Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 1- A Background
i love this chapter it's brilliant how you've written when they were younger.
Author's Response: Hi Sharx, you sly girl...Thanks for the review sweetie. When I first wrote this, even before post, I knew you'd liked it because they are so young. Lol Love you, Schelz. | |
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 2- Remembering when...
WoW - Missed this post all together schelz, you snuck it by us. I love the voices you've created for the teens, they're all so real, you have a real ability with dialogue, especially being able to convey their ages. Well done schelz - awesome!
Author's Response: Awww, Lou, you don't know much your kind words mean to me. The grin won't go away...Love that you love the voices I've created. I think the dialogue has always been the easiest part for me, it's the rest I struggle with. Lol Thanks again Lou, Love your reviews, You're awesome! Schelz | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1- A Background
wots up fantasy i know u havn't heard 4m me in a while sorry bout dat.but i jus read this chapter and it is tops.i really like the bit where they broke the bed and then let isaac think it was him,now he has to get camyll a new bed.lol.great. agoldenrose XxXx
Author's Response: Aww, thanks Golden. I know, where've you been? The bed thing happened when I was young, my brother broke his bed and then my aunt came and sat on it. It was hilarious, he made her think she did, coz he knew she wouldn't get in trouble. Lol | |
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 1- A Background
Schelz, glad to see you posted!!!! I'm liking this story, it shows a very original view of the character of the boys as teenagers. And would I be right to think there are certain bits of Camyll that are based on you? lol
Author's Response: Sooo glad you're liking the story Bb. Hmm mm...You would be right. lol, I've always been a tom-boy, rolling around wrestling with my brother's. I tried makeup once and hated it, Lol. I only doll up for special occasions... Thanks for your review Louy:) Love ya. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
oh my gosh that's horrible! i knew it was coming, but that dean was the one...omg that's so...you totally just broke my heart.
Author's Response: Aww...I'm sorry. (glad too) It means I have succeeded in passing on an emotion. Thanks for the review Magos, means alot:) | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
Please don't say it's over. Awwwwwwwwww, my heart hurts:( When Dean wanted John to make him that promise. And when Sam sat in the car...heart breaking stuff. You write with such string emotions, it's wicked! You're talented. Kitten
Author's Response: Aww m8:) That means alot, I tried my best to put real emotions in this and I'm glad it paid off. I love reviews with wicked, awesome and talented in it. Lol Thnx again. | |
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
That's just sad.
Author's Response: Thanks for review...always appreciated coming from u:) Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.
I'm at work right now, it's 5 to midnight. Aww, that is beautiful, young and in love. What could be better than that? Dean and Camyll are really cute, this is a good chapter. Don't like Isaac or John though. Kitten
Author's Response: Thanks for ur review Kit:) Glad you find Dean and Camyll cute:) I love John...sorry can't help it. Lol | |
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.
It's a wonder Dean ever had sex again after that...lol. An interesting look at him at a younger age
Author's Response: Lol, thanks so much for ur review Laura, it means the world to me:) Congatulations...on the halloween challenge, very creepy. Love Schelz. xxx | |
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
I have to say my heart is literally broken....i cried, i really did. I really feel wot he has felt and i can imagine wot camyll felt just b4 she shut her eyes and went to meet her creator. This is heartbreaking. But a great story no doubt!
Author's Response: Oh...You're making me wanna cry now. How could I do this Dean...I feel his pain, I really do. Thankds for the review, I am really glad you think it's great. Fantasy | |
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.
Awwwwwwwwwww. This is so romantic....and so much like teenagers....so true. and i can actually feel wot they feel. This is good....sorry i've got to go.....i want to read on- find out wot happens next.
Author's Response: thank you, glad to see you weren't daydreaming on this...Get it, daydreamer...Nah. O-kay. ur review is appreciated. Fantasy | |
Reviewer: Freedom (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
It was your very catchy title that pulled me in, and now I am extremely glad I read it. Very sad and heart-wrenching short tale. I love the emotion you gave Dean, you pulled it off very well. I only wish you could have more of Camyll stories, I reckon she'd be a kick ass hunter! Great story, thanks for the read. I had to give you a 10 Freedom*
Author's Response: Aww, thank you freedom, I try to go for titles that will catch a reader's eye. I guess I succeeded in ur case. Lol Thank you for the 10, loving it. Fantasy | |
Reviewer: Freedom (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.
I like this a lot, very curious as to what will happen next. Camyll and Dean seem to have a string relationship and genuine feelings. Camyll's father sin't very nice is he? He should leave then alone. Great chapter. Freedom*
Author's Response: Uh-oh! the next chap, grab the tissues will you. Thanks for ur review freedom. Fantasy | |
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.
mean ol john and isaac tearing the 2 young lovers apart
Author's Response: I know, adults don't always understand unfortunately:( Thanks for ur review Zerobabe:) | |
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
great story and sooooo sad i could feel deans heart break
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. Means alot that others like my work:) Poor Dean, I just wanna give him a hug. Thanks for the review. Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
Hun, you're not gna leave it like this are you? Camyll is a great character. Plsssssss...is there any hope? I gave you a ten for emotion, it was executed brilliantly!!!
Author's Response: Aww Suga, thank u so much. *does a cartwheel.* ...Ouch! There is hope, I have a story to this, a continuation in present time years after Camyll's accident. I wrote it before this one. Glad you liked Camyll so much, and thanks for the ten. Fantasy. Mwah | |
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
dude that was sad.
Author's Response: I know, believe it or not I was quite emotional when I wrote this:( Thanks for ur review bookworm, glad it caught ur attention. Fantasy | |
Reviewer: nicky199172 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.
plz write more i want to know what happens next :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Chapter 2 is up and finished. Hope u enjoy it:) Schelz | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
OMG, I didn't see that cming! No, my eyes are burning, I can feel the tears. Poor Dean:( I love Camyll. Fantastic!!! so beautifully tragic.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot Brownsuga! I get so excited wen I see words like Fantastic or Awesome in the reviews:) Really glad you read and reviewed. Schelz | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.
What a sweet relationhip between, Dean and Camyll. It was really funny when Camyll told him she loved him and he was like "Me too." Good chapter, on to the next.
Author's Response: Aww thanks Brown.s, glad you liked it and thnk for reviewing this. Schelz | |
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
it's really sad, poor Dean...
Author's Response: I know it's really sad:( Thanks for review fredo. Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
Wow thats a hard lesson to learn . Many thanks Lorraine
Author's Response: | Thanks for your review sweet:) | |
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
This is soooo sad, but beautiful too, and kind of shocking. You gotta write something happy now though okay? Awesome story!!! I'll read more of your work! ~Louy
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much Bb. I do in fact have a continuation of this and I do plan to post after Secrets is done. Thank you again, so excited you want to read more of my work:) Love schelz | |
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
Sad ending! Those poor Winchesters.
Author's Response: I know, I got emotional when I finished it. Yep, Poor boys:( | |
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself
*tear* beautiful job, wonderful tie-ins, amazing story
Author's Response: Thank you so much sweet:) I'm sad it ended that way, but glad it did the tick. Love schelz | |
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