:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

I thought my heart broke with "Enough", but this just shattered it!! Sam's pov was needed and this ficlet was perfect, as an explanation as well as a complimentary piece. The flashback was sad and poignant, just as it was the first time, both boys left in shock.
"And then he heard it" Boy did that little sentence pack a punch. Beautifully written.
Your words "He'd just ignored his own brother...While he watched" stole the show, this realisation leaving Sam devastated and ill, understanding that's exactly what went down.
I loved the flashback as a trigger for Sam to get his priorities straight and go back to Dean. You wrote their conversation brilliantly, loved Dean's face softening and smiling as realisation dawned. What a lovely christmas you gave them, brother time to kick back together *sigh*
An awesome pair of oneshots! Original, creative and well written. You sure pushed my buttons!!!

Author's Response:
Gah, I love reviews! Thank you so much for your awesome comments, I love it when readers put so much detail in, letting me know what parts were good/bad/etc.
Thanks for checking out my stories, and especially leaving feedback :)
~Sierra

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

I had to read this after reading Enough. I must say you did good by both of our boys. Very well written. Thanks for a nice little read.

Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to give me your thoughts, very appreciated :)
~Sierra

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

I skimmed over the intro and started getting a strange feeling of deja vu when I read the flashback, then I realized why. This is the sequel to Enough from Sam's pov that I asked you to write;-) Very nicely done, thanks for the early Christmas pressie!

Author's Response:
Thank you for the inspiration! I meant to save this until further into the holiday season, but I have no patience so....
So glad you liked it :)
~Sierra

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awwwwwwww! That was beautiful SierraN. I really like the way Enough was Dean's feelings and this one was focused on Sam's. Sooo heartbreaking, yet sooo good:) You're a great writer and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. I could probs go on for ages but don't want to put the sleepers on you. Zzzzz (LOL)
Fantasy

Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much! What a fun day, getting all these reviews from you. It means a lot, so yeah...thanks!
~Sierra

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful, painful ,soulful...you got in all in this story.
Your words just painted the pictures for me and brought tears.
Thanks for sharing.
A fan

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was beautiful, almost too sad for me! Well done SierraNichole!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have to say I did read the companion piece to this story and I loved it. This one was equally as good. I loved the way portrayed the boys. Great job and thanks for the read - K

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice. Made me all teary eyed. ((sigh))

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved 'enough' and this is fantastic as it's flip side. Very sad, very well writen and very beautiful.

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great job! Loved the guilt trip Sam had, loved the ending! You did wonderful!

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