Reviewer: Ryla (Signed) · Date: 11/02/11 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
Wow, awesome story. You've done a really good job, kept me interested all the way through and it was VERY readable. Great job! I'm looking through your profile now for more of the same :D
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/10/09 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 9 Gonna blow like dynamite
those two guys are so going to get there ass kicked and dean is confused where the hell is bobby.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 8 ...balls of steel will take you places
This damned thing will kill Dean, if bobby does not get there.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 7 Knowledge may be power but...
I will this is an excellent piece of material that im fully enjoying at the moment.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 6 From the inside out
Dean made a drastic deal and Bothe will be pissed.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/10/09 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke
Dean, how could this happen to him?
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 3 Objects in the mirror
I realy do hate these so called hunters that want to take out their fresh deserts on not only THE WINCHESTERS, but also on SINGER.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 2 From the ashes
This is such apower and entertaining story. It dose scar the hell out of me.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/09/09 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 - It begins
This should be a good one 'cause unfortuantaly those edgits don't know that no one can get Dean without Sam.
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 27/05/08 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts
The first paragraph of this chapter is great -- classic Winchester angst, heheh - I like the way you write!
Author's Response: Thanks Ash, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the compliment. XX Louy
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 10/04/08 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
ah. a story well written. had me goin' there for a quite while tryin' to figure out how if would all end well. thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thanks Anna, I'm very glad you enjoyed and it kept you on your toes..lol XX Louy
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 - It begins
Great story. I’ll be looking forward to sequel, but I’ll be keeping my eye out for your other stuff. I really loved the image of the four year old “urchin” Dean you drew for us. Brought a smile to my lips.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Nilah, I loved 'little Dean' too. Not sure he'll be in the sequel though...lol Thanks for the great review and hope you enjoy all the other stories. X Louy
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
Been waiting for this to be finished before I started reading as I can't handle cliffhangers at all. So noticed it was complete today (hooray!) and lost an entire afternoon as I couldn't stop reading and now my eyes are protesting but I am a very happy bunny. This was fab! You write the boys (and Bobby) so well that this was another totally believable story for them. I particularly love the way you portray Sam - emo and devoted but not sappy and weak. I am intrigued by Kyle and hope he'll appear again. The bit where he and Bobby give Dean basically the same speech and Dean mutters that he prefers Kyles version made me laugh and Sam offering Dean the same comfort he had given him as a child was so sweet. I loved 'Bearer ...' and thought this was a fantastic follow up. I look forward to more in the series! Thanks for a darn good read - Kirsty xx
Author's Response: Dang, you can't handle cliffies?...gulp. In that case I feel very privileged that you read at all...lol And you couldn't have paid me a better or greater compliment than to spend the afternoon reading one of my stories, thank you so much for that. And there will definately be more in the series but have a few other bits and pieces to finish and a couple of new projects coming soon. Thanks for the review and the stars Birdy, you've made my day! X Louy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
Bullet. I repeat what I already told ya, this is classy, grown up writing, it's wondefully detailed, seethes with passion, grief and love yet is restrained and elegant in it's style. I love it and am so bloody jealous of it that I may have to wreak havoc upon your person! In fact BooBooMonkey, Belepheron and Tuffy are whispering foul suggestions in my innocent ear as I type yeah baby - lets sharpen the knives! FanFreakingTastic! bev xxxxxx
Author's Response: Bev you are lovely! Thank you so much for all your help and encouragement with this...and I can safely say the last 2 chapters wouldn't have been posted without you! You are priceless! PS Thank BooBoo, Tuffy & Belepheron for me...X Louy
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
Great story. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Thanks mtee, very glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
"Dean did a good job with John and Sam more like." - Loved that. Well Louy excellent job with this one. Though I'm saddened it's over I can look forward to what's up next. I'll keep an eye out for your 'other projects' plus the next one in the series. thanks for the great read - Kel
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this Kel, and yeah, I'm sad this one's over too. It's my first long story and have to say, I didn't expect to feel bad about completing it...that was a surprise. Thanks for the review and the stars, Kel, you've made me keen to start the sequel, just got a few others to post first. X Louy
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 16 Are we supposed to talk now?
Just terrific Louy and you'll get no complaints from me about the extra chapter. I'd much rather have the detailed version...lol. Great update and I loved the way you dealt with Dean's waking...Now on to the end and the happily ever after. Right?? Right??
Author's Response: Happy ever after? From me? are you mad?...lol Well, actually yeah, I think Dean deserves it after what I've put him through...so hope you enjoy the finish!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 15 Crying out for attention
The deep pain lancing through Sam’s words made Kyle wonder if it was Dean or his brother who ‘couldn’t take much more of this’ deeply hidden spark that was innate Dean Winchester had found its tinder once more, and it glowed stronger and brighter than it ever had. - Great exorcism Bullet, loved the details. The two quotes above were just perfect. Looking forward to the aftermath... Thanks for the great read - Kel
Author's Response: Thanks so much Kel, and having just had two great days reviewing the fantastic 'Fall River' I feel ready to get on with the next project now...lol Thanks for the review and the stars, you've made my day. X Louy
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
oh boy, now you've gone and done it. Hook, line and sinker and making us wait for the next one? Damn girl, that's just cruel! if i didn't love the way you write, i'd get really nasty, but i wouldn't want to risk putting you off...! Ta for (another!) great read!
Author's Response: This was such a great review to get cos I love your stuff! Thanks so much for this and I promise it won't be too long coming. Got one or two other things to post and finish first though...lol
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
Hey, it sounded like you are bringing back Cobb....that's great! He's a real good baddie to hate...LOL Love this whole story, from start til end...and i love the ending when both Kyle and Bobby had their own respective talks with Dean....and to read that they are laughing again....so touching... Looking forward to more of your stories.... :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and the stars and I hope you'll enjoy the next one. Should be posting quite soon, but need to catch up with some reading and reviewing of my own too...lol Thank again X Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
it was a great read! And I will be there for the next installment. Keep up the good work Louy...
Author's Response: Ah, fredo, thank you so much...and there will definately be a sequel, it's planned, just need the time to write it..lol
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
Kept muttering something about Winchesters - so aren't we all guilty of that? Can't believe this is all done; heck of a ride. More instalments are always a promising idea, though. Think I'll just keep busy enjoying whatever other projects you share until then. Great story!!! - angela
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that Angela. There will definately be more in this series but probably not for a couple of months...Next project 'The Fall of the House of Dream' will hopefully be posted in the next few days...and need to finish 'Eye' and 'Rapture'...so no sleep for me then...lol Thanks again and I hope you enjoy the next ride just as much...
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 16 Are we supposed to talk now?
Self imposed demons are always the worst kind - and I don't think you can fight em with Sam in high on life mode - haha! Great chapter, moving to the next one...
Author's Response: Ah, yes..I am the expert on self imposed demons dont'ya know...lol Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the last chapter.
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
This was a great story and I loved every word of it. I hope you get to the next in the series soon. Thanks for a great read.
Author's Response: Y'know I'm so sad to be leaving this one, I may have to start writing it sooner than I thought...and it's planned already...lol One day I'll get a life...lol Thanks for the review and the stars lostatc. They mean the world to me. X Louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences
Wonderful wrap up to the story, Louy. I enjoyed it very much and will look forward to the next installment when you get to it. In the meantime, I'm looking forward to your other projects.
Author's Response: I couldn't be happier that you enjoyed this Ness, thank you for the review and the stars and I'm so pleased you'll be looking out for the next project because it won't be long coming...X Louy
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