Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 03:57 PM · On: Coming Down
Wow--of all the things I expected it wasn't the house coming apart around them. Another fantastic update, Terry. I'll wait patiently (well, sorta patiently) for the next update.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 7: Inch by Inch
Oohh, definitely worth the wait. This was terrific. You write Dean's seizures and pain so well and so believably, it's astonishing. And is definitely right up my alley.
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 02:50 PM · On: Coming Down
Great update, how long will Dean keep going, please let Bobby arrive as soon as possible to help Sam. Please keep going, it's a good story and I want to read it until the last chapter. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 02:04 PM · On: Coming Down
very good. just want another cahpter soon!! :)
Reviewer: JennieC (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 01:29 PM · On: Coming Down
I'm still with you and I am so looking forward to more, please! Sam is doing such a great job of trying to take care of everyone, and Dean, poor Dean! Bobby, we need you!!!!! Hugs jen
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 12:02 PM · On: Coming Down
Dear god...are you trying to give me a nervous breakdown! Although having said that, I have to admit I'm a fan of evil cliffies...they make me want more, and you definitely have the mother of evil cliffies going on right here! Waiting for more....
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 7: Inch by Inch
Honestly Terry, I will say this until I'm blue in the face: you are ALWAYS worth the wait!! This was a fantastic chapter, I was seriously on the edge of my seat while reading it. I was right there with Sam yelling at Dean to get the hell up! So, now that I'm good and panicked, I'm off to read the next chapter...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 11:42 AM · On: Coming Down
And I have no idea what you're on about...this was a great chapter, I was there in that room all the way and I almost got covered in the wood, dirt and trash from the attic floor myself... ...and a great cliffhanger it was too... I am a bit of a fan of the humble cliffie and you've left me wanting a whole lot more of this story...please keep it coming...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 7: Inch by Inch
You'd better believe it was worth the wait and I can see why you like this chapter...it's because it's fantastic...How you can make the basic plot of 'walking up the stairs' such an amazing treat I will never know...and I saw the whole thing play out in my head. But enough...must move swiftly on to the next chapter...
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 4 Lost In The Memories
You took a risk with the 1st part of this story – with the detaching head – it could have turned out comical instead of scary and dangerous, but I think you nailed it. Incredible writing, really descriptive and clear (in all scenes). My thoughts on the ending of chapter 4: Say What!?! I am really eager to see where this going. You've got me hooked! Nana56 has definitely got her money's worth.
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
This just goes to show how awful I am with reviews. I reviewed CHP 6 and then remembered that i had jotted something down for 5 (I hope). Forgive me if it is the wrong chapter. That seizure scene was well done. You had my body all tensed up, muscles bunching in places I didn’t even know existed until it thankfully ended, for Dean that is. Woman, if it’s not one cliffhanger, it’s a next. I’m old and I am not sure that my heart can take it. Really loving this story!
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 12:47 PM · On: Sharper Than A Serpent
That chapter was great! Doggedly, our Dean marches on. I cannot wait for your next chapter, but you just got to hurry as those flood waters are rising rapidly! We can’t have the boys washed away. Or can we? Hmmmm!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 03:39 PM · On: The Price
okay.....all caught up, Terry.......now it will be my turn to wait for an update.....This is awesome love how you've written an identical scenario for Ben/Sam leaving....w/Emma/Dean the "wronged one" and John/Ben's Dad being kindred hardheads....... Fantastic!!! Ohmigosh!! Now the whole lower floor may be unusable if the rain continues..... hopefully Emma kept Ben's waterwings from summer camp!!!! :0) jude
Author's Response: Ha ha! Hope the end, whenever it happens doesn't disappoint you!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 5
Can't believe I had to wait soooooo long to catch up on your great story, Terry.....sorry... Poor old Emma.. Thank God she gave the boys sanctuary though(no matter what her motives may be) They would have died for sure... What a corner you've painted our poor hunters into this time....Neither of them healthy enough to help the other...!!!
Author's Response: Ta Jude! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 25/12/07 05:45 PM · On: The Price
Enjoying this story, Terry. Looking forward to more. Happy Holidays!
Author's Response: man I finally just got to these. So sorry. Glkad you're enjoying it. Merry HoHO to you to!
