Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 05:22 PM · On: Coming Down
Now Hunny you are not Scum so put the rock down! Ya hear me put it down - step away from the rock and write me somemore of this wunnerfull story!! Jeez No you're not gonna leave me there? No No that's just mean and cruel! the sharks gonna get our boys and there's no Brody with his bloody gig explosions to save em! More please come on ya know ya want to!! bev xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Inch by Inch
Oh Gee now Sam's got both Dean and Emma and we're down to the last lifeboat on the freaking Titanic! This is fab I love the tension, the Sam Dean dialogue, the cute confused hurting Dean (Umm loves me that!) Oh gee, now Sam's getting pissy to make Dean climb the stairs and Dean's being such a brave soldier and those lines about not having fun anymore and threesomes are just hysterical! God this is a gem of a piece! Bev xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 05:08 PM · On: The Price
"Dude!" Dean yelled. "That hurts!" hey Buddy boy hands off the sweet merchandise! Whoa these convulsions are freaking me out! Oh that whole Dean/Sam/John parallel with Ben and his dad is just wonderful! so poignant nice writing! Bev xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh gee that stuff where he thinks Sam's killed his beloved Impala is just so sweetly tragic I didn't know whether to laugh or ask ya to send me over to hug him! "hot tears of exertion burned his face, soaking into the cold, wet sleeve of his shirt. Chills racked him, his muscles aching" Oh now that's settled it send me over Hun i gotta go love that boy better! Come on play fair he NEEDS me! bev xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 4 Lost In The Memories
Oh bad luck on the lost text incident but the rewrite is fab-u-lus! Quick man the lifeboats! Dean Samand me first and then we can huddle together for warmth! No really just for warmth - I'll be good! So who the freaky weird is Ben? Intrigued big time! This is a cracker of a story! bev xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 04:53 PM · On: Nowhere Left To Go
"Great!" Dean barked. "Now what?" A horrible look crossed his face and his eyes became frantic. "Shit, I'm not gonna turn into one of those things am I?" His hand shot to his throat. A werewolf or vampire he could maybe deal with, but to become a floating, gibbering, disembodied head…" Oh that's sweet i can just see his disgusted face - poor baby! Oh it's getting even better - sore and grumpy Dean and Sam all protective and scared! We need Bobby to come rescue us! Gotta read me more! bev x
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 04:49 PM · On: Cut Off
Dean offered him a lopsided grin, favoring his arm. "Sorry, I don't put out on a first date." cool dialogue funky! Love slightly disorientated Dean. he's so cute when he's a bit off-tempo! owh he's flaked out! Can I go help him up please? bev x
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 04:46 PM · On: Sharper Than A Serpent
Gee this is terrific love and hate the nukekubi! freaky weirdy cool beastie and munching on our gorgeous Dean Ugg! Fab wanna know me more! Reading on! bev x
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 08:20 AM · On: Coming Down
TERRY, I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO KNOW WHAT MEDS EMMA'S BEEN ON, 'CAUSE I DEFINITELY NEED SOME OF THEM! JEEZ, WHEN MY HOME HAS THE DELAWARE RIVER INVADING IT I'M A 100% BASKET CASE. PLEASE SEND HER MEDS TO ME ASAP!!!!! TRULY LOVE THE STORY, IT HITS A LITTLE TO CLOSE TO HOME THOUGH - THANKS FOR THE TORTURE. SAM SEEMS TO BE FIGHTING A MULTIPLE FRONT WAR DOESN'T HE - FLOODS, LONG LOST SONS, SEIZURES, COLD --- HE'S REALLY GONNA NEED A TRIP TO DISNEY WORLD AFTER THIS ADVENTURE. CARRY ON, POOKEE
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 06:40 AM · On: Coming Down
Hope I'm not too late for review, found this late yesterday evening and it left me totally breathless, that really rocks, love it and - I want more, great story!!!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 10:42 PM · On: Coming Down
Having 2 chapters makes up for the long wait Terry, you know I'm always on the look out for your updates. And yes, this was a ROTTEN way to end it, but I love the way you're developing your ideas here and I'm very worried for both of the boys (but mostly for Dean.... naturally) See you again soon!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 03:41 AM · On: Coming Down
fantastic story,can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 04:21 PM · On: Sharper Than A Serpent
Are you kidding? That was a great way to end the chapter. And what could be better than waiting for Bobby to arrive to save the day? Really enjoying the story.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 12:08 AM · On: Coming Down
I've just started readin this story and i can't wait to read more....i'm pretty sure there are more bad news waiting to be uncovered in the next chapters right??,,, :)
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 07:00 PM · On: Coming Down
TO HELL WITH IT ???!!! lady, what are you thinking?? We NEVER give up on your tales..... What's that saying "always darkest before the dawn".....all I can say is Bobby better bring a helicopter or a damned big boat.......... Hurry another update, please...???
