Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting (not sure if it’s good or bad interesting – I’m undecided). I felt like you could have so much more with this. I was anticipating an interesting, chapter story that had twists & turns because the beginning definitely grabbed my attention. The ending was also so abrupt and I was disappointed.
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for your review, this story was an entry into the halloween comp and was limited to 2,000 words max. So a lot had to be crammed into a little space. And because it was obviously a oneshot there had to be an ending. sorry you were left dissapointed. Lorraine
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
evil woman!! lovely little gem. Crystal
Author's Response: why thank you dear lol
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Lol, L.k.! Poor Dean....ha ha, I loved what you did with this. Very twisty, very turny, very humorous.... hee hee...now I can't stop chuckling....lol....cookies to you....
Author's Response: thankyou so much Cat. Yum cookies Lorraine
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wonderful! It's even better reading it the second time! I love the mixture of horror and humor! I can't think of anything more horrifying than to have my arms and legs unwillingly amputated.
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon , It was your hard work as well Lorraine
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
great story you had me so creeped out even the anagram was creepy.
Author's Response: Hi Danielle thank you for the review glad you found it creepy. Lorraine
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
'Would you hop up on the bed for me so I can take a look?" - couldn't have put it better myself!!! "which cheek?" - eeny, meeny, miny, moe... And such quality redundant body parts!!!! and the catheter!! No wonder Dean hates doctors!! Death spelt backwards - very clever, I never even picked it. Maybe the three legged shaggy dog lulled me into a false sense of security? But then again, that comment about disability!?!?! Great fic Lorraine, very creative. Enjoyed it very much.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow that was crazy! Dean with no arms or legs *shivers* not good! Happy it was a dream...and the anagram thing was a cool little twist!
Author's Response: Thanks gengen, it was a little bit of fun for halloween. Lorraine
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it just as much the second time around! Though, like you and Jude, I like my Dean a little more intact. LOL It's been so much fun reading all the spooktacular Halloween entries!
Author's Response: Thanks vanessa, intact vanessa but with less clothes lol Lorraine
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
Can something be funny and frightening at the same time? This is! That doctor was creepy... I'm so glad it was just a nightmare! This's great job. And an anagram of death? That's very clever!
Author's Response: Hi Scanila thanks so much for the review pleased you enjoyed this story Lorraine
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
The very idea of our boy's perfect form desecrated by some psycho physician would scare me to death......... thought for sure this was headed towards a swiped kidney...... great surprise with the doctor and his son.........poor kid Thoroughly enjoyable tale.......
Author's Response: Hi Jude, thamks for the review and the stars. Yep you and I both like him with all hie bit intact lol. Glad you enjoyed. Lorraine
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Cool, story. Very nicely done, what a nightmare huh.. It's been so much fun reading everyone's stories, yours included. - K
Author's Response: Hi K thanks for the review glad you enjoyed Lorraine
Reviewer: _Psych_ (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Awesome, it was good...lol.
Author's Response: Hi courtney, thank you for the review glad you enjoyed the story Lorraine
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Definately enjoyed Lorraine - awesome story. Got a soft spot for malevolent doctors!!! and the missing legs and arms - dont get much more scary than that - just glad it was a dream. Well done mate!
Author's Response: Hi Louy, we had great fun writing these stories. thanks for the review and the stars
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awesome job, lekelly!! Wicked dream for poor Dean!! Loved the twilight zone, and this would have been perfect on the show!! great job. bambers;)
Author's Response: Hi Bambers gotta love the twilight zone lol thanks for the stars Lorraine
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
Gotta hate those redundant body parts...hehehe Great fic. Laura
Author's Response: Hi thanks for the review, personally i dont think Dean has any redundant body parts.I think all his parts are wonderfull lol Lorraine
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