Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 5 Welcome

great update Can't wait to she what she wants with dean

Author's Response: NOthing nice sadly! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 4 Abigail

good so far please hurry with the next chapter

Author's Response:

Another day or two on the next chapter, but I'll try to hurry - my son's teacher started a science project with a animal for every letter of the alphabet, so I'm having to cheerlead that instead of write for a few days - oh well.  I'm glad you're enjoying.

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 4 Abigail

Ouch.. poor Dean, poor Sam, Abigail only needing one of them - doesn't sound too good for the boys!!  It's nice to see Derrick being bullied, even if it is by a wicked witch.  Abigail is suitably evil, I loved the callous disregard with which she refers to her brothers' demise - not a nice lady. Great story.

Looking forward to the next chapter.  Thanks J

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!  I'm glad Abigail came across, I'd like to keep her around a bit.  She should be fun to write as she's a departure from the witches are broke, old and ugly model.  And yes, she does just need the one.

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 2 Would a Schoolbus Have Killed Ya?

Oh, I do love Wee-chesters and this is turning into the boys biggest nightmare.  CPS, doctors, school nurses and loads of attention, not to mention being given to the big bad guy for the night!!  I'm off to the next chapter.... Thanks J

 

Author's Response: Not a good night, sleep tight kind of affair, I'm afraid.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 4 Abigail

no idea about the salad but i really like this story. awesome how you had little dean attack a grown man... nice. totally can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: I'm so glad someone commented on that fight - it made me nervous to write as an adult hitting a child is a delicate topic, even if Dean does start it.  Somehow it just seemed in character for him. Wasn't sure howanyone else would feel.  Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 19/11/07 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 2 Would a Schoolbus Have Killed Ya?

hm.. lots of good quotes but I think my fav is "Weren't there any actual criminals in this town to harrass? Polite, Dean. Dad said polite." I just loved that one.. thanks for a great update - k

Author's Response: I think polite is an acquired skill for Dean, not so much one of his natural gifts, ya know?  Thank you for the review, more soon.

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 3 Hi Honey I'm Home

Holy cow---what an awesome story!  Can't wait to find out where this person took Sammy and Dean!   And oh are they in for it when John Winchester gets his hands on them!

Author's Response: John is going to get his hands on at least some of the folks behind this little adventure, but first the boys have some more travelling to do.  Thanks so much for the review

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 2 Would a Schoolbus Have Killed Ya?

nice start, you've got me interested, looking forward for more...

Author's Response: Thank you! Outline for this one's a bit long, hope it comes out well

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 2 Would a Schoolbus Have Killed Ya?

Awsome start! Can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you. This one's gonna take a while to percolate, but more soon

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 2 Would a Schoolbus Have Killed Ya?

oooo.  this story is very...intriguing.  very curious about who wants revenge on john.  I have a feeling this is definately going to be an edge-of the seat-er coz you never seem to disappoint with the cliffhangers.  So far i think you're doing a great job and i really hope you update soon coz i wanna know what the heck happens next.  

Author's Response: Hope I can live up to the review!  Two tales going for me right now, so updates will alternate, I just couldn't decide what to work on first.  Thank you!