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Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 12:47 AM · On: Clash of the Species

Okay, I was disappointed with this story. An FBI agent going undercover as a vampire – I thought it was a really good idea that had real potential. The story though moved way too fast for me. There were no details or build-up, only action. For example, the killing of the vampire nest was mentioned in passing and it seemed more important than the time it got. It didn't have any suspense or back story to it.

Reviewer: appoloin (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 08:11 PM · On: A Problem with Authority

i wouldn't allow myself to put a coauthor on this because authors write stories, i just came up with an idea i thought would be cool. am i right?

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 05:34 PM · On: Clash of the Species

Deal or No Deal ??? okay, Armaita....good short tale....now put that tricky mind of yours to getting Dean out of this deal.....
Enjoyed all the bureaucracy in this one.......

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 05:24 PM · On: A Problem with Authority

okay Appice was with black sabbath right..drums..? and was Newsted a guitarist in metallica....??....hope so, not sure...
Good tale so far.....sounds like KYLE went DEEP COVER...now that's being a real FED bloodsucker.....

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 04:52 PM · On: A Problem with Authority

Interesting! What a sacrifice to become a vamp. Enjoyed this, it's different to anything i've read so far.)
Fantasy

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