Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
happier?? maybe in some respects...but now we have this demon Celia to deal with, Jen....Not happy at all about where this will lead...........
Author's Response: Hmmm, yeah, I guess you're right. Well, at least Dean got his cheeseburger! Hehe. Don't worry, the story has a happy ending! Thanks for the R&R Jude!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 2
Jen, the idea of the hellhound attack and Dean still being somewhat viable is giving me hope...
Author's Response: Glad to do so! As much as I enjoy writing the sad scenes, I didn't want to make everyone cry all the time! :-) Thanks for the R&R Jude!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 3
Have a cheeseburger with all the trimings, and chocolate cake to follow - great update to a great story. Please update soon, need to know what's going on!
Author's Response: That sounds full on awesome, lol, now I'm going to have to go buy a cheeseburger and cake! Update should hopefully be up sometime next week!
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
Yes much happier and I have to take the time to commend you for a couple of great one liners! 1)“Dude, the chicks dig the puppies, not the dogs.”
“They wanna German shepherd, nah’some ugly lil’ rat lookin’ thing.” 2)“Love doesn’t wait Sammy,” 3)“I wanna eat a goddamn cheeseburger.” oh and this little beauty..“Every woman looks familiar to you.” Not to mention the touching moment of Bobby talking to John talk about heart wrenching. Looking forward to another great update Jen! -Bex
Author's Response: What can I? I love the one liners! I enjoyed the thought of Bobby looking for John's help so that was a somewhat fun scene to write.(Haha, sad things are fun now?) I'll be working on the next chapter soon! Thanks for the review Bex!
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
Amazing! Please update soon. Is dean ok? Why did the crd let them go? Answers, we need answers!
Author's Response: Chapter 3 is almost done and you will have your answers I promise!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
Beautiful memories of the boys and the ' I'll never let you go' line being repeated. I like that the paramedic is called John and the nod to the SPN Origins comic as well, when Sam asks about what happened to their mom. This is a great fic - and I wish you loads of luck with the readers choice. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Glad you liked this chapter, there were so many diffrent things I could have gone with but decided to go with memories.
I love irony in a story so I thought I'd throw some in there, glad you picked up on it!
Thanks for the luck, I'm gonna need it! Thanks for the review it means a lot!
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
Long night here in my end of the world, so I'm not sure I can do justice to an insightful review, but wanted to say nice job and looking for more at least...
Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R! Ch.3 should be up soon!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ooo, like it a lot! Surprised RED left Dean alive but hey thats a good thing. Don't leave us hanging too long. Update soon.
Author's Response: Yeah, the reason Dean is still alive will be said later on. Don't worry! Ch. 3 should be up soon!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow....that's some pretty heartbreaking stuff you have going on! I kept tearing up! Nice work! ~Kayla
Author's Response: I feel so bad for making people sad...lol I guess that means I'm doing what I'm supposed to be. Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the R&R!
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 2
OH MY GOSH, OH MY GOSH, OH MY GOSH! I friggin' love you for writting this story its the most amazing of stories I've ever read..seriously. The last two chapters have been some of the best writing I've ever read, man you've got such a talent..and you're story is so sad and touching everything I adore! Talk to you later! -Bex
Author's Response: Wow Bex! I'm speechless! It makes me so happy to know you like the story! Thank you so much for the wonderful review, you've really made my day!
Thanks SO much!
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 2
Soooooooooooooo awesome, Jen...love it, even though it's making me tear up....just dust in my eye, really...lol, can't wait for another chapter! Love to see where this is going...
Author's Response: Sorry that dust got in your eye maybe you should wash it out...lol...thanks for the R&R Shiny! I appreciate it!
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow. Sooooo sad. I'll give you a few smiles!!! And um... heartwrenching sobs...poor Dean...but happy ending? Very good!
Author's Response: Chapter 2 should be up sometime tomorrow, the happiness wont follow until chapter 3 but it should follow after ch.2 by a day maybe two, so don't worry! Happy is coming! Thanks for the R&R Shiny!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice job with this one pass, so love that Dean smiled at the end. Really very sweet - thanks for the read K
Author's Response: Glad you're liking this one! I couldn't help but think that Dean would smile. Thanks for the read and review!
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Woah man I'm a sucker for Dean being the tragic hero. Not alot of stories have the ability to make me want to just sit and cry but this one did. The end sentence was pure heartbreak man, just brilliant and I loved how you used the Beatles song yesterday. I thought it was a sad song before but now..well I don't think I'll be able to listen to it the same way. Wonderful! Thanks also for reviewing my story :) -Bex
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad it's one of the few that makes you want to cry. Wait...I mean that as a good thing, lol. I'm glad you liked the song, I was listening to it when I wrote the story and thought it would just fit so well.
Thanks for the kind review!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay so Dean's not gonna die...hmm I guess I'll stay tuned to see where you go with this...Very well written btw you had me all teary eyed with the boys ...oh the angst...Great job...keep it up and good luck in the reader's choice ;o) Gengen
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind review! It means a lot! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Reviewer: DEANFAN (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
That made me cry! I love it, please please please update soon! I'm glad Dean doesn't die.
Author's Response: I'm sorry I'm making so many people cry...lol...I promise to update as soon as possible! Yeah, I'm glad Dean does die too, lol.
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
I can absolutely feel Sam and Dean reaching for each other in this, beautifully done
Author's Response: Thank you so much, it makes my day to know people have enjoyed this so far!
Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, what a tragically sad story. beautfully written. I am very impressed! Am also almost in tears here. Please tell me this is not the end of the story. Kari
Author's Response: Nope, there's more to this story! At first it was going to be a oneshot but I couldn't let it end that way, Dean's too good to die. Hehe! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Good beginning! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R! Next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Geez, Jen, starting my morning by crying into my coffee....not a great start on a Friday........as long as I don't fry my now wet keyboard Yep, just like that is how dean would do it....soooo sad, so touching...so nicely done
Author's Response: Aww I'm sorry Jude, your coffee didn't taste funny I hope! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
OK... I really liked this chapter. Sam 's in such pain that it brings tears . Dean thinks he's doing the right thing..bull. I like how you created the pictures-very good, very vivid, very Winchester. My only question...light as Dean's fading..???.... Excellent start-I'm glad you said he didn't die. Pleasre update soon. I have a few suspicions about this. BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks so much for the gracious review! Chapter 2 should be up soon!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG, that was so good! out of control Sam and the phone call...wow! I can't see how you are going to save Dean but I can't wait to find out:)
Author's Response: SO glad you're liking it! Hopefully chapter 2 will be up soon!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
Argghhh - Im so glad you just said ...and don't worry everyone, Dean doesn't die!!!!! Thank you for that. Awesome start and I'll be looking out for updates of this. Very emotional story. Cant wait !!
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want people thinking I was gonna kill him off. I mean, I love him too much to do that. Chapter 2 should be up soon!
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awwww...poor Sammy. Nice start
Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R!
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