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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 04:32 PM · On: Goodbyes

The ending is kind of sad, kind of hopeful. I guess it's the only ending that makes sense.
It seems like Trinity's dad has his priorities as screwed up as John Wincester. Family doesn't always come first. I guess if that's the way you are in life then why would you be any different in death (or undeath...whatever).
Thanks for the great story!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 08:23 PM · On: End Games

Very powerful!
I thought Sheldon was a vamp on steroids, but he wasn't. Wow!
I love the lines: "I can't pretend anymore. I'm not as strong as I want to be." That shows us who Trinity really is.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 08:20 PM · On: Revolution

Clever plan!
Haven't seen anything in Supernatural about child vampires. And this one certainly has an attitude!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 04:46 PM · On: Hidden

Okay... so star has been part of this whole thing all along? And Harold. too? Does Harold know his dad is alive? My mind is trying to catch up---so many revelations! Excellent!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 9

Trinity sure has a smart mouth. I hope she and Dean never have children together. They'll be expelled from school on the first day.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 06:17 PM · On: Disheartening

Trinity just keeps going deeper and deeper into the fire! We've finally found someone who has worse luck than the Winchesters.
Great chapter Michelle! Keep it up!

Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 06:25 PM · On: Disheartening

where the hell is dean? *shaked head* please please update soon!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 07:31 PM · On: Retribution

Great chapter Michelle! I can't believe that Fallyn truly thought of Trinity as her own daughter. Kind of sad and pretty creepy.
I like that this chapter reveals all the confusing emotions of possession, betrayal and resignation. A very emotionally charged chapter. Thanks for taking us inot their heads!

Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 07:22 PM · On: Retribution

i dont know about you but a turbo charged dean? ugh! downright sexy! LOL okay ignore the crazy woman over here *grins* please update soon!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 6

More please! Trinity's a chick with serious issues but she'd tough and fiesty and I wanna know how it all works out! Bird xx

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 6

Geez, this story has more twists than a roller coaster. I love it!
She's pretty quick-thinking, involving the other motel guests to protect her. But now she's out of the frying pan and in the fire.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 06:51 PM · On: Revelations

This chapter is one of my favorites! It's marvleous! Now we have an idea what Trinity is.
And the end---where she whispers to Dean that he broke his promise to her just breaks my heart.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 06:48 PM · On: Lonely Days

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this---haven't even seen it since the draft. It's wonderful!
I love Trinity's smart-ass remarks. The one about Santa missing her is great!
Finally we get to know what happened to Trinity's family, why she has turned to the dark side.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 10:16 PM · On: Revelations

wish i could feel some pity for her but it was her treachery and deceit that put them all in this situation.....hmmmm getting very interesting

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 03:23 PM · On: Revelations

Hoowee! What have you done to Dean you twisted B**ch! Write more I NEED to know! Bird x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 03:08 PM · On: Slient Goodbyes

Awwh! And I was just learning to love Harold! Trinity's a funky babe but I think she has a few issues! Bird x

Reviewer: witchy (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 10:00 AM · On: Lonely Days

Hey I just took the time to read your story and I really like it. I like the way it is written, being in her head is great. There is a lot of action and vampires are one of my favorite subjects in Supernatural. Can't wait for the next chapter !

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 05:25 PM · On: Lonely Days

Oh wow.....wouldn't want to have the dreams you and trinity see..... waiting for the next update...

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 04:49 PM · On: Slient Goodbyes

Trinity is going to get caught terribly trying to play both ends against the middle isn't she???

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 11:31 AM · On: Slient Goodbyes

OMG.. I was just starting to like Harold.
This is really getting interesting. i guess Trinity will be helping the boys now. Great job-
You have really raised the bar in terms of drama..... poor Sam is barely hanging on...Dean still out of it.....Trinity...I'd say revenge is in order. Terrific piece of writing.
OUTSTANDING !!!!!!!!
Please post soon.
BRAVO!!!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 08:50 AM · On: Slient Goodbyes

Not Harold! NOOOOOO! I liked poor stoner Harold!
Great action! It doesn't matter whose side Trinity was on before, we know whose side she'd on now! I can't wait for her and the Winchesters to kick some vampire ass!
Oh, but Dean's been bitten. Yikes! This will be good!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 01:05 PM · On: Secrets

Elkins daughter a vampire..?????
Excellent twist right off the bat.
Dean bitten..hum...
Great start ...I'm really looking forward to how you weave this web.
Trinity ..interesting name choice-protecting a nest..??????
You got everyone's attention with this one-excellent writing
BRAVO!!!!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 08:24 PM · On: Dreams

Still mysterious! I love the flashback! Don't know what Trinity has gotten herself into, but I sure hope she cna get out of it---and the Winchesters, too. Still not certain who's side she's on. Great job!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 08:50 AM · On: Dreams

interesting tale so far, Psycho..... I'm assuming she never sees Bobby--only phone contact....'cuz Bobby instinctively know something was wrong... Love Dean's single tear ...as always

Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 07:49 AM · On: Dreams

i liked this chapter, i take it that Trinity is a Vampire??
Can't wait for the next update!

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