Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
No... no... no...! You leave it there? You... that... how mean! Absolutely awesome chapter! Completely loved it. You are an amazing author and I completely love this story! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much Rae - I'm pleased you're enjoying this, it feels like my first 'grown-up' story, the one I've worked on the most so I'm always thrilled to know people are liking... ...and thanks for the rating, those little stars mean the world!
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
This is a great story. It's so interesting. Thanks
Author's Response: Very glad you're enjoying mtee - thanks very much for the review!
Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
wow this is an amazing story..my first review on supernaturalville...so glad I found this story!
Author's Response: Lisa, thank you so much and welcome to the site! It's always such a pleasure when a completely new reader chooses to review, so thanks for taking the time. Hope you enjoy all the stories on the site and feel free to jump in on the shoutbox! ~Louy
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
This is so so so good, oh my god, what next! I'm keeping my eyes on this one.... post soon! Dix
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the great review Di. The next chapter won't be very long at all and I hope you continue to enjoy! Also thank you for the rating, always cheers me to see those little stars, and I'm sure they make me write quicker! lol
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
Wow Louy fabulous chapter, this is turning into one creepy story. Thanks for sharing Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks Lorraine, you're always such a great reviewer, you do my ego the world of good, and thanks for the rating. Very much appreciated!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 2 From the ashes
So far he’d scoured the entire area with EMF, and in less time than it took Sam to scratch his ass, he’d discovered the grave - LOVE this line... Great job, though I gotta admit Dean's freakin me out just a bit.. - Kel
Author's Response: Gonna get a whole lot freakier I'm afraid lol. Thanks for dropping in Kel, I always appreciate your reviews!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - It begins
Hee love it... Appologies for the late start, I'm just sooooo far behind. Great beginning and I look forward to more - Kel
Author's Response: I know that feeling, so hard to find reading time when we're writing too! Thanks for the review Kel !
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
Wow. Cool update! Looking forward to seeing where the next chapter takes us.
Author's Response: Thanks Ness, next chapter won't be long - hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
the banner for the story is cool.
Author's Response: THANK YOU ! It's my first ever attempt at creating a banner but I'm hooked on them now, lol.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 3 Objects in the mirror
Yay Bobby! Better and better! I lvoe when the Winchesters team up with Bobby.
Author's Response: I do too, you can always count on Bobby to save the day - or can you?...(evil laugh) Thanks for the reviews Shannon, they mean the world!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 From the ashes
Wow! That was close! You have me very curious as to Dean's strange behavior. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Yep - it is strange behaviour but I hope all will be revealed by the end and he'll be back to the lovable chappy we all know and adore!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 - It begins
Oooh! A mysterious beginning. The suspense is already rising and I'm eager to read more!
Author's Response: Glad to hear that Shannon...love some suspense...it's what it's all about!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
Lou....I sure hope you have a lot more up your sleeve and you can pull it out fairly quickly...NEED to feed my curiosity on this one.....AWESOME tale so far...... What will it take to get more ....very, very quickly??? Name your price, my dear.... Absolutely loved the line about telling anybody other thanBobby where to go and even drawing a map for their assistance...
Author's Response: Ahhh, Jude - Thank you so much, and yes there is plenty more where this came from, just finishing off chapter 8 and planning 9 through 12. Shouldn't be too long. Thank you so much for the review and the rating - those little stars always bring a smile to my face!
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
I swear you should be crowned the queen of evil cliffies or at the very least, princess. Loved the chapter, the freakiness of it all has me worried. Beautiful details and wonderful dialog between Bobby and Sam. More please!
Author's Response: Thanks for the crown heather - I do my best...evil grin!!! Next chapter won't be too long but rest assured it's a rare thing for me to leave you cliffieless - is that a word? It is now! Thanks for the rating and review, always appreciated.
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
Hi louy,. great update Know things are bad when Dean offers to do the laundry. Sam calling Bobby for his help and advice, makes a good surrogate dad. Well done Lorraine
Author's Response: Love Bobby in dad mode - lol, thanks for that Lorraine, next update won't be long!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
subtle changes in dean are extremely well written. So glad you brought Bobby into the mix. The line about 'this was all john' , followed by Bobby's comment about 'friends' was perfect! Don't keep up waiting too long. Really enjoy your style of writing. Its succinct while gently weaving sublte undertones thoughout for suspence and you capture the characters beautifully with just the right balance of description, thought and dialogue. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: wow - Thank you for such a thoughtful review. It's quite rare to get one like this and you have no idea what an inspiration it is. I must immediately go and write some more. lol Thank you for the huge compliment and the next chapter won't be too long at all.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 3 Objects in the mirror
I love how Dean whispered 'Christo' in the mirror. Can't wait to see how explains his lack of scars to sam!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I really hope you continue to like it.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 3 Objects in the mirror
nice update
Author's Response: Thanks Winchester07, hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - It begins
I officially don't like those guys. Good start
Author's Response: That was exactly what I was going for lol. Thanks for the review, and the kind words.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 2 From the ashes
The reference to the "deadly sins' was too funny:)
Author's Response: Glad you spotted that - not sure if anyone else did, but was trying to be subtle (not trying very hard though, lol) Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 - It begins
just went back and read "Bearer" and it was awesome! looking forward to how this one plays out.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that - 'Bearer' was my first ever attempt at writing anything so I'm hoping this one will be a little more polished. Very glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
Brilliant chapter! Poor Dean, feeling alone and mistrusted, is the paranoia all his or also a little side effect... isolating him? And then these other men... what are they planning...? I'm glad they've got Bobby there!!
Author's Response: Bobby is a must for me - I love him to bits! And as far as the paranoia is concerned, well, you'll just have to wait and see - but all will be revealed very soon! Thanks for the R&R Rae - they mean the world to me!
Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
this is one of my favorite storys so far..and I also loved the story Bearer of All Light so keep up with the good job can't wait for an update
Author's Response: Thanks so much darkangel, that's a great compliment. I promise to keep it coming, and thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
Somehow I missed your updates, darn life stealing away my free time. The story is still amazing. I hate what Dean is doing to Sammy, it reminds me of his behavior in season 3 and it just breaks my heart. Brilliantly written though. Hope Bobby can help figure out what's going on because I need my boys back together. Happy Thanksgiving!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and rating heather, and yeah, it is a wee bit angsty, but I try and live by - 'What doesn't kill you makes you stronger' - and seeing as I don't write death fic's - Sam, Dean and Bobby will be comming out of this pretty damned strong! And I love Bobby so he always knows what's going on! Happy Thanksgiving and thanks for the R&R
Reviewer: bernie62 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
Keep up the good work. The pace of the story is very good. I really enjoyed the prequel to this story. I also enjoy that you have good villains and that you don't go in for the easy endings. Keep it real and keep it going...!!
Author's Response: I'll do my best bernie - and thank's for that - never been a fan of the easy ending!
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