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Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 08:06 AM · On: Secrets

WOW. This is simply amazing! I love...everything! Trinity seems like such a different kind of person, and that whole council thing...veeeeeeery interesting. I really, really can't wait to see where this goes! Incredible job, psycho!!! P.S. love your penname.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 05:03 PM · On: Secrets

good chapter but I'm confused...says she's calling Bobby but winds up talking to some vamp called jake......... hopefully next chapter will clarify

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 02:15 PM · On: Secrets

Yay Michelle! You posted your first story! I love the beginning! It's so vague and mysterious. Even though Trinity seems bad I want to like her.
This first chapter has so much! I love the way she treats her pothead brother. She's so forceful she comes off as being a bitch, but I don't really think she is.
This chapter has it all---mystery, humor, subterfuge. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 05:51 AM · On: Secrets

Great first chapter psychomom. I've been trying to work on something writen in the first person for ages and haven't done anywhere near as well as this.
Very original - great plot and I like the characters you've created yourself. Very believable.
I'm gonna check out soul asylum now thanks to you, oh, and I'm a crazy cat lady on the corner too so you're not alone!! lol

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 12:14 AM · On: Secrets

Great job with the first chapter. Trinity seems like quite the mystery, is she a hunter gone darkside? Very intriguing.
Loved the hurt Dean, he's always cherished and adored.
Look forward to reading more soon!

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 11:59 PM · On: Secrets

This is very good and interesting..I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter!
Awesome!
-Bex

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