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 20/12/07 10:47 AM · On: The Price
TERRY, I REALLY CAN'T DECIDE WHAT I LIKE THE MOST ABOUT YOUR WRITINGS: THE AUTHOR'S CHAPTER NOTES OR THE ACTUAL STORY! I ALWAYS ENJOY THE "UNSPOKEN DIALOG" BETWEEN THE BOYS THAT YOU INCORPORATE INTO YOUR WRITINGS. EXPERTLY EXECUTED. EMMA IS STARTING TO MAKE ME FEEL A LITTLE UNEASY. I HAVE A FEELING SHE'S NOTE GOING TO LET SAM LEAVE "AGAIN" WITHOUT A FIGHT. EMMA MAY BE SHOWING A LITTLE JEALOUSY REGARDING SAM'S ATTENTION TO DEAN. DEAN NEEDS ATTENTION....EMMA SEEMS TO NEED ATTENTION. AS I SAID BEFORE, WHERE IS KATHY BATES ... MISERY DOES LOVE COMPANY. YEAH AND THANKS FOR THE LAST LINE, I HAVE THE SUDDEN URGE TO CALL MY FEMA FLOOD DAMGE INSPECTOR AGAIN! MERRY CHRISTMAS! POOK
Author's Response: Theer's a littler more to Emma than meets the eye but I'm not sure what yet. Time will tell!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 12:10 PM · On: The Price
Amazing update, well worth the wait. Whoa, Emma seems to be nice but sure is more than just a bit confused. Why do I have the feeling that Dean's injuries/poisoning and the pouring rain aren't their only problems...? Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: It's just gonna be one of those days for them. What can i say?
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 08:29 PM · On: The Price
What a gripping chapter Terry. How strange, Sam's looking like he's Ben's twin and when Emma telling Ben's story when he left it was exactly the same way than Sam when he left home. Sam got his hands full, taking care of Dean who's getting worse and worse, hallucinations, seizure and a asthma attack, Emma who nearly passed out and now there're three inches of water on the house's floor. What'll happen next, can't wait to know.
Author's Response: trying to get the next chapter up this weekend and we'll see what happens.
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 06:25 PM · On: Sharper Than A Serpent
I love you for this. Mainly three things: 1)Even God Forgot Where It Was, Michigan...I think I've been there. 2)Using a Japanese spirit. Which was just freaky as hell. 3) Their rental was a Caprice...my husbands first "lovely" vehicle. And of course, I love this chapter because you had a head chew on Dean's arm. *bows* -SJ
Author's Response: This review cracked me up!!!
Reviewer: Deanwinchesterfan1985 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 10:59 AM · On: The Price
I just found this story and I've really enjoyed it so far. I love a Dean angst story...so that is what drew me in in the first place but I'm so glad that I did check it out. It has been really enjoyable. Poor Dean being bitten was bad enough but poisoned by the stupid thing...so now he is feverish and hallucinating. Sam is struggling with this whole Ben thing and the flood is growing rapidly worse. If it was Dean thinking that there was a flood I would have thought it was another hallucination but it was Sam...so crap. This can't be good. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it and welcome to the world thru my eyes!
Reviewer: _Psych_ (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 08:56 PM · On: The Price
Congrads on another wonderful chapter. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: ta so much!!!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 04:51 PM · On: The Price
The chapter meets with my approval. Unequivocally! You know Terry I always find your descriptions really vivid, but the first two paragraphs of this chapter would have to be, in my humble opinion, among the best you've ever done....drowning in a freezing scarlet sea. Wow. I love where you appear to be going with this story, Emma has me a bit worried, the bandaid on the tongue was priceless, and I loved the connection to "Chipping Away" - still one of my favourite fics ever. In short, I'll wait sort-of-patiently for your next update, whenever it is. And in case it happens to be after Christmas, I wish you the happiest of holiday seasons, whatever you happen to be celebrating. But if you get Sam and Dean as a present you have to share. Note to Gaelic: keep her going, this is great stuff. I tell her that every time but she doesn't believe me! Happy Christmas!
Author's Response: You're too kind. I thought I gopt a little carries away but if yu liked it then that's all that mattered. Updating soon, never have any time antymore
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 02:09 PM · On: The Price
This chapter was fan-friggin-tastic! The description of Dean's seizure was very well written and painful to read. You've got me really curious as to what Ben's backstory is...the parallels with Sam and John's relationship are eerie and unsettling. I loved the flashbacks to "Chipping Away", which is one of my favorite stories! And now the living room is afloat! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hopefully I'll have the next chapter up in a few days. Hopefully.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 12:41 PM · On: The Price
You always say there is a black hole, and I can never see it - all "blemishes" that you may see here are like Dean's hallucinations of Sammy..... Awesome chapter. Too friggin cool, the way you brought in "Chipping Away" - one of my most favourite ever pre-series stories.... - You should really post a note for the newbies who may not have found that gem yet.... I've actually been meaning to shoot you off an email to ask if I could reference "Chipping" in my "John Just.." story? Dying for more back story on Ben.... Hoping that we see Bobby come swimming to the rescue.... And I have a whole new respect for the word "befuddled" - recently had a concussion (and a couple broken ribs...), and descrived myself as befuddled for about a week - only in hindsight of course, at the time I thought I was fine - much like Dean...hmmmm.... as always will be happily waiting for the next chapter.....
Author's Response: I'm sorry I took so long to rspond to this, reference away, I'm flattered that you would want to use anything from one of my stories.
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 12:24 PM · On: The Price
Fabulous update thank you Lorraine
Author's Response: Ta, i appreciate that!
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