Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 2- Remembering when...

Haha poor Bobby getting the run around by those kids..I loved this chapter especially Dean getting knee'd in the 'family jewels' hilarious and the slightly more tender moments when Camyll gets into bed with Dean cos she was scared.

Amazing!

-Bex

Author's Response:

Wow! Thanks for the rating Hun.

It was really fun writing this chapter, very glad it paid off, even happier that you found the parts I intended to be funny, hilarious!

Amazing...that's how I feel now, having read ur lovely review.

Schelz

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself

very sweet, very sad, Schelz..... poor Camyll and her lonely father....

Poor Dean such a heavy burden to carry

LOVE your BANNER so simple...such a pretty picture...  

 

Author's Response:

Aww, I know, this is very sad...I feel sorry for Dean, it's a terrible burden to carry, sooo young too.

Thank you, thank you!!! It was my first attempt to make a banner and I was struggling all day to get it up. Lol

Nothing creative, but then Dean in the rain is enough...Lol

Thanks for reading, thanks for the *****

Schelz

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 3- In The Smokey Mountains

I guess poor Terry was dead...is that right, Schelz..??..poor guy.....

Camyll is hardheaded isn't she ??

Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Terry is dead.

You're defo right, Camyll is very hard headed, she's lucky it worked out this time.

Thanks for the review Jude:)

Schelz

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 1- A Background

great start, Schelz...really looking forward to where this is headed

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks Jude:)

Hope you enjoy the rest, thanks for the stars sweet!

Schelz

Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 3- In The Smokey Mountains

So glad you decided to go add these three chaps, they complete Camyll. Now I know who she is, I really want her character to stick around.

What do you mean you can't write action??? There's a bit in this chapter. Lol

Camyll is too brave for her won good, lucky she has hunky, sexy, lovely boyfriend like Dean to protect her. Hahaha

Loved it, gimme more Camyll and Dean, together I feel they really work.

Don't worry, I will be checking the strories you told me about, I wrote em down. Lol

Kitten

Fantastic.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the stars Kit!!! I'm glad you feel like you know Camyll and want her to stick around. Who wouldn't a protector looking like Dean. Lol So happy you fell like they work! Schelz

Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 1- A Background

No wonder Isaac's so damn bitter, his wife left him for another woman. Lol

I love Camyll, she's as tough as Dean and I think it's really funny how she's annoying him.

Sam is adorable...Sam covered his eyes with his chubby hands. "Uh-oh, not again."

I love that, and it shows that this isn't the fight rough and tumble the pair have had. Great addition.

Kitten

Author's Response:

Lol Yeah, Camyll is tough. Glad you liked it...Yes, that is what I wanted to show, Camyll and Dean fighting, it's something their both used to. Thanks alot Schelz

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 2- Remembering when...

Hi schelz, a really sweet chapter well done

Lorraine

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you liked it:) Love Schelz

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 3- In The Smokey Mountains

Great work Schelz.

I dont usually read the romance stories as I'm more of an action fan but you've done a great job with this.

Creating new characters and making them believable is always hard and you've managed to make them very real.

Well done mate!

Author's Response:

I can't tell you how happy I am right now, to have anyone like something you have written, it's an indescriable feeling:)  Getting reviews like this shows me how much I've learned since being on this site. Thanks so much Lou:) It always means alot to hear what you think.  I am glad my romantic fic got your attention and made you believe the characters. Thanks for the stars. XXXX Love Schelz.

Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 2- Remembering when...

Great chap!

I bet Camyll won't be trying makeup again in a hurry. Lol

It's really sweet how Sam sort of follows Camyll around, but Dean has no interest...

Love this fic

Author's Response:

No, I wouldn't if I got rejected like that, but then again, you wouldn't catch me makeup. Lol That's what I like about the boys, they always like the opposite, Dean wants a quickie, Sam want's a relationship. Dean wants a juicy burger and Sam wants a sandwich. Thanks for stopping by Schelz

Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.

Mean ol' John!

I'm feeling very sorry for Camyll, I wish later on when they grow up I'd see a steamy scene between them, Dean and Camyll are just amazing together

Keep up the success, baby

Author's Response:

Thanks hun, I agree, I think Camyll and Dean are great together too. I really love rough, tom boy girls...and Dean hasn't had that, a girl as strong as him or as mouthy would be hard for him to accept. Schelz

Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 2- Remembering when...

Can I be Camyll so I can get to spend the night in the Winchesters bedroom?!

God that was amazing, great chemistry between the boys and Camyll, something rare to find in a Het story

Keep up the good work

Author's Response:

LOL!!! Thanks Jay, glad you think it's amazing, music to my ears coming from you. Schelz

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.

i love this chapter it shows Deans soft side oh and about the third chapter dont worry i've read it already. 

Author's Response:

Sup, mini-me Glad you loved this chapter, I like to peel away Dean's hard shell. Well...I like trying. Lol Love ya, Schelz