Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
27/10/07 03:28 PM · On:
Very different, very original and very brave to try something so different. I loved it.
I was very entertained!!
Author's Response: Thanks Bulletbabe - I'm so glad you liked it. Yes, I stepped right out of my comfort zone with this one - think I'm getting a little braver with my writing - I mean, I've even got a sequel going to Class Dismissed. That's a brave step for me too. This idea has been kicking around in my head for awhile. I just wanted to have a go and see if I could make it work. I'm glad it worked out all right....Jules
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed)
27/10/07 01:10 PM · On:
Gee! When I realized that Dean was the one whose leg was pinned, after finishing reading the story, I had to reread it again!!!
Funny me, for every dialog, I chant to myself the brothers' names! 'Ok, this is Sam's dialogue, ok, Dean.... Sam..... Dean.....' lol
Author's Response: LOL - thanks for that - and thanks for the review. While writing that dialogue, I could hear their voices in my head - probably not a good thing to admit, having voices in my head, even if they are Dean and Sammy...hmm....think I'll just stop right there...lol...Jules
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed)
27/10/07 12:52 PM · On:
Good job! Laughter is the best medican the bikering between the boys is so like them
Author's Response: Thanks Bookworm - so glad you enjoyed it. I actually padded this one out a bit before I posted it - the version gathering dust on my computer was only about 1900 words long. And of course, I had to have them finish the hunt...Jules
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed)
27/10/07 12:02 PM · On:
Brilliant way of telling a story, reallt suited to a one shot. i totally agree with the lines kel picked out. very funny and so in character. Well done Lorraine
Thanks, Lekelly - but...Lorraine??? Who's Lorraine?
There's so much fun that one can have with the boys and their banter, and of course Dean just hammers the smart-alecky comments in every situation. He's a joy to write for. (He's a joy to look at too, just quietly...not that I'm knocking Sammy - cute kid, and those eyes, and those dimples - but Dean, ahh, Dean...)...Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed)
27/10/07 10:20 AM · On:
This was freakin' AWESOME!!!!! We need a contest for stories "not done in the regular style" or something. You totally had the boys down - dead obvious as to who was speaking. Just loved it Jules - Thanks!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Lisa. Glad you liked it. One of the biggest challenges was to see how many ways I could describe pitch black darkness - LOL. Just wanted to try my hand at something different - glad that it worked....Jules
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed)
27/10/07 10:16 AM · On:
Lol, that was really fun.
Author's Response: Thanks, Shiny. This sat in my folder for so long I almost had to blow the dust off it so I could finish it....Jules
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed)
27/10/07 08:53 AM · On:
Awesome oneshot! I had figured out that Sammy was the one who was hurt o badly, but I thought it was also Sam that was pinned--so you really surprised me by revealing it was Dean!
Author's Response: No problems - and thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it so much. It made for an interesting exercise, the voices in the dark, and the sound effects of movement - quite a departure from my usual style....Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
27/10/07 08:44 AM · On:
I'm sure you and your split personality have a lot to talk about
Can you just - is it possible for you to say one thing - just one - without turning it into a smartass comment or an insult?"
"That was it."
Ha, Jules, just great. Loved the dialog, spot on for both brothers. So glad you got this together and posted. Thanks for the great read - k
Author's Response: Thanks, Kelly - glad you liked it. Their banter has just so much potential for humour, and I do love humour. There's another humour fic gathering dust in that folder - actually, there are a number of old fics in there that I will try to complete this year. Thrilled that you liked this one so much...Jules
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed)
27/10/07 07:37 AM · On:
Hey, I liked it. I love doing straight dialogue stories. They can be quite fun as well as challenging. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Vanessa - I've never done that before - I always have gestures, expressions, that sort of thing. But I stuck them in total darkness so I could see if pure dialogue would work. It seemed to. Thanks for the review - they are gold...Jules
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed)
27/10/07 07:27 AM · On:
interesting way to write...but i enjoyed it!!
Well done on a successful fic
Author's Response: Thanks Soph - glad you liked it. I wanted to try my hand at that style, and the one-shot seemed the perfect vehicle....Jules
Reviewer: Miss Sparrow (Signed)
27/10/07 06:54 AM · On:
I like your story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for that - and thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you were entertained...Jules