Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Wrath
Awwwwwww, BJ but you write NASTY so exceedingly well.... Sam is in so far over his head he's drowning!!! But God knows he'll never listen to Dean...even though Dean is sooo much wiser.... Keep it coming BJ...I'm writing a humor fic right now and this is great balance......
Author's Response: I guess it's easy to write nasty when you have true evil to work with. Leviathan is truly the most evil being I've ever had to get inside its head. It's not nice in there, but the Winchesters having the final say will make it all worth it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Lust
wow you are a clever writer - somewhat twisted and warped as well,but so clever. If your intent was to have the reader outraged yet transfixed then you hit your mark. And damn you, the images you have planted are so wrong but (god forgive me) so hot! I suggest you go directly to the nearest mirror and check your eyes as I suspect they may have a distincly deamonic hue. Growlllll! Birdie x
Author's Response: I will admit to being possessed by this demon. He is one nasty evil bastard and I only pray Dean comes and releases me soon! I thought the worst was over, but unfortunately this demon just keeps getting more vicious. I can't control him. This is why I was so hesitant to post this story, it is much darker than I normally write, but there is a light coming. I do know the boys will win out in the end... they are our Winchesters after all. I hope it's not too painful in the meantime. Thanks for reviewing, B.J.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Gluttony
OMG girl, that was intense. That evil lying mongrel put Sam through the wringer and my heart broke into little bits over and over with each lie. Your description was absolutley awesome - right up there with the best fanfic has to offer. Your work portrayed Sam's dispair, his emtional and physical reactions and his battle with what's really true in his heart to perfection. I just KNEW this story was gunna be great because ch 1 set the standard in style, origianlity and creativity. Your ch 2 just surpassed that - you're in your groove well and truly. I'm so glad you followed your heart and just let it all out. This is gunna be one hell of a ride!!!
Author's Response: Wow, that was a great review. Thanks so much! Yeah, this one scared me, especially letting that demon into my head to write all those nasty lies. He is one evil SOB! The big payoff will come when the brothers actually have to talk this out and Sam discovers what the truth is. Til next time, take care, B.J.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Gluttony
OMG, an amazing piece of writing so far. Yet scary to think that there might be some truth in the words of the demon. I hope not... I appreciate your courage touching such a delicate subject. Let's see where you will take us from here. And I totally agree with you that S3 had a great start but I aslo missed more emotions between the brothers. Looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: I never thought I would go near this subject matter, but it seems to be all over the fanfics now and I hoped I could present it in another light. I hope to really examine the price Dean was willing to pay to care for his family. He is such a complicated man and revealing that always makes for a good story. Thanks for reviewing, B.J.
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Gluttony
Oooh. That is pure evil...waiting for the next chappy.
Author's Response: Thanks again. Yeah, this demon is a nasty evil one... he does his kind proud! Later, B.J.
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Lust
it's the risks that pay off...I can't wait for the next chapter:) Sometimes you just gotta follow what your heart tells you. Well done to you for ur bravery.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am feeling better about this story, hardly scared at all! LOL Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Gluttony
You're an evil woman BJ. LOVE IT! Great chapter. I'm waiting for the next one. Laura
Author's Response: Thanks, but I'm not the evil one... it's that demon. He makes me write these things! Congrats on the Halloween challenge win. Great story. Til next time, B.J.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Gluttony
love "old news...you got anything else...or should i send you packing?" well, you sure are convincing with all the psychology and background....poor Sam....this is one really evil sonuvabitch demon...
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, poor Sam is trying to stay cool and collected, but this demon is a master at psychological warfare. This demon is a nasty one. Thanks for reviewing, B.J.
Reviewer: Lucy (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Lust
Truly thrilling!! I am anxiously waiting for more!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Lucy. I hope to post the next chapter by Monday. I hope you enjoy. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Lust
This bada$$ is right up there with the worst of the worst we've seen in fandom. Your description reveals how deep his evil is and how high he gets off on it. I think the long discussion back and forth IS the epitomy of torture for Sam on many fronts, especially when it's about Dean and John. Out of all your vivid, graphic description this line stood out for me "Don't you dare call me son..." because it showed us how successful and devastating the demon's cruelty was. Thanks for your bravery in posting your WIP against your better judgement - yep, this story was busting to get out and I'm glad you're doing it.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks... just when I start doubting myself and thinking what in the world was I thinking... your vote of confidence comes along. I certainly feel like this demon is inflicting the ultimate agony on Sammy just from his words. He is one evil sonofabitch. Poor Sammy is just so desperate for something to hold onto concerning Dean that he is falling into the demon's trap. Thanks again for a lovely review, B.J.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Lust
will the entire story revolve around an elongated chat with this demon
Author's Response: This is a WIP so I'm not entirely sure where it will go, but if you are looking for action this story probably isn't it. The Rack was always a favorite movie of mine, not to say that this story will come close to that brilliance, but it is an inspiration. This is going to be more a psychological torment and reveal kinda story. Yeah, the demon's gonna be doing a lot of talking and taunting and then hopefully Dean and maybe Bobby will be telling the truth later on. There are going to be chapters to come covering gluttony, wrath, pride and envy and then lightness and darkness. Yep, not much action, unless they are talking about it. I see no point in covering again the action of the demon's attack that the show already showed us. Hope that helps. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Lust
I thought this was great...glad you broke your rule! And glad this story wants OUT...lol Laura
Author's Response: Thanks Laura. Yeah, I feel like I'm starting out again, having that pressure to come up with the next worthy chapter. I gotta get used to not always being in control and just let the story write itself. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Lust
Well done powerful emotional writing. Sam knows that the demon lied but i bet he can`t help thinking about it. Lorraine
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, it is always appreciated. Yeah, poor Sam is hurting even though most of the demon's words are lies, but there is always that glimmer of truth weaved in and that is the part that is going to tear Sam apart. Later, B.J.
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