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 7: Inch by Inch
Great update....Love protective Sam...poor guy bad enough Dean is unable to help but now Emma is hurt!!........Hopefully losing the weapons bag on top of everything that was in the rent-a-wreck will not leave them totally unprepared if anything else goes wrong..... If you dig this hole any deeper Terry the only place Bobby will be headed is to a funeral home for a double viewing...
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 06:02 PM · On: Coming Down
Nope, haven't said to hell with it, still sticking around crazy or not. At least not as crazy as Emma. I really like this - after all what's not to like about a nice evening at home with your sort of mom, plus or minus a little sinking Noah's ark action -lol. I'll be around for the next up date too, bring it on! - Angela
Reviewer: meh (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 05:41 PM · On: Coming Down
Enough with the self-flagellation already (unless it stimulates the muse!) This was a great chapter. You've described the situation so well that I feel desperate on behalf of the boys. Hope Bobby brings a boat soon!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 05:15 PM · On: Coming Down
OMG, now the house is coming apart and the roofs caved in, your ability to describe and control this terrifying mayhem is incredible. "How much... worse can it get?" I always feel this is a question that should NEVER be asked....lol! I loved the comment about the 25 foot freshwater shark. Poor Dean seeing his Mom's death over again, it's so hard for Sam to see Dean, his invincible brother, so hurt and vulnerable. At least he's not got a lot of time to dwell on it. I'm hoping there's a nice big boat nearby with Bobby at the helm.....lol. They really need some help this time. Please update soon. Thanks. Jane
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 7: Inch by Inch
Sure was worth the wait, I can see why you liked this one, we're lurching from one crisis to the next. Poor Sam's struggling to hold it all together here. I love Sam taking charge and looking after a hurt Dean, and Dean certainly is hurting. Your descriptions of the agonies he is going through with these seizures has me holding my breath. The levels of panic and tension are rising along with the water levels. I'm so pleased there's another chapter to read. Jane
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 04:22 AM · On: Coming Down
Great update, it doesn't suck - lol! Well, you sure left us with an evil cliffhanger there. This chapter was worth the wait and I am looking forward to the next one! Thanks!
Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 07:51 PM · On: Coming Down
BEEN WAITING ,A LONG LONG TIME, FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER , BUT AFTER READING IT ,WELL WORTH IT, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, DI.............................
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 07:33 PM · On: Coming Down
What a cliffhanger, how they'll survive to this, can't wait to know what'll happen next. Between Dean with hallucinations, Emma still thinking that Sam is her son and the house flooding, Sam has his hands full. Terrific work Terry.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Inch by Inch
Terry, you don't have to hold your breath, it was worth the wait. So much suspense, lot of water in the house in only few minutes, hope they'll be safe upstairs. Poor Dean he's so in pain and it's heartwrenching for Sam to see his brother's health declining and be powerless.
Reviewer: mvh37 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 05:47 PM · On: Coming Down
I hate admitting it but, as I never know what to say in reviews, I don't write them. As you're being so hard on yourself, however, I just wanted you to know that I'm really enjoying this story and hope it encourages you to continue.
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