:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was great! Hurry and update.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

Evil cliff hanger but great chapter. Hope for more soon. Have a great holiday

Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

OMG! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
by the way Merry Christmas!
Rosilee

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

Enjoying the story so far. I find that the conversation is a little stilted so you may want to pay a little attention to it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

Looking foward to see where this is going

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

very good storyline. what dean said about jess and madison was harsh. I can so see that accidently slipping out--well played! The best part was when dean waited for the door to close before giving his 'bitch' response.
you do have some errors on the page though. might want to consider a beta or just rereading before posting. But like I said--very good otherwise. looking forward to the update:)

Author's Response: I dont how to get a beta thingy so i havent even went there, but have wanted one :)

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice start! I hope you'll be continuing this one...definitely got me intrigued

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh this most certainly is headed right down the loo from here...isn't it???

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