Reviewer: fedaykin_here (Signed) · Date: 14/01/13 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
This was very bone chilling indeed!! In fact I'm going to recommend this story on lj ASAP!! I thought you capture the dialoge of the boys very well. Can actually see them talking this way in cannon. As for the lenghts that Dean will go for Sam.... yes! If I was in Dean's position, I too would have made the mistake of Pure Love being for him to commit sucide! Scary indeed and leaves you on the end of your seat! Bravo!! Now I can't wait to read your other story, hon!!
Author's Response: Madison..... Never dreamed you would actually look for this .....much less read it! I'm thoroughly tickled that you did. Thank you so very much, honey! Glad you enjoyed it and were kind enough to leave a review! Bless you. Was pretty limited by the 2,000 word story criteria but tried hard to stick to it! Glad you liked it... :)
Reviewer: kansasangel (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
blimey ! stopped breathing towards the end . was really worried for the boys . dont do that to me again ! please .
Author's Response: Angel, I would NEVER do that to you on purpose.........It was supposed to be scary for Halloween.... I guess that means i accomplished my goal....... I apologize :0) jude
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
That was brill! I always look forward to reading ur work, I know you produce nothing but the best... I did read this when It was on most recent, I don't know why I didn't review then. I know...another slap on the wrist. Lol Poor Sam, trapped in a mirror without a voice. Thank god, Cecily called in the nick of time. That Dean, always willing to sacrifice himself. Love it Schelz
Author's Response: And we love him for it, Schelz......It's just that it isn't only Sam that needs him.......WE DO TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you for the high rating, sweetie.... and your real vote of confidence......it's so nice of you.. Hopefully you didn't mind reading it twice......
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
Wow! Great story! The mirror was a very clever idea. So glad Dean didn't have to sacrifice himself.
Author's Response: Shannon, thank you so much for finding my HC tale and leaving a review..... yeah, I thought it was a decent premise.... I appeciate your comments, very much
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
This was a nice, simple story.
Author's Response: Thanks, Karen..........
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
nice little tale her Jude...
Author's Response: thanks, fredo....think about you every time I use my mug ....appreciate you stopping by.........
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
I was wondering how the "ice was going to figure in this! Nice touch with the mirror. Also clever how you worked the salt in there. Nice job!
Author's Response: Writers always think they're being clever but the real feather in my cap is when a reader thinks that's the case...........!!! Thank you so much,Abi, for the sweet compliments ... I'm so happy that you enjoyed it!! :0) jude
Reviewer: soapsuds4 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
OMG!! i was soooo scared dean was gonna kill himself!! im sooo happy he didnt. i really like the story, the ending was really good with the whole salt tear thing. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Nicky...how sweet of you to read and review....I really appreciate when someone pauses long enough to let me know they care..............Thanks again...this all came about because I read those song lyrics.....
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
Loved it just as much the second time around, Jude. It's awesome what our boy Dean's willing to sacrifice for that crazy, sunshine smile, brother of his. Ness
Author's Response: Thanks, vanessa....Yeah....Sam's smile is gorgeous..... just not so sure he's worth all that pain sometimes..... thanks for my stars, too.......... :0) jude
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
great job i loved it and yes it was very terrifying
Author's Response: Danielle, Thank you...for checking out my little tale....sorry I didn't get home til nearly midnight last night so didn't post til 1am....sorry.... so glad you liked it!!! :0) jude
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
OMG Jude! Bone-chilling AND heart-wrenching. First I was barrelled over by your description of Sam's fear relived 12 years later, real and intense, and how Dean understood this as showed in your words "...shifting his full attention to his obviously shaken brother". But stuck in a mirror surrounded by nothingness?? The very thought is enough to drive me to insane! Of course salt AND true love IS tears, clever iimagination, brilliantly written. And those salty loving tears would be double dose coz we are talking Dean and Sammy here. I read the ending twice, you had me in the palm of your hand. And Dean kissing Sam goodbye through the mirror *sob* killing me slowly!
Author's Response: Petra, thank you for your wonderfully detailed review ( and you keep fibbing and saying you are not a writer) .......you made me so very happy.....i liked it a lot when i did it but have had my doubts since....... someday I will twist your arm and we'll do at least a drabble TOGETHER...i'd love that....
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
So, second attempt at reviewing this one - problems with laptop gremlins!!! Loved the 'trapped in the mirror' plot and Dean's 'almost' sacrifice at the end. That gave it a great emotional focus. Not sure why you don't think this is bone- chilling, cos girl, it so is! It's just scary, emotional and sad as well. - With a happy ending! Great job jude :)
Author's Response: God bless you , Lou, for being so generous with the rating.......earned a four from somebody and two stars made me feel less than adequate!!! Glad you liked it....it made me happy....and in the end we all really write what we like ...don't we?? Yeah, the picture of Dean hiding the mirror face by holding it against him to save Sam more anxiety seemed pretty Dean, I thought......Thank you again for being so nice to R&R
Reviewer: Danni87 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
Jude... awesome story, I can totally feel Sam's terror at not being able to do anything. And Dean's plan, heartbreaking and terrifying from Sams point of view. Loved it.
Danni
Author's Response: Danni thanks for your kind words.....wasn't sure if i got point across
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
Hi jude, reads even better second time. Clever use of Metalica`s Trapped Under Ice. Poor Dean always so willing to sacrifice himself. well done Lorraine
Author's Response: thanks for my stars Lorraine...thank you for making the time to read it again ......glad it hadn't turned you off on first read...... Read those lyrics seemed like a match!!! We all know his level of devotion to Sam ...to family.....
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
Oh Jude, this was amazing I'm totally sad it was a one shot!...creepy as hell, man I'm sitting with my family watching creepy movies for Halloween and now I've read you're story I'm doubly freaked! Great Job! -Bex
Author's Response: Bex, Thank you sooo very much for your delightful comments......and those yummy 5 stars !!! I would have liked to have been able to lengthen it as well..........Somehow think after the terror and tension calmed down Sam would have tossed some comment about "In the Impala?! What were you thinking? Who would have cleaned that up ?!" Seems they always joke to keep from crying....!!!!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
What a great story! I think the idea of being stuck in a mirror is scary too. Love the end. Laura
Author's Response: Thanks, laura really appreciate your kind words....congrats again on your awesome tale..... end was kind of sudden but felt right...
Author's Response: forgot to thank you for the stars :0) Jude
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 Trapped Under Ice
Trust me Jude Dean's plan was completely terrifying. Trapping Sam in the mirror was a cool idea. Thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Thanks, Kel....appreciate you making the time to read it....I wasn't displeased with it....I just can't do bone-chilling... yeah, I liked the mirror too....thanks...
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