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Reviewer: supernaturalfan13 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/09 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mummy Wrap

Great story! Can't wait to read the sequel!

Reviewer: supernaturalfan13 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/09 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mummy Wrap

Great story! Can't wait to read the sequel!

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mummy Wrap

Yes yes yes! Cant wait to see Abigail come and try her hand with two much more skilled, experienced, and STRONGER Winchester brothers...*shakes head*...Tis horrible to mess with a couple of little boys..*narrows eyes*..Just try taking em when they're older..I dare you! Hehe, lovely story. :D

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 11 To The Rescue?

Oh no! No John! Passing out over your son in the middle of a huge fire is NOT GOOD! :P..I also love this.."Hi Derrek, I'm Sam Winchesters father." Splat! "Pleased to make your aquantance." XD..That was so badass! :D

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 9 A Boredom Timeout

Cool, I've read tons of stories where Dean flirts to get what he wants, and even read a few where Sam charms some people, but this is the first with John doing it..I love it! ;D

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 7 Leave Me Behind

You know what? That part where Sam mouths "Sorry about the skateboard"..broke my heart *sniffs*..That was so sad..well, one Winchester down..one to go. :P

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 4 Abigail

Okay, so for a good cranberry salad, you need cranberries..:P, just kidding, I'm really enjoying this story, I really love when the boys are little, cuz Dean shows more of himself, I'm guessing cuz he's too young to know how to hide it just yet. :D I also forgot to put a comment for the first chapter, so I'm putting it here..I was torn between being horrified or highly amused, that you actually managed to write a story, where someone actually KICKED THE PUPPY! Hehe..why in the world would anyone want to kick poor cute little Sammy? :( Very nice job though. :P

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 2 Would a Schoolbus Have Killed Ya?

I knew it!...Okay, maybe I didnt, but I DID have a feeling it was the guy who kicked him..like two sentences before it said it. :P

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 29/12/08 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 Prologue

Oh man! This was written long enough ago that I hoped maybe there'd be the sequal already started here.
No such luck... *grumble grumble*
Seriously awesome story. If you're still lurking around here, I sincerely hope you've got plans to continue this. I'm thinking Abigail's not going to be particularly happy about being all burned up and uglified.
Gimmie more!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 12 Straight Through

I don't know what to say, but that this is like I said before that I have read other but not as strong as yours' thank you. RATING:) 345 +++++

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 11 To The Rescue?

No need to beg wheb you have someone whom enjoy's reading wonderfull tails such as this.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 10 Playing With Matches

How you have impresed a junki revierwer as you said it is worth it. I am simply an admirer of good litterature and you are doing the best then what I've read before. Rating:) 390++++++

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 9 A Boredom Timeout

The exciding purpose for this litterature you have made, has been like a roller coster from hell. Which is great! A perspective move to present the father figure indulge himself on his boy's. How for the second time, he showed the true value of each of his boys. One a true hunter the other an intrege obeserver. Two good combiniation of being a hunter. How also, its been difficult for the character of DEAN, himself, not giving a rat ass about what is to happen next. After what supposidley happen to SAM . . . how the father is not only controlling his anger, but to also have that savorying taste of bring it on to ABIGAIL herself for the rath she brought upon the Winchesters. Its time to play Hard Ball with father dearest. Thank You. RATING:) 410++++

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 7 Leave Me Behind

This got me all shoooked up. I did have a feeling that they were going to do serious damage. This is to terrifing for me to even read, but I can't stop telling you that out of all the stories that I've read you are as well as top ten killer ass stories. I am impresed. Rateing:) 340++++

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 6 Dinner Guests

You have set up a perfect set up for John to enter tgghe teraine of getting the boys.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 5 Welcome

The image I have been able to display Mrs. Williams is a lonley and crude person. With a mean appoteatl.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 4 Abigail

The structure of this piece is something that whould even huant a parent. This is a real interesting situation. Thank You!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 3 Hi Honey I'm Home

Well that went pertty well. It's a quality to place an old friend such as the character of Paster jim to state the main facts about the situation of his sons. How I also sense that John is pissed to hall about a guy that does not have anogther address, but yet he has his kids. Though he was the one that kicked the hell out of SAM. Rating :) 110 ++++

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 2 Would a Schoolbus Have Killed Ya?

Rating:) 100 ++++ This is going to be identifing the true original of being a WINCHESTER with true honors. I am begining to like your direction of the story.
If I where to have been in DEANs' place I'd've gone back to the motel.

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mummy Wrap

Can't wait for the sequel! I love reading about the younger years.

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 10/08/08 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 11 To The Rescue?

Loving it!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 13 Mummy Wrap

Angela.First of all, get well soon and come back to us!Wow, great story!
I haven’t read many Weechester stories but I really liked this. I thought your John was just right.
He’s a tough, even gruff man but he loves his boys intently and it showed here. Dean was a love as well, how grown up is that kid.
And his love for his Dan and Sam is amazing.
I liked the fact that your witches were real actual witches – gave it an authentic twist to the story and I look forward to the sequel. Great storytelling, thanks for sharing.Bev xx

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mummy Wrap

hm.... loved this. The locator spell showing up on Sammy was a great twist and I look forward to the sequal - Thanks for the great read - Kel

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! The sequel will be a month or so starting, I promised several people I'd do something more with the Gift and I have to get Leap off my chest. Hopefully that won't let everyone who still has any interest in this lose it (crossing fingers). I'm glad you liked this, thanks again! - Angela

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 12 Straight Through

Longer is fine with me, great story and I can only imagine John's gonna track that bitch Abigail down at some point.

Author's Response: John's not done with Abby, not after what she's done to both boys. Think it may be too long for this story, though. Hopefully you can put up with another one!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 11 To The Rescue?

Argh, you're killing me here Angela. Great scene. Figures that in the end Abigail turned on the man she claimed to love - Thanks for the great read - Kel

Author's Response: Loyalty not so much a priority for her, huh?

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