a possessed Winchester...
Author's Response: Too right, and nothing is ever as it seems in the Winchester world anyway...hehe. Thanks for the reviews fredo, I'm very happy you're enjoying this.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 9 Gonna blow like dynamite
great update, loved the photo moment, and the inner fight between Dean and the demon. A certain guy will be surprised when he'll notice that he didn't only abduct a Winchester...
Author's Response: Thanks for that fredo, I've just noticed photo's seem to be a bit of a recurring theme of mine...ah well!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 8 ...balls of steel will take you places
straight to next one cause can't wait for more!
Author's Response: That's what I like to hear!!!!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 7 Knowledge may be power but...
well, we always knew that Dean was hot...;)
Author's Response: Hah, I couldn't agree more!!!!! Thanks fredo X Louy
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
Come on, Bobby.... Terrific update Louy and now that I'm caught up I need and ending like now..lol. Thanks for the great read - Kel
Author's Response: Yeah, go Bobby...next chapter should be posted some time today..hopefully and then there's only one more..feeling a little sad about that actually...Thanks for the lovely review Kel X
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths
Great action..loved that Dean submerged himself in the freezing water, hopefully that'll put a crimp in the demon's plans - Great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks so much Kel..one day I may even try to write a chapter without a cliffhanger...who knows...lol X Louy
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 12 Friends in low places
Dean knew he was in deep trouble but somewhere inside he couldn’t shake the feeling that just maybe…he deserved whatever was about to happen to him. - Heartbreaking Louy to hear Dean doubt the man he is.. Great update - K
Author's Response: Yeah, there's a lot of doubt in Dean at the moment and a whole lot more to come...lol Thanks for the review Kel X Louy
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan
This has me on my toes.....like literally....and i think my nails are already damaged from being bitten for too long!!!! LOL Can't wait for the ending...and i'm holding on to the promise that this is not a death fic...
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review and the shiny stars, mymuse. And I promise you have nothing to worry about, in fact the chances are the next two chapters are going to be longer than before...as I'm determined to finish in the next two! Thanks again and I hope you enjoy the big finish...X Louy